Mehbeer SS Humdard mehboob hota hai ( Chapter 5 , page 7) Completed!! - Page 3

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: lasyap3

This was really good ! Do PM me next time ;)



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hey guys... sorry for the late update. hope you enjoy this part and please hit like and comment to tell me whether you liked it or not


Chapter 2

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They all took the flight...in kerala it was night... At the resort.. At the reception... They all went to their rooms..abeer and meher were waiting...

M. Hello...my friend booked two rooms with the name of Mrs. Malhotra and mr. Malhotra

R. Let me check... Uhhh... Ma'm... Theres only one room booked... With the name of mrs and mr malhotra...

M. And A. What????

A. No problem ... Give us a separate room now..

R. We cant... All rooms are booked...

M. Ufff...

A.( to meher) lets go then...

M. Where?

A. To the room... Come...

And meher was staring at him like a statue... He didnt created a scene... And followed abeer
to their room... They entered the room...and it was a honeymoon
suite... Decorated with white and red candles and with roses on the
bed...

Both meher and abeer were shocked...

A.uhhh ... Lets sleep...

And he went towards the bed... And made a pillow line dividing the bed... A

A. Ok... So ... This is your side.. And this is mine...

M. Alright...

Abeer started removing his t shirt... Meher got hell shocked on. what was he doing... He used to do that before the accident... It was his habbit to sleep shirtless... But .. After so much time ... Seeing him like this... She rembeted those days...

Flashback starts...

Abeer removes his t shirt... And meher is lying on the bed... abeer... Sits on the bed... And ... Shakes meher...

A. Oh... Meri meher... So gayi kya????

And meher turns to see him shirtless...

M. Nahi...bas aise hi...

And abeer rests his head on the pillow ... And looks at meher... Admiring her beauty ... meher... Softly caresses his face ... And abeer closes his eyes to feel her touch... And hugs meher tightly... Meher hugs him back resting her head on his bare chest...

Flashback ends...

M. What r u doing/???

A. What do u mean by what r u doing??" Im taking off my t shirt..

M. I know that ... But...

A. Ohhh... Dont be ashamed baby... People say youre my wife.. So... No worries... Relax... ( and he gave her a naughty smile)

Meher got really angry but... She just let him be ...And after a while... They slept...

In the morning...all the pillows were on the floor... And... Only one pillow was there... In which abeer and meher were sleeping... Abbers hand was on mehers waist... Pulling meher towards him...And ... her back was touching his chest... He had her locked in his arms... So tightly...like she was hers

The sunrays fell on Mehers face... And she slowly opened her eyes... Finding herself stuck in his arms... She tried to move... But couldnt... She blushed heavily... Although it wasnt
the first time he was doing this... But after the accident... After
his distance ... This was the first time she slept so close to him...
In his arms... Feeling his body so close to hers...

She slowly turned to face him... And was lost in him... Seeing him sleeping ... He was lookinh
Just like a baby... She gently touched his face... Moving towards his
lips... Those lips from where all those beautiful and soothing words
once came out... Those lips with which he used to kiss her ... All
those moments were gone...

In that moment... Abeer woke up... And ... After seeing meher infront
of him... And how he had held her... He released her ...
Shocked... And confused... Which is why he got up from the bed without
saying a word...

They got ready... In a a complete ambience of discomfort... And gathered with their band and nishi mam outside the hotel... There were two cabs... And nishi instructed to the band to go in one cab... And abeer meher and she going in another... Abeer and meher wanted to protest but couldnt...

Nishi intentionally ran to take the front seat ... And so abeer and meher will have to sit together behind... Which they did... Again... There was pin drop silence... And nishi couldnt take that ...

N. Are yaar... Yeh itna sanatta kyu hai??? Muh mein dahi jama ke rakha ha kya???

M. No... No... Nishi mam... Are All the arrangements done ?????

N. Yes... There done... Oye abeer... Since when do you became so serious And silent???

A. Since you sent the guys in that car leaving me here alone...with serious people...

And saying this abeer saw meher.. Who saw him with angry eyes... Like she understood that the comment went on her... But she didnt said anything...

It was a long journey... Meher was feeling sleepy... Abeer saw that... And gave her support with his hand ... And when this wasnt enough... He slightly let her head rest on his shoulder... Meher comforted herselg ... And she put her hand on his waist... Holding it tighly... And fell asleep in a side hug position... Abeer couldnt take his eyes off meher...

Few strands of hair were falling on her face.. ... And he gently... So as not to wake herup... He tucks them behing her ear

After a while... Meher had a dream ... Which she knew it wasnt a dream but sth that happened time ago...and she started to move in discomfort... Tightening her grip on his waist

Flashback

...

M. Abeer... Slow down... !!! Please... Abeer ...

A. ...meher relax.. Nothing will happen... !

M. Please abeer... Im really afraid of speed... Please slow down a bit...

And the next thing she remembered was being in the hospital... Her eyes full of tears and her hand fractured... Without abeer...

Dr. Mrs malhotra... Your husband has had a severe accident... And he had numourous injuries ... Specially on his head ...and due to that... He.. Doesnt remember certain things... So...

M. What???

Dr. For example... He has forgotten his marriage...

And there meher had an tremendous shock... She had an emotional break down ...

<p>Flashback ends...




Edited by heartbroken1 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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NYC update

I have a doubt did abir knew mehar being his wife as u mention that he said "people calls u my so called wife"?
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Originally posted by: coolishparul

NYC update

I have a doubt did abir knew mehar being his wife as u mention that he said "people calls u my so called wife"?



Yes he knows that she is his wife but doesnt want to admit it... As he doesnt love her... But as u could see in this chapy .. Hes falling for her
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Lovely chapter !
Thanks dear !
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thanks a lot for the feedback!
Edited by heartbroken1 - 10 years ago
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hi guys, after so much time , im here with the update , i hope you enjoy it , please like and leave your feedback 😃😃😃⭐️

Chapter 3

few tears escapes from her eyes , And abeer noticed that , he couldn't help himself from wiping her tears with his fingers, which made meher woke up, she realized her posicion , her hand on his waist and her head on his chest, so she moved away from him .

A. tum theek toh ho na meher ?

M.. haan .. haan mein theek hoon.

They all reached the location, a beautiful lush green field with trees surrounding it ,a bridge , and the most important thing , the place where abeer was going to record his song , there was a chair for him , and their instruments were there. They prepared all the cameras and the song recording was about to start, when mahers friend , the business man Maneer came there and hugged meher, really tight and for a long time , even meher didn't liked it as she was trying to free herself from his hug.

M.. maneer , thanks a lot oft this opportunity , it really means a lot to me

Maneer. my pleasure meher 8 and he takes mehers hand in his and tries to kisses it )

Abeer looked at that , he felt an weird emotion, he was getting really red in jealousy .

Abeer started recording his brand new song . After the wrap up , maneer congratulated abeer and

Maneer. guys,... after this fantabulous recording ... I am throwing a party tonight at the hotel as my ad is one of the ads that runs when abeers show is on tv, so , I think there should be a party !!!!!!!!!

And they all went to the hotel to get ready.

At night

Abeer and meher were in the same room . Abeer was in the washroom and mehar was getting ready in front of the mirror, she was wearing a baby pink and white anckle lenght gown. It started raining heavily , and meher looked at the huge window ,

M. ( in her mind ) i hope it slows down when were ready.

In that moment . Abeer comes out of the washroom wearing a formal suit and light blue shirt and meher turns to see him . He gets stunned by seeing meher , she was looking like an angel in that white and pink gown with soft curls in her hair.

And , without taking his eyes off her he took his tie , which was on the bed , and tries to wear it , but , with hus eyes stuck on meher and his mind trying to control his emotions and feelings , he couldnt .

Meher saw that , and came towards him , and taking his tie from his hands ,staring his eyes time to time , she helped him to tie it .

The stormy noises increased and by mistake , something fell which made her feel afraid and she suddenly hugged abeer. He stood there shocked for few seconds , but, eventually , he slowly hugged her back .

Zara zara behekta hain mehekta hain

Aaj to mera tan badan

Main pyaasi hoon mujhe bhar le apni baahon mein

Zara zara behekta hain mehekta hain

Aaj to mera tan badan

Main pyaasi hoon mujhe bhar le apni baahon mein

Hai meri kasam tujhko sanam door kahin na jaa

Yeh doori kehti hain paas mere aaja re

He carresed her back to calm her down . Meher broke the hug realizing what she just did, and tried to go away from him , but, when she turned around , abeer grabbed her forearm and pulled her towards him , and she collided with his chest, they could feel each others warm breath , and mehers heart was beating really fast. with her hand on his chest, she slowly looked up and saw that hes looking at her .

yuhi baras baras kaali ghata barse

Hum yaar bheeg jaaye is chaahat ki baarish mein

Meri khuyli khuli lato ko suljaaye

Tu apni ungliyon se main to hoon isi khwaayish mein

Sardi ki raaton mein hum soye rahe ek chaadar mein

Hum dono tanha ho na koi bhi rahe is ghar mein

he moved his hand to her waist , that sent her shivers to her body, some stadns of hair were covering mehers face, he tucked them behind her ear slowly , and while doing so , touched mehers face as well, she closed her eyes due to his proximity and lowered her face.

Zara zara behekta hain mehekta hain

Aaj to mera tan badan

Main pyaasi hoon mujhe bhar le apni baahon mein

Aaja re aa re

abeer slowly with his hand on her chin and lifted her face , she opened her eyes and looked at him , abeer gently carresed her face , she closed her eyes to feel his touch and then opened her eyes , abeer tightened his grip on her waist .

Tadpaye mujhe teri sabhi baatein

Ek baar ay deewani jhootha hi sahi pyaar to kar

Main bhooli nahin haseen mulakaatein

Bechain karke mujhko mujhse yun na pher nazar

Roothega na mujhse mere saathiyan yeh vaada kar

Tere bina mushkil hain jeena mera mere dil mein

Abeer, started to lean forward, meher satrted feeling his breaths on her face, really close , their noses also touched now , abeer looked at her lips and he leaned more closer and was just few mm away from her lips


Zara zara behekta hain mehekta hain

Aaj to mera tan badan

Main pyaasi hoon mujhe bhar le apni baahon mein

Hai meri kasam tujhko sanam door kahin na jaa

Yeh doori kehti hain paas mere aaja re

Aaja re aaja re aaja re

And the mehers phone rang, and abeer got back to his senses, and loosen his grip on meher and she she went to pick the phone, it was maneer

M.. kahan ho tum meher , sab log tumhara aur abeer ka intezaar kar rahen hai

Meh. sorry maneer , bas hum abhi nikal rahe hain, who bahut baarish pad rahi thi toh , abhi aa rahe hain hum.

M.. ok , take care

Meher, ya bye.

M.. ya.

and she cut the call,

abeer. ( in his mind ) yeh main kya kar raha tha , main toh usse ... haan who meri biwi hai ... apr main... toh ,, usse pyaar nahi karta hoon, ... ya... ab karne laga hoon, yeh main kya karne ja raha tha.. usse dekh kar mujhe kya hone laga hai, kyun ek alag hi bechini hoti hai , kyun . ?

Precap . Maneer tries to dance with meher abeer jealous, mehbeer dance , mehbeer stuck in highway in rain , mehbeer rain romance .

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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
Such a lovely update
Loved it

Amazing and beautiful

Such a cute and romantic

Thanks for PM
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Originally posted by: Asheley

Such a lovely update

Loved it

Amazing and beautiful

Such a cute and romantic

Thanks for PM



Thank you very much 😃

Im glad you liked it 😃 ⭐️
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Posted: 10 years ago
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It was awesome update
Loved it to the core
When will abeer accepts her
Eagerly waiting to read more
Please do continue soon
Nd thanks for the pm

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