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Chapter 19: A New Twist to the Tale
April 23rd, 2012: Karanjkar Chawl, 4:30 p.m.

Aah. So yeh jo Vish—Soham hain na—well, he's seriously crazy. Okay, so he's not my problem. I just don't like blaming girls. He didn't tell me before I accepted to move in next door (yes, next door) that he had two—not one but two, girls living with him and his mom. Two! And one just decides that she should come up and flirt with me. I don't work well with other girls! That's why I'm still not married! Even Soham seemed annoyed by her though…
*Flashback: 5 minutes ago*

I was standing out on the porch, finishing off coffee and observing my surroundings, when Soham comes home and starts talking to me. That's when I noticed two girls walking with shopping bags into his house. Except one came back. Then the other followed. And then she made her way here… as did the other.
Kunjal: *smiling* Hi! I see you're new here! Tumko English aata toh hain na?
Soham: *closes eyes and takes a breather* Oh, god.
Viren: Yeah… I understand Engllish. Anyways, Soham—
Kunjal: That's great! What do you do?
Purvi: *rolls her eyes and walks in inside* *Yeh Kunjal bhi na! She doesn't drop a chance to run her mouth!*
Viren: I'm a computer engineer…
Kunjal: Huh! That's great! I just finished med school, and now I'm a doctor. What brings you here though?
Soham: *loud, annoyed sigh*
Viren: Um… just because… I guess. *looks at Soham with an eyebrow raised*
Soham: Um, Kunjal? Don't you think you should be helping Aai inside?
Kunjal: Hmph. *walks inside shooting looks at Soham*
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Viren: Soham!? Woh kaun thi?
Soham: My little sister's friend. Just ignore her. In fact I'll apologize on her behalf.
Viren: *laughs* You're not the only one annoyed….
*End Flashback*
I hope I'll handle myself around her. Weird girl she is… wait. Why was Soham annoyed?
****
Okay, so I had gone to meet Viren, when I saw him talking to that crazy girl. Vish—Soham was there was well, and so was Miss Purvi. But all in all, I found out that Miss Purvi was Vish—Soham's sister. Small world it is. Before today, she was just my senior in office… now she's my best friend's… sister?
****
April 24th, 2012: ADK Industries, 6:00 p.m.
Today, something… bad—no wrong—no weird—no… I don't even know what happened! Everything's just spinning around in my head… or maybe it's me. Am I dizzy? No wait, I'm mad. No— ugh! Because of him I can't even—ugh!
*Flashback: Half an hour ago*
Riya: Purvi, can you take this file to Arjun? He needs to sign it before the 27th.
Purvi: Yeah. Just leave it there…
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(In Arjun's office)
Arjun: Nikhil, but don't you think I should—I mean, I've met her and everything and so—it's perfect! Oh, forget about Teju's silly plans. Who cares—Nikhil…
Purvi: *walks in* *quietly* Seriously sir. Why are you always on the phone when I come in?
Arjun: But Nikhil, it's perfect. Just ignore everything she said. Nikhil—she's Teju. She'll act that way. So what? We can at least try. Don't worry I can get around that. I have my ways don't worry. But think about it! Our problem's solved, uncle's problem's solved, all of their problem's solved—just by… I know. Yes I've met Archana aunty—
Purvi: *looks up shocked, drops the file and runs out of there*
Arjun: Hold on… *turns* Who was just here….?
*End Flashback*
He—he's met—when—how—why? What were they talking about? What problems? Sir's met Aai? Who? Why didn't I know before? Why is he so—I mean—ugh!
Okay, honestly, I hadn't cried this time. I came into my cabin after running from there and threw things. I wasn't mad—I think. I was just venting out my frustration. How did he know!? How exactly did he—did I play into this? Why am I so worried? What problems?
I can't even think straight and I'm just so overwhelmed. I—*someone walks in*
Purvi: *I may just have to figure things out now. All I know is… yeh… weirdo of a boss may just be a lot more closely affiliated with my life than I thought I could ignore.*
I looked up and there… it was. The cause of my troubles.
Arjun: Uh, Miss Purvi—
Purvi: *Did I mention he dropped the whole Miss Deshmukh thing?* How do you know my mom?
Arjun: *taken aback* What—what do you—
Purvi: Don't act like you don't know.
Arjun: Uh, Miss—can I sit down?
Purvi: Whatever.
Arjun: Uh, listen—
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He went on for almost an hour explaining to me how he knew my family and when he met my Aai. I even found out why he was so overprotective of me when we went to Delhi… I'll have to straighten things with Aai later.
What Sir didn't know though, is that I already know that he knows. Ever since I saw Baba at his party, everything hit me. I just wanted to see how honest Sir would be with me. I wanted to see if he had the grudge against me to even hide my own family matters from me. Turns out, he didn't. He was completely clean. It was what he said at the end though that threw me off.
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Arjun: Are you okay?
Purvi: *head still down* Yeah. I'm sorry for—
Arjun: You know why they separated I suppose?
Purvi: *head still down… confused* Yeah… why?
Arjun: *takes a deep breath… So will you help me get them back together. Please?
****
Precap: The rest of Arvi's conversation
Here you guys go 😃
Things to think about: What next for Purvi? What does Arjun have up his sleeve?
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow...now that could have been an option? EK???

Great job, please do continue. Loved it.😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
at first im happy that you updated, and im more than happy because they will bring them back together 😉 and that means they will be more together😃

thanks for pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow incredible, so the real drama now begins...can't wait to see how this all plays out. update soon and thank youu for the PM:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
it was awesome esha 👏

cant wait to read more of it...!

ARVI convo was short but niceee

thanx for the pm..!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Love it can wait to read the next part plz update very soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Heyya esha..thanks for updating...

loved this chapter...ahh so now purvi's knows the truth..ahh think now ArVi will work together to unite Arman..thats great...ahh m eagerly waiting for next part..

plz do update soon...

precap is quite interesting..m waiting for them to fall in love wid each other...😛

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Posted: 12 years ago
great update esha👍🏼love the fact tht arjun wants purvis help and tht too to reunite archana and manav...lots of drama ahead uh?😉and lots of arvi also i guess😳i loved this part!!😃😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Sry 4 late cmnt.
Dis FF z heading in the least of my fav.
Simply awsm yr. I wish 2 see some of ArMan also. Do updt soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 20: Worth the Shot(s)
April 24th, 2012: Mumbai, 6:30 p.m.

Viren: Hello?
Siddarth: Bhai! Kaise ho tum?
Viren: I'm fine Sid. Tell me, why did you call?
Siddarth: Bhai, today you moved in! I wanted to know how everything is and if you're doing fine.
Viren: Sab kuch first-class hain.
Siddarth: That's good. What area do you live in?
Viren: Let's just say I live next to Soham…
Siddarth: Really? Next to Soham—oh wait, that reminds me. Have you met Purvi?
Viren: Who's Purvi?
Siddarth: Soham's sister.
Viren: I'm not sure… why?
Siddarth: I don't know. I mean, she's my senior in office, but I was wondering I guess… I don't know.
Viren: Siddarth…?
Siddarth: Tst. It's okay Viren. Oh! Speaking of which, tomorrow, at four we should meet up with Ranvir. For old time's sake.
Viren: What!? Ranvir—in Mumbai? Hello—hello—
He cut the line. Why do I get the feeling that Siddarth was acting weird… Should I go with him? Well… I guess it's worth a shot.
****
April 24th, 2012: ADK Industries, 7:00 p.m.
Arjun: Are you okay?
Purvi: *head still down* Yeah. I'm sorry for—
Arjun: You know why they separated I suppose?
Purvi: *head still down… confused* Yeah… why?
Arjun: *takes a deep breath… So will you help me get them back together. Please?
___
I jolted my head up with a newfound surprise. I looked at him, hesitant. Many things I could've said raced through my mind, but instead all I could muster was:
Purvi: What?

I know. It was pathetic.
Arjun: Look, I've known Manav uncle since I was born. Literally. It's like his whole life was empty—he focused everything on his children of course, but never talked about Aunty—but it was clearly visible that he needed her—that he still needs her. This needs to be done, and frankly, you're Aunty's daughter. So… will you?
Purvi: *tilts her head back up* What… exactly do you have in mind?
He sat there and explained to me what all he had thought about. It seemed like he spents weeks and days figuring these things out.
Arjun: So, so I sound like a complete idiot? Or was that… okay?
Purvi: It's… worth a shot.
He sat back and smiled! Smiled! Like, his lips curled upwards and everything—it wasn't his annoyed half smile! I also realized that he had dimples. See what all happens when you see someone smile for practically the first time? It's crazy! Oh, wait I forgot. I smiled back. I couldn't help it despite myself.
Arjun: I think we may have just came to an agreement for the first time.
Purvi: Maybe. Just maybe.
****
April 24th, 2012: Kirloskar Residence, 9:30 p.m.
Arjun: Nikhil! Where's the food!?
Nikhil: Why are you asking me!?
Arjun: I don't have any other "vacuum cleaner" in the house.
Nikhil: Haha, very funny smart one. I may have had dinner… twice.
Arjun: *groans* Nik!
Nikhil: That's why you should get back from work earlier…
Arjun: Shut up!
Nikhil: Anyways, you were saying that we were good to go… right?
Arjun: Yes sir.
Nikhil: Do you think it'll work? Will we escape?
Arjun: Why are you making it seem like one of those survival shows hosted by Akshay Kumar?
Nikhil: I'm worried… for you. That's all.
Arjun: Well… let's just say that… it's worth a shot. Now either go make me food or I'll make you into food.
Nikhil: Okay! Okay!
*****
April 24th, 2012: Karanjkar Chawl, 9:40 p.m.
Kunjal: Purvi! Purvi! Earth to Purvi! Hello?
Purvi: Huh!?
Kunjal: Will it even work? Like, shouldn't that be the first question?
Purvi: If they truly, undoubtedly were made only and only for one another, then not even God can stope them from uniting. Not even the longest of separations—and this applies to any two lovers.
Kunjal: Oh my god! Purvi! Tum bohot filmy ho!
Purvi: No I'm not! I'm very practical.
Soham: *just entering* It's true. Purvi is really filmy. Even Aai is! They never miss any romantic movie! I swear na, these two…
Kunjal: *laughs*
Purvi: *whiny voice* Dada!
Seher: Kys hua Tai?
Purvi: See na, Seher. Tera Soham Dada is making fun of me.
Kunjal: *still laughing* Mujko mat bhul jao!
Purvi: Haan haan I won't. See Seher?
Seher: Why do you pay attention to them then? Then realize the affect of their own words someday.
Soham: And Seher Mata has spoken!
Kunjal: *laughs harder*
Seher: Hmph. Dad aap bhi na!
Kunjal: Hmm you three should start a "I love Love stories" club.
Soham: *laughs*
Seher: Dekha! They started again!
Purvi: Whatever.
Soham: But Purvi, you're in love with love stories—yet have you never realized that in most films, there's always dramatic rhona-dhona horrific phases?
Purvi: that's to test the love's strength. Come on Dada! Tera Aai ko bhi hua na!
Soham: Haan. Toh? What does that have to do with me?
Purvi: Whatever. Well, I won't deny it. Mein filmy nahin hoon, but I love Love stories…
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Nikhil: Here. Tera Khana.
Arjun: It's about time!
Nikhil: Served to you by yours truly. *bows*
Arjun: *rolls his eyes*
Nikhil: So you're positive na, that they'll get back together?
Arjun: Well, if they love each other and stuff… why not? I guess. I don't know! Don't look at me!
Nikhil: Come on! I doubt you've seen a single romantic movie in your life.
Arjun: Correct.
Nikhil: You're no fun then.
Arjun: Like you know what love is.
Nikhil: I do! Mein sirf ek hi cheez se pyaar karta hoon—khana, yaar!
Arjun: Of course. The stuff doesn't exist.
Riya: What doesn't exist?
Nikhil: Tera yeh joh preacher bhai hain na, voh kehtein hein ke pyaar doesn't exist.
Riya: Of course, Mr. Khadoos Precher ji.
Arjun: Guys! Come on! Seriously? Pyaar?
Riya and Nikhil at the same time: Yes, sir! Pyaar!
Arjun: Fake.
Riya: Come on! Tera idol Manav uncle ko hua!
Arjun: So!? That doesn't mean that love exists for everyone. In fact it's not even love. It's just… a strong bond, because pyaar toh hota hi nahin.
Nikhil: Forget it, Riya. Non-believer hain.
Riya: Dekho Mr. Khadoos Preacher Non-Believer ji, you'll realize this when your words bite back.
Arjun: Hmph, aur nahin hua toh?
Riya: Nahin hua toh, phir… You'll have to marry whoever I tell you to.
Arjun: Why do I lose in both situations? Forget it. Get this straight guys. Pyaar isn't real. I absolutely positively don't believe in love stories.
****
April 24th, 2012: Deshmukh Residence, 10:00 p.m.
Ever since I found out, I knew something was not right. I had to come here and investigate further. It's like I'm Sherlock Holmes or something. I could pull off being him too.. no one knows that I've been looking for her. That I'm glad that she seems happy. That she has people with her. But, I still can't help but spend most of my days and nights pondering about… pretty much everything. Who are they? How is she? What happened all these years? Will it ever be the same? Why is this so hard?
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Precap: Mission: Not instanbul…. :P
PLs leave your views. Thanks!
Note: I know Arman seem kind of side tracked right now, and I'm so sorry for that! You'll start seeing much much more of them starting from the next chapter, but just know that my main focus is indeed on Arvi… I want to portray both stories as evenly as I can. Sorry if that annoyed anyone. Same goes for any other main character that seems kind of sidetracked. You will all see how they fit into the plot really, really, really soon.
-Esha
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