Arvi FF: The Three Mistakes: Completed

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eshaa_avrc

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Posted: 12 years ago

#231

Originally posted by: ashvikluverrr
Heyy esha..
first of all
I loved its length...
it was a treat to read this part ..😛
loved this part...ahh ArVi scene was great...
so purvi and Riya both are confused about Arjun's behaviour..ohh Riya miss arjun and purvi's nok jhok..😆
eagerly waiting for next part..
do update soon..
Thanks for this long update..😃

Thank you!!!!! 😊

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Safoera

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Posted: 12 years ago

#232

Wooww!, Awesome Update Esha...I don't have a problem with the length since I really love your way of writing and the story...I can read it on and on 😛😳...Loved the Arvi-scene❤️...n Both don't like the fact that they've stopped fighting!😆...Want to know what will happen Next!Pleasse Continue and Update sooon! 😃👍🏼

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eshaa_avrc

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Posted: 12 years ago

#233

Originally posted by: ARluv16

Wooww!, Awesome Update Esha...I don't have a problem with the length since I really love your way of writing and the story...I can read it on and on 😛😳...Loved the Arvi-scene❤️...n Both don't like the fact that they've stopped fighting!😆...Want to know what will happen Next!<div></div>PleasseContinue and Update sooon! 😃👍🏼

Thank you!!!!!
Thank all of you guys! Promo will be up soon for da next chapter. :)

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shreya2094

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Posted: 12 years ago

#234

absolutely amazing post esha...thank god arvi dint meet with an accident*phew*(inspite of the long eyelock😉 arjun is indeed a vry gud driver😉)...arjun changing😳...junjals part was vry interesting as well...lol she cudnt hide frm smart purvi😛😉😆...and the turning point is really making me more n more curious!!

u gotta b kidding abt the length...i never feel ur updates r lenghty coz i wanna read more n more😛😆i really enjoyed reading this one😃

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eshaa_avrc

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Posted: 12 years ago

#235

Originally posted by: shreya2094
absolutely amazing post esha...thank god arvi dint meet with an accident*phew*(inspite of the long eyelock😉arjun is indeed a vry gud driver😉)...arjun changing😳...junjals part was vry interesting as well...lol she cudnt hide frm smart purvi😛😉😆...and the turning point is really making me more n more curious!!
u gotta b kidding abt the length...i never feel ur updates r lenghty coz i wanna read more n more😛😆i really enjoyed reading this one😃

Thank you so much!!! :)

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eshaa_avrc

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Posted: 12 years ago

#236

I sincerely apologize for leaving the FF for almost a week now. Just wanted to thank all of you for liking/commenting and giving your feedback and thought. I wanted to express how much I appreciate it! :)
I will post the next chapter sometime after Sunday. I have the chapter almost done though. ;)
Thanks,
Esha

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NadaCinta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#237

Originally posted by: omg11apiz
I sincerely apologize for leaving the FF for almost a week now. Just wanted to thank all of you for liking/commenting and giving your feedback and thought. I wanted to express how much I appreciate it! :)
I will post the next chapter sometime after Sunday. I have the chapter almost done though. ;)
Thanks,
Esha

Please don't apologize as we understand why there is a delay in your updates. No worries we will always wait for it.😛

Thanks to you for continuously giving us long updates.👏. Shall wait for your next update to find out the truth that's pending 😊

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NadaCinta

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Posted: 12 years ago

#238

Your update was lovely and awesome😛

Sorry for the late feedback.

A mothers concern was depicted clearly when Archana was feeling restless as she can't get through to Purvi as it was getting late

So Kunjal decided to hide herself in the kitchen from Purvi at the same time she's preparing chai.😊

Finally Purvi arrived home while complaining it was cold and hugged Archana which shows she miss her so much. She then lied to Achana her reason for coming back late and excitedly told her about the 5 deals she bagged.

As Purvi heard a loud sound from the kitchen, she decided to check and was surprise to see Kunjal.😃

Purvi went into flashback the minute Archana asked her about her khadoos boss.

Thank god ArVi did not meet with an accident. I must admit that he's really a good driver after having an eye lock and not concentrating on the road yet he managed to avoid the oncoming vehicle in THR nick of time😉

I liked it when Arjun realized that e had been holding Purvi's and the whole time just like the other day at the mall😊

Seems like Purvi intentionally dragged Kunjal away before Archana shoots her with more questions😆

At ADK Industries, Riya wasn't sure if things were actually fine with Arjun and Purvi or was it her imagination. Meanwhile, Purvi couldn't decipher why her khadoos boss was being nice to her😲. When Riya questioned her if everything was alright between Arjun and her, she asked her to check with her bro. After listening to Riya's reply, to which Purvi said maybe physically but not mentally😊.

I loved this part the most wen Riya thought to herself that these 2 enjoy annoying the hell out of one another and asked god to help but at the same time thought if god himself knew what's wrong with tem is just funny😆

Oh yes, I'm waiting for all the answers that's running in each and every one of their mind🤔 in your next update!

Please don't apologize for the long update as we love it.

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-LiveLaughLove-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#239

Esha dear.. Im so sorry I forgot to comment! Nice job dear! You gave us a beautiful moment of ArVi in the car.. Slowly their feelings are changing!

Arjun was being so protective of Purvi in the mall..

I really liked what you called a rant! Im excited for the coming chapters! What Purvi feels about her real family.. Why she can;t trust and anyone and how she will be able to trust Arjun..

Arjun and his feelings about everyone!

No need to apologize I understand dear! I will always wait!