Arvi FF: Standing in the Dark||Chapter 3 - Page 3

Originally posted by: ashvikluverrr

heyy sheena..wow...what an amazing part👏
loved this so much...this is is what we wanted to watch post marriage..!
u are hell of a writer ...u write so well..
and all the dialogues of Arjun are just superb...
i mostly loved this one "dobnt even dare to complete that purvi"..loved his arrogance.. 😉
and reading that marriage part was hard..was recalling their marriage episode...
but with arjun acting coldly with both the sisters i was good and laughing the very next second..

plz do continue dear...loved it very much...!

Originally posted by: bonibright

Why???What does OS mean??Sorry,I'm not familiar with all the terms..Plz plz plzz do update..

Originally posted by: aathya

I can forgive my murderer but how can i forgve your murderer? Awsme lines dear.. These lines exactly suits arjun's charcter.. Remember he is angry on soham nt for shootng him he is angry because he kidnapped his life(purvi).. Thanks alot for writng such a beautiful post sheena .. Awsme,superb r very small words to appreciate it..

Originally posted by: WanderingBeauty

An OS means One Shot...It is supposed to have only one part...I can't update this because the way I have ended it, there is no scope of continuation and it will make the story appear extremely odd! Given the number of requests I havereceivedto continue this, I have thought of another way ! Will post it once I have done replying to all.

Originally posted by: gaurav_ankita08

How can i Forget this scene it broke many hearts of Arvians...
That was terrible yaar...
Hey the 1st lines were too awesum...

Originally posted by: nikitagmc

Very beautifully written!!! And I loved the part from Wuthering Heights that you put up in the beginning!!

Originally posted by: ameilia

Sheena wonderful and superb OS.U have managed to capture the emotions of us Arviand and Arjun so well.

Such a lover Arjun is...he feels so bad that Purvi didnt just ruined his happiness but hers as well.

Really loved the anger and frustration in him.

The part when he told her u should call me Jejaji...lmao...so true and it did stung Purvi like a bee.

Ovi still delusional and in gaga land.Really missed the fiery and mean AK that we saw post marriage at Purvi's doorstep.Where the hell is that guy in PR?Glad this Ak will not give up and wants a divorce from Crazy Chick before she turns him Crazy with her rantings.

Good Job Sheena.I hope u continue to write more...u are really good with portraying Arjun's emotions.Nice work👏 and thank you for the pm.

Loved the Introduction...u get 10 gold stars⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️

Originally posted by: gaurav_ankita08

Sheena Your Os has touched my heart...
Great thumbs up for u...👍🏼👏

Originally posted by: bonibright

Superb..The most dreaded scene of PR,for me and I think for all the ARVIANS out here..Hope to see our old AK back,who'll make his PURVI realise what she has done to him n herself..We dont want our ARJUN to become a lovelorn puppy in ur OS,which he has became in PR.We want him not to loose his allure.Please do continue soon.And thanks for the PM..😊

Originally posted by: rithika2012

loved ur os from the bottom of my heart...👏👏👏
U just brought tears in my eyes when arjun said those lines i can forgive for what u have done to me but not for what you have done to urself...😭😭😭 it was really awesome..😃😃😃.