Arvi FF: Standing in the Dark||Chapter 3

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Jagruti

@AnAvidReader

Stunner

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Posted: 12 years ago

#111

Sheena...🤗
meri Usain Bolt...aajkal bohot jyaada furitli hogayi hai tu..itne jaldi update..Red bull ka asar hai kya..😆..?

coming to your update..
Sheena u nailed it..M speechless after reading this part(for the 3rd time..post res kiya tha na)
aur kya bolu...bolne ke liye kuch bacha hi nahi hai..
this part was superb..loved it..
ut was simply awesome..
Ahh and the title is perfect..(u know how much I love this song😳)
this song is perfect for arjun's current situation

Just gonna stand there nd hear me cry thats all right coz I love the way u lie..<3

He ofered her lift..and she rejected his offer..as expected..but him being The Arjun Kirlosker..he knows her very well..so asked her to take help from security staff..smart..love this Angry AK...
ahh no OVi..plz..the best part of your FF is that it is perfect...really wanted this to happen in serial...
Arjun avoiding ALO and also D clan..coz they are also responsible..waah...m loving your FF Sheenu..
and plz spare us ArVians from that so called trip where arjun and ovi are supposed to go..seriously..!
As Amy said u should be one of PR cv's sheena(isse hamara bhi.bhala hoga aur tera bhi😆)..ur a great writer...
and this sulo is proud of you..😛
aa gale lag jaa..RD wale hugs..(tuje to pata hai me apne RD wale hugs kisi ke saath share nahi karti..par yeh tereliye..hume itna fabtastic part diya isliy)

do update soon..🤣( muje pata hai agle update ko abhi bohot tym hai)

Edited by ashvikluverrr - 12 years ago

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WanderingBeauty

@WanderingBeauty

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#112

Originally posted by: ashvikluverrr

@Mrs nahi Miss-😲😲
ayyii sorry...muje toh laga tune Will ke saath shaadi karli..😆
bhul gayi ki tera divorce bhi ho gaya..😆😆
Uff aur kitna tadpayegi...Update kar jaldi..*makes a puppy face*

Shaadi hi nahi hui aur tu divorce ki baat karti hai!!!! 😲
Ho gaya update! Padh le! 😆

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Jagruti

@AnAvidReader

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#113

Originally posted by: WanderingBeauty

<font color="#660066" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="2">Shaadi hi nahi hui aur tu divorce ki baat karti hai!!!! 😲
Ho gaya update! Padh le! 😆</font>

ayyii...Chal jhooti...mujhse mat chupa...muje pata hai tere shaadi aur divorce kebaare me..😆

haan..pata hai tune update kiya..abhi cpass se chuti..so ab padhungi..!!

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WanderingBeauty

@WanderingBeauty

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#114

Originally posted by: ashvikluverrr

ayyii...Chal jhooti...mujhse mat chupa...muje pata hai tere shaadi aur divorce kebaare me..😆

haan..pata hai tune update kiya..abhi cpass se chuti..so ab padhungi..!!

Arre shaadi hone wali thi par hui nahi! Bola tha na tujhe ke Will mujhe chod ke Archu aai ke paas chala gaya!
Jaldi padh aur fir AT me mil!

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WanderingBeauty

@WanderingBeauty

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#115

We are now spamming the FF...🤣

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peachesnplums

@peachesnplums

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#116

*time for peaches to duck for not commenting on the previous one*

let's call it even? 😛

Thanks a lot for the update and the PM Sheena! Didn't know you'll take the hint and work on it fast 😛. You've desribed Arjun's pain and loneliness very well (this Purvi knows her love after all 😉)

He had pinched himself hard, hoping to wake up from his nightmare

How could he hate her when he loved her so much?

"It's either you don't realize or you don't want to realize!

I'm pretty sure it's the latter, delusional people!

He slowly advanced towards her as he felt an eternal string binding him with her, for ever.

Standing in the midst of his family, he still missed a part of his, a large part of his heart which she had taken with her when she had left him.

There's a hole in my soul as you take a little piece of me with you (Bhare Naina song)

"Thank you Uncle," he said, "We would love to go."

😲 what!! Come again please *angry AK style*

So ArMan are clueless in this version as well, not really surprised. Where does Purvi stay these days, still K house? Wonder what her reactions are when she sees Arjun with Ovi (jealous, hurt, hiding her feelings well?). Wasn't Arjun working on getting a divorce (with the 6 months caveat and all). In that case, going with Ovi on a holiday will give mixed signals. Uff, now it feels like you're a PR CV (no no, don't worry, you are much much better, I take my words back!).

Now to see when I get the next update. And will comment on the previous one soon too :)

Thanks again 😊

Edited by peachesnplums - 12 years ago

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WanderingBeauty

@WanderingBeauty

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#117

Hmph! *makes an angry face and then remembers the baseball bat*...Fine! Let's call it even!

Will give a proper reply once I receive the comment on the earlier update! And about mixed signals, you will have to wait and watch...ermm...read!

PS- AK thinks before he acts! Let's see what he has up his sleeves this time!
PPS- Arjun can't get a divorce till Ovi gives him one! I mentioned it somewhere up there!

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peachesnplums

@peachesnplums

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#118

Originally posted by: WanderingBeauty
Hmph! *makes an angry face and then remembers the baseball bat*...Fine! Let's call it even!

Will give a proper reply once I receive the comment on the earlier update! And about mixed signals, you will have to wait and watch...ermm...read!

PS- AK thinks before he acts! Let's see what he has up his sleeves this time!
PPS- Arjun can't get a divorce till Ovi gives him one! I mentioned it somewhere up there!

@PPS: well you expect people to remember everything when you update once in a blue moon *mock angry scowl your way!*

@Bold: dealmaker 😲, don't learn from the characters you write about!

lol, writing comments on previous one now.

Edited by peachesnplums - 12 years ago

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WanderingBeauty

@WanderingBeauty

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#119

Originally posted by: peachesnplums

@PPS: well you expect people to remember everything when you update once in a blue moon *mock angry scowl your way!

@Bold: dealmaker 😲, don't learn from the characters you write about!

lol, writing comments on previous one now.

@PPS-Do I update that irregularly?! 😲
@Bold: Dealmaker! That sounds so like AK!!! And I am inspired by him, in case you wanted to know! 😉

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peachesnplums

@peachesnplums

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#120

She could run away from situation but the reality she wanted to escape from would haunt her forever.

As Amy says, you can run but you cannot hide *mafia movie/ PR track*

She had never known fairy-tales could exist, neither had she known that they could end in disasters.

Self-inflicted one in this case.

Everything that lay in between mattered and she had clutched onto those memories because she knew if she lost them she would lose herself. She missed his laughs, his cute little talks, his fake anger, his pouting faces, his soft touches and every other small thing related to him. He had taught her to love but what she had given him in return'a curse of never being able to place his trust in love again.

Thanks for talking about Purvi's pain, god alone knows how this woman can clam up and keep it closeted. Need one eye lock with Arjun - sachchai chhup nahin sakti banavat ke usuloon se (Truth cannot be hidden with fabricated principles).

"I will move on," she decided in her mind, "I have to!"

Yeah, we'll see about that (I wonder if Arjun would say the same!)

Something I really like in your FF - ArVi are the same soul connected people we have come to know. Despite the betrayal and the lies, they still feel each others' pain before their own.

Thanks for the update.

Good luck with studies :)

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