ll Dear Arjun ll A Short Story ll Pt. 9 Pg. 23 - Page 13

Originally posted by: kikia

Yuppie finally i've got the update and im the first one to comment,too good...coming to the update,sheets it was just amazing...i super duper loved it...a big thank you to u for the update...it was just fantastic,amazing n very well written...Good job sheets🥳☺️⭐️

RES ! :)

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So glad an update cane right after i freaked out a page back :p

Okay, this really is my favorite FF- so ah this is too perfect!

I freaking LOVE Onir in this FF! Bis comments and actions are hilarious! It's like he hates doing all this but he has to for his bestfriend! Its honestly the cutest thing! Now of only Onir was like this "ew what the heck goes on" guy in the show, things would be so much easier!

I love the little flashback scene! Totally imagined RD in his checkered bw shirt coming behind a glowing in pink Asha so vividly! Ah #fangirlmoment LOL 😳
"Arjun, look at all the stars! They're so beautiful..." "Mmm..." I looked at Arjun and saw him gazing intently at me. "Why are you looking at me like that?" "Am I not allowed to look at you?" "Well... no..." Arjun put wisps of my hair that were flying due to the wind behind my ear. "So, what were you saying about the stars?" "They're beautiful." "So you must be a star." I looked up at him and saw sincerity in his eyes. I brushed his compliment off without getting
emotional. "Not even close. I'm more like the dark sky," I giggled. I felt Arjun wrap his arms around my waist and pull
me backwards towards him. "No," he whispered so gently that I was barely able to hear him. "No?" He put his chin on my shoulder and kissed my
cheek. "You are a star. You're unique, special, beautiful... I could go on and on."

And second favorite part =
Teju ended up pulling me aside. "Woah Purvi, you look messy. What were you doing in Arjun's room, hmmm?" My eyes went wide and I gasped. "Shut up Tej!" I turned away and began walking towards the crowd. I turned my head around and saw Arjun coming out of his room, buttoning up his shirt. His hair was messy with a few fly-aways here and there just like
mine.

LIKE AH I TOTALLY SAW A SUPER UNF LOOKING CAUGHT OFF GUARD ARJUN OMG- like i can see the shiveled RD hair and the signature unbuttoned shirt and the confused look, sorry- cant- help- the-besharmi- thoughts-its-sunday-night L O L

All in all, perfect update!
Happy to know Ovi actually is in love and not with Arjun! Keen to know who this Romil actually is :p


Thank you sheetu! 🤗

Originally posted by: bravearvians

Sheets 🤗 OMG ..! So ovi is preggo with romil's child thank so much sweety *tight hugs* hope ovi's truth vil be out soon and loved Arvi scene alot darling plz plzz update it soon .. Love you !

sheetal amazing update dear just loved it 😳 so ovi's baby is romil's😃 loved arvi's scene...plz update soon...just cnt wait 4 the next part 😊

Originally posted by: arvifan1

sheetal amazing update dear just loved it 😳 so ovi's baby is romil's😃 loved arvi's scene...plz update soon...just cnt wait 4 the next part 😊

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nice...please continue soon...😊

Originally posted by: sunshinesamuef

nice...please continue soon...😊

i totally enjoyed every single bit of both the updates...its so touching i had goosebumps while reading it...awww i cnt even tell u whc was my fav part coz each n every entry in the diary was so unique ...u made my day ...tq so so very much...feel really good after reading it...i cn actually picture them thru ur writings...bravo dear 🥳