Mehbeer SS Humdard mehboob hota hai ( Chapter 5 , page 7) Completed!! - Page 2

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Great start! Can't wait to read more, please continue with it
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Suprb update my dr.cntnue updatng soon
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Hey guys... im back with the chapter . hope you enjoy it... and please do hit like and leave your feedback !!!!!!!!!


Chapter 1

... She got up...saw the beautiful garden trough ther window... and got ready... on te other hand... abheer got ready .. and came in the dining room...

  1. meher.. nashta banna diya ?????

M.. yes abheer...just two minutes...

A.. sure...

Meher came with the breakfast... and they both had breakfast... silently... not even a single noise... meher didn't said anything to abheer... not even good morning... and nor did abheer uter a word... this was their life since the acident took place... abheer silence was indeferent... but mehers silence was wanting to talk but coulnt types...

abheer got up...

A.uhh... if you want... I can drop you... im mean... we work in the same place...

M.. yeah... sure...

meher wasa shokced at first... he never asked to pick her up... even though she worked as the ceo of this cof his channel... but today ... he did...how... she was jus tleft astoniched there... and soon abheer and mehers common friedn nisar called meher,...

N..mein aa raha hoon tujhe pick up karne ,... tu ready rehna ...

M.. are yaar.. sun... aaj pehli baar.. pehli baa abheer ne mujhe drop karne ka bola... I cant believe it... its like a drem... he told me if I could go with him... ill met you at the office caf and then well talk...

N.. fineyaar... see you take care!!!!!!!

M..bu bye!!!!

and meher dstood up... he was waiting for her at the door... meher came there..

A.. toh... should we leave.. ?

M.. yes sure...

A.. ok then lets go... after you...

M ..thnakas... ( ... she was stil shocked by her behavior )

They drived to work... afeter a tiring dayb of work... at vening... nisar met meher at the caf...

NiN.. so .. he droped you...

M.. yes nisar.. I cant believe.. nisar.. I really want him.. to at least remember who am I ... tha tim his wife... I really reallylove him...

N.. just give him some time... he will sure... remember .. don't lose patience.. ... keep hope...

M.. Hope is what i have nisaar... Only hope is left...

At that moment nisaar had a phone call from tony ... And he left from there...

and then... Meher had to go on a meeting ...

In the meetong... Whivh... Surprisingly abheer was attending...

M. Hello good evening wvryone... I would luke to tell you sth very important... Our channel is picking up fastly... And ... I had an offer today. . From my best friend... Maneer... And the offer is abheer singing outdoors in a beautiful lush green location... In kerala... So ... We have a loys of work to do to prepare tge trip... and that to ...asap... Because we have to shoot that tomorrow morning and... I hope you dont have a problem abheer

A. So... My band is going to be shooting ib kerala... Not bad ceo...

M. So... Get to work...evryone...

When the cinference room was slmost empty... Abheer was waiting for the ceo to get up and leave...

M. Whats wrong... Abheer???? Why r you staring at me like yhis????

a. No... Im just waiting... So we could go home together...

M. What happened... You suddnly...

Abheer got up and went close to meher... She kept staring at him... Like what was he doing type look... And he bent down... And noe...their faces were just some mm apart... Mehe could feel abheers warm breaths... As well was abheer could feel her female scent...

A. Youre looking too beautiful... In this white dress... And this hairstle really siits ypu...now come on...

He said..and winked at her... She got up amd folowed abhhee to the parking lot...

In the car...while driving...

A. You wanna have dinner in a restaurant tonight??

M. Uhh... Ok...

A. Lets go the gulmaman grand ... Its my all time favourite...

M. ya ..mine too...you use to tale me there when we ... ( and she stopped... And her eyes got wet )

A. What ??? What were you saying...???

M. No nothing...

A. O...k...

They reached the hotel... Abheer ordered...

A. And meher you ...what will you habe???

M. No... You order today...

A. Ok...

And he ordered... Meher looked at him strangely... He had remembered hwr favourite dishes...

A. Ummm... Why r u loking at me like that???..Like i have done done sth bad... You told me to order so... I did...

M. No...no...no... Its not about ypu... Its. ... Wel... So you have to get ready for tomorrow...

A. Yes... But it will not be that much...

M. Ya...

They had dinner... In between abheer ate... He was staring glances of maher... And smiling ... Abhher was trying his best to befriend meher... That his so called wife...

And then thet left... In the house... Abhheer went for a hpt shpwer... Meher rembered that she left some important papers in abhers room...

Just when meher entered his room ... He got out of the bathroom shirtless abd in his casual white pants... With his broad shoulders..and full toned body... With those water dropltes on his chest... Meher was astonished... She just coyldnt take her eyes off him...

A. Ummm... U here/??????

Meher was stading still... She didnt respond to abheer...

A. Hello...!!; meher!!!!

M. Uh... Um. ... What???

A. What??? What r u doing herr/??

M. Uhh.. I ws... Herr... Because of... Because of ...( and she saw the documents on his nighttable...and went to pick it up...) ... The documents...

And she stumbled and aboyt to fell ... When abherr grabbed her waist and pushed her to the bed... It was abheer above meher... Mehers fave was hidden against his bare wet chest... She could feel the manly cologne ... She slowly moved her head up... To find herself... Abbhe was above her... Abher was staring at her dark brown eyes... And meher remembered what abheer use to do to her when they newly got married...

Flashback starts

M. ( abheer shiryless and wet and in huis jeans ... Freshly came out of the bathroom after taling a shower at night and trying to catch meher who was running away from him...) abheer!!!!; no... No...!!;abheervplease!!!;

A. No nk...baby... Not today... !!! Today youre gpnna get...

And he pushed her on the bed... With him above her. ...

A. What???!!; tired of running away from me!;;/?? Uhhh??!!!

M. You... !!!

And abheer got closr yo her and kissed her cheek...

Flashback ends...

... Meher didnt have words... abheer was lost in her beautiful eyes...when meher ...realised their position...and pushed him gently... Abheer came to reality...and meher got up tookthe documents and left running...and abherr was stiing on hus bed...thonking what just happened ...why he didnt gt up immediately... and...after a whipe he went bed .

Precap: flashback accident... Trip romance ...


Sabz13 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
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No one commented yet?! Oh well I'll be the first one, that was a really good update, the story is going very well, but I think it'd be evn be better if u could check over the spelling a little bit. But it's still really good and am waiting for the next part eagerly.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice liked it how many times in a week u will update really loved so will bewaitingfor your updates
Edited by cutieharshitaro - 10 years ago
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thank you sooo much for the encouraging words!!! 😃 and ya ill try to be more aware with the typing mistakes... will try to correct them ..actually time thod akam milta hai na ..toh isliye... par zaroor puri koshish kaungi typo mistake correct karne ki 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
#17
awsum update... gr8 going... update nxt soon waiting eagrly!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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thnak you very much... im really very glad glad you liked it...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update...the romance is sizzling up.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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This was really good ! Do PM me next time ;)

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