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Chapter 21: The Many Routes
April 25th, 2012: ADK Industries, 3:00 p.m.

*In Arjun's office*
Arjun: Miss Purvi, can you hand me that file over there?
Purvi: *hands it to him* Here you go.
Riya: *purposely drops file* Oops!
Arjun and Purvi: Here, I'll get it…
Arjun and Purvi: *smile* I'll get it.
Riya: Nevermind, I got it.
Arjun and Purvi: Okay. *Resume working*
Riya: *What is their problem? Before it was just Arjun, but now Purvi suddenly is awkwardly nice to Arjun? What's going on? These things can't happen overnight…. Can they? What the hell am I missing? Oh God, I'm 100% sure now that not even you know what's going on between them.*
****
April 25th, 2012: Mumbai, 3:30 p.m.
Viren: Are you sure about this? Isn't he like working or something?
Siddarth: Don't worry, I made an appointment.
Viren: An appointment?
Siddarth: Just come on.
*both walk in*
Siddarth: *clears throat* Um, yes ma'am, we had an appointment at this time to see Mr. Rawat—
Reception Lady: Yes sir. Right in there.
____
Viren: Siddarth, what is this all about—
Ranvir: Hey! Siddarth, Viren! My man! *Shakes hands with both* What did you guys need that you scheduled an appointment? I can make any time free for you.
Viren: You see I—
Siddarth: We needed to discuss something legal with you. That's your job, right? *laughs*
Ranvir: *smiles* Of course, of course. Come sit down. What do you need?
Siddarth: You know everything… about… well everything right?
Ranvir: Regarding…?
Siddarth: Our mom… and sister.
Ranvir: Haan, of course. And?
Siddarth: I came across this idea… maybe she isn't… you know… dead.
Viren: Siddarth?
Ranvir: Who? Because your mom—
Siddarth: Our sister.
Ranvir: Okay, and this has to do with me…?
Siddarth: I was wondering, I mean we have a good shot. Can you see if by any chance, she was… legally adopted? Could we look through papers by her name?
Viren: Siddarth!
Ranvir: Look, I can't… legally. But, what I can do is look through the papers and tell you if I find anything, but that's about it. Her name?
Siddarth: Purbi… Chauhan. That was her birth name.
Ranvir: I'll see what I can do.
*25 minutes later*
Ranvir: I'm sorry. Um, I don't have any files by that name. You do realize that she could be anywhere in India? Or just maybe not legally adopted? Or… dead?
Siddarth: But—
Viren: We understand, Ranvir. I'm so very sorry to waste your time. Let's go Siddarth.
Siddarth: But—
Viren: *gets up* Thank you.
Ranvir: Hey, no sweat. I understand his point of view. May your search go well.
Siddarth: Thanks.
*They walk out*
Ranvir: Wow. I never thought they'd come in looking for her. I mean honestly, I wonder if they'll ever figure out that I have more ties to their beloved sister than they thought. Not just some stupid adoption papers… *sits down, opens desk drawer and takes out a file* Isn't that right… Miss Purvi Deshmukh? *takes out a recent photo of her* I'll be seeing you very soon. Very, very soon.
____
Viren: Siddarth! That was completely stupid! How could you think that—
Siddarth: Look. Just because you and all of my other brothers gave up doesn't mean I will. I know she's alive. She has to be. And I won't give up until she knows who she really is. *walks away*
Viren: Siddarth!
*****
April 25th, 2012: Karanjkar Chawl, 4:30 p.m.
Purvi: Aai! I'm home.
Archana: No, you're not!
Purvi: Huh?
Kunjal: Purvi! *whiney voice* Dekho na, Aunty wants me to stay here alone with your Dada. Explain it to her!
Purvi: Aai? What's going on?
Archana: Purvi, we need to go to the market. Seher needs new socks anyways, so she'll come too. But dekho na kaise Kunjal and Soham refuse to stay here alone! They're not children!
Purvi: Dada!
Soham: What?
Purvi: Guys, come on. Just one hour, please stay here okay?
Kunjal and Soham: No!
Seher: Chalo na Aunty!
Archana: Chal Purvi. Bye.
Kunjal: Lekin Aunty!
____
Purvi: Aai, what was that all about?
Archana: Sirf jokes ke liye. I want to see how long they last alone under the same roof.
Purvi: Aai! Why are you troubling them?
Seher: Kyunki woh dono pure din fight kertein. It's annoying!
Archana: Dekha? It annoys Seher too.
Purvi: *groans* Aai!
****
April 25th, 2012: Market, 5:00 p.m.
Arjun: Uncle, why have you brought me here?
Manav: Beta, you need to get out more. All day you're in office, then you get home and don't go anywhere.
Arjun: Uncle… *whiney voice* How is shopping for vegetables going to help?
Manav: Breathe the fresh air!
Arjun: Uncle, this air is far from fresh.
Manav: Chup! Look for apples now. Go!
Arjun: Okay, okay! *walks off*
____
Purvi: Aai, I have to ask you something. Why do you think they fight all day long?
Archana: They're immature.
Seher: *same time as Archana* They like each other.
Purvi: *coughs* Ummm… I liked Aai's explanation more.
Archana: You know, Seher… that could be a possibility…
Seher: Dekha?
Purvi: Guys! Stop! I'm going to go get fruit!
Archana and Seher laugh as an annoyed Purvi walks off.
_____
Manav: How much is this for?
*in background*
Archana: How much is this for?
Seher: Aunty, hurry na! I have to go to the bathroom!
Archana: Okay, calm down beta.
*Confused*
Manav: *turns around to see Archana and Seher at the cart behind him*
____
Arjun: *mumbling to self* I don't even know how to shop for these things… why does he need apples anyways… *bumps into someone* Oh! I'm— tum?
Purvi: Tum? What are you doing here?
Arjun: * Picks up the nearest thing* Shopping for apples.
Purvi: *tries to hide a laugh* Sir, that's a banana.
Arjun: *looks and drops it* Dang it!
Purvi: Why are you really here?
Arjun: Nothing,… came to walk around… was just following you…
Purvi: What!?
Arjun: Kidding! Manav uncle made me I swear!
Purvi: He's here… right now?
Arjun: Haan… *confused*
Purvi: Sir, Aai's here too.
Arjun: Forget the bananas—I mean apples—lets go!
Purvi: Haan chalo.
____
By the time Arjun had came back, I realized that I had been staring at Archana the whole time. He came back with that same girl I saw him with the other day, but didn't ask him about it. In fact, I don't know how long they stood there looking at me looking at Archana before the girl realized that Archana was about to turn around.
Purvi: Aai!
Arjun: Uncle!
*they briefly look at each other and then walk to their person*
Purvi: Um… Aai, let's go over there.
Archana: Kyun beta…?
Purvi: They have….*shoots Arjun a look* great bananas.
Arjun: *shoots an annoying look back* Uncle, *looks to make sure Archana and Purvi left* why were you staring at her?
Manav: Nothing… I thought I knew her… do you know her?
Arjun: Not really… I mean… no.
Manav: You seem to know that other girl really well.
Arjun: *coughs* She's uh… um… a friend… of Riya's.
Manav:* Looks at Arjun* Uh huh. Chal.
Arjun: Uncle! Wait! What—
****
Woh ladki kaun thi Archana ki saath? She called her Aai. My only daughter is Teju. What happened all these years? Who was the little girl? All I know is that now, there's no stopping it. Very soon, I will confront her. I will get my answers. Hopefully, the ones I hoped to hear.
****
April 25th 2012: Kirloskar Residence, 5:30 p.m.
Arjun: ….. pick up.
Purvi: What happened sir?
Arjun: Uh, Miss Purvi. Actually… well I called to say that after you and Aunty left, Uncle denied recognizing Aunty. I don't know if he was trying to hide it from me, or was just in plain denial.
Purvi: Well Aai hadn't even noticed Baba…
Arjun: What do we do now?
Purvi: Well, at least we know that Baba's seen Aai. We can move off of this.
Arjun: We need to act fast if Uncle's in denial.
Purvi: Haan, especially since he's seen her… and me.
Arjun: What? *confused*
Purvi: Um… we can discuss what to do tomorrow. Okay?
Arjun: Yeah.
Purvi: Bye.
Arjun: Bye. *What did she mean and me?*
…..: Who was that?
******
Precap: Many, many interesting conversations… Let's leave it at that. 😉
Things to think about: Woah now! Who's Ranvir and why does he have pictures of Purvi? Why did he hide the file from Siddarth and Viren? 😲 What is Manav planning on doing now that he's heard Purvi call Archana, Aai? 😕 What's going on in Purvi's mind? 🤔 What will Arjun do? Who overheard Arjun's conversation with Purvi? 😲
*****
"…. and just know that very, very soon, paths will cross, tears will be shed, and lives will change."


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Posted: 12 years ago
yo yo esha it was simply awesome part...!👏

shopping for apples
sir thats banana...! it was damn funny 🤣

so many questions in my mind but m waiting for the next part to know😊

precap-who overheard arjun' conversation with purvi...???
now cant wait dear...!
thanx for the pm😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: latika_AshVik

yo yo esha it was simply awesome part...!👏

shopping for apples
sir thats banana...! it was damn funny 🤣

so many questions in my mind but m waiting for the next part to know😊

precap-who overheard arjun' conversation with purvi...???
now cant wait dear...!
thanx for the pm😊


Thanks! It was one of my favorite parts too... 😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
So close yet so far for our Arman...brilliant update...u got me thinking with all the questions u posed at the end...waiting my next read anxiously. Thanks for the update n plzzz update soon. Seher is a very smart little girl...lol saying Kunjal n Soham like each other:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Interesting.
Update soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
heyya esha..
loved this chapter..
so Ria confused..😆😆
aha nobody knows what going on between ArVi😆
so who's ranvir...and how does he know purvi..?
so finally manav saw archu..
lol he was shopping for ban errr apples..🤣🤣
forget bananas..i mean apples🤣🤣
ahha arjun and purvi teaming up to reunite arman..m loving it..😛

they are way too funny😆
eagerly waiting for next part..
hope i'll get my answers in next part..!!
thankyou for updating..!!
Edited by ashvikluverrr - 12 years ago
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Fantastic😛

Well, I'm surprise to see both Arjun and Purvi offer to pick up the file for Riya and the best part is with a smile😊.

Riya is confused over Arjun and Purvi's behaviour and now she's 100% sure that even God would not know what's going on between these two is really cute.

So, what is the need for this new character Ranvir? I assume he's a lawyer. Seems like its Sid who wanted to meet him to discuss about Purbi (Purvi Desmukh😲). Oohhh, so Ranvir actually knows about Purvi's whereabout which he hid from Sid and Viren. Hmmm, so the suspense might be revealed in the next part as to why he hid Purvi's file and took her photo and said he will be seeing her very, very soon😲😲.

A short convo between Archana and Purvi which I like especially its related to Kunjal and Soham😉. It was all Archana's trick to leave those two alone at home as they keep fighting which is pretty annoying.

I enjoy the part where Arjun asked Manav how is it shopping for vegetables going to help and Manav's reply was to breath fresh air😆. With that said, he asked Arjun to go and get some apples😛.

I like it when Archana told that Kunjal and Soham are immature whereas Seher said they like each other😳. Even I feel the same as Seher. Purvi is annoyed and walks off to buy fruits as the topic is related to her friend and brother😃.

Finally Manav saw Archana 😳. So cute of Arjun when he picked up a banana and said that he's shopping for apples to Purvi 😆. I like the way he was pulling Purvi's leg that he was following her and finally blurted out it was Manav who brought him. Forget about the ban...apples as they were excited that both Manav and Archana are in the same place 🤣.

Looks like Manav is prepared to approach Archana to find out about Purvi since she called her aai and was thinking that he only has one daughter ie Teju. Hoping to get the answers.

Good to see Arjun and Purvi working hand in hand to reunite ArMan. Seems like Arjun did not understand what Purvi told him😲. Now...was it Riya, Manav or Nikhil who overhead Arjun's conversation.

Oh gosh, that we will only know when you reveal the suspense in the next chapter. Please update soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
i just love the way the story is progressing...and thers sill lots more to look fwd to...loving the suspense tht u keep alive in all of ur updates😉😛thts wht makes me impatient fr the nxt update😛...plz do continue soon😛😃
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Posted: 12 years ago

Chapter 22a: The Truth About Love
April 25th, 2012: Kirloskar Residence, 5:40 p.m.
…..: Who was that?
Arjun: *drops phone and slowly turns around* Pssht. No one.
…..: Arjun. Please.
Arjun: I swear Riya! It wasn't anyone important.
Riya: Hmm. Kuch toh chupa rahe ho tum.
Arjun: Riya, what's wrong with you? You're suspecting your own brother?
Riya: I should be asking you the same! Ever since we got back from the conference, you've been acting weird. Did anything happen?
Arjun: *flashbacks to car scene and cringes* No. Not at all. Why would you think that?
Riya: Sudden change in behavior; secret phone calls? Seriously Arjun, you're… different.
Arjun: Well….
Riya: Arjun! I'm serious!
Arjun: Look, Riya I'm sorry. I didn't mean to act like I was hiding things from you. But seriously, *thinks of car scene again* it was… no one.
Riya: It's okay. I was just—
Nikhil: *steps in the room* Hey guys… I'm bored. And hungry.
Arjun: *rolls eyes* Well that's not anything new.
****
April 25th, 2012: Karanjkar Chawl, 6:00 p.m.
Purvi: *on phone* Aur haan, don't forget—
Kunjal: You idiot! Inte kaam bhi nahin kar sakta?
Soham: You didn't tell me what to do! Mujhe de diya. Here clean this!
Kunjal: Don't give me excuses! You messed up the entire set and now I have to go get a new one.
Soham: Okay, why would you give me a task like that in the first place!?
Kunjal: I hoped that you would at least know how to do
that.
Soham: Well that's stupid!
Kunjal: You know what!? You're such an—
Purvi: *covers phone* Hey, hey, hey! No graphic language! *back on phone* Hello? Got it? Kay bye. *back at them* Okay, I don't know what your guys' problem is, but Aai has a headache and so do I. Let's let her rest, and go out… and do something.
****
April 25th, 2012: Restaurant, 7:30 p.m.
Worst choice ever. We had been at this restaurant for an hour now. And on top of that, I had work tomorrow, and a bad migraine from listening to Dada and Kunjal argue the whole hour. Luckily, I had aspirin so I escaped their constant arguing and went to the bathroom. Yes. It was that bad. I wonder what sets these two off… No! Purvi! Seher isn't right. Just… no. Ugh. It's 8. I think I should go back. Yay.
Purvi: *walking back to the table* *bumps into someone* Oh, I'm so—aap!?
Arjun: Oh… it's you. Again.
Purvi: Were you serious earlier when you said you were following me!?
Arjun: What? No…
Purvi: *takes a deep breath* Thank God.
Arjun: Can I ask you something? Pure Mumbai mein hum dono ko sirf ek hi restaurant milte hain kya?
Purvi: Like I wanted to come.
Arjun: Please. You know the least of it.
Purvi: I should get back sir… unless you want to follow me back there too.
Arjun: What!?
Purvi: Never mind…
___
Purvi: Where did they go? Yahaan pein koi nahin hain…
*loud whistle*
Purvi: *looks in general direction of whistle and is shocked* Sir…?
Arjun: Come on. * gestures her over*
Purvi: *hesitantly walks over* Kya?
Arjun: Look, you've been standing there alone for a while now. I can't find the people I came with, and neither can you. We can… uh… sit and wait.
Purvi: *still hesitant, but sits* Aur yeh normal… hain?
Arjun: Well… define normal. *smiles*
Purvi: *laughs* Never mind. Why'd you end up here anyways?
Arjun: What? I'm… here. What do you mean?
Purvi: Sir, tum mujhe bhi confuse kar rahe ho. What do you mean?
Arjun: *lost* I don't know. Seriously Miss Purvi, what did you mean?
Purvi: My god! Sir, what's wrong with you!?
Arjun: So what…? I drank a little… Mein abhi bhi hosh mein hoon.
Purvi: *over exaggerated shock* Sir…. You're drunk!?
Arjun: Shh! No! At least not in public… *laughs*
Purvi: *tries to hide a smile* So… who'd you come with?
Arjun: Oh, woh… Nikhil aur Riya.
Purvi: *hesitant* Are you… sure?
Arjun: Yes… seriously. I'm not drunk!
Purvi: *laughs* Good. What time is it?
Arjun: Time… for you to get a watch. *laughs*
Purvi: *annoyed, takes out phone and check time* Hmmm. Where do you think they all went?
Arjun: God knows… oh yeah! Riya and Nikhil went to go see a movie to annoy me.
Purvi: … annoy you? *raises eyebrow*
Arjun: Yeah.
Purvi: And what kind of movie was it that it annoyed you?
Arjun: I don't know really. The title had the word "love" in it, so I said absolutely not.
Purvi: Huh! You don't like love stories!?
Arjun: Nope. Never have, never will. Can't stand them.
Purvi: Oh God! What's wrong with you!?
Arjun: What? We already established that I wasn't drunk. I think that takes care of everything… except for things that were already wrong with me…
Purvi: *rolls eyes* Not that! I mean, how can you not love, love stories!?
Arjun: Hey! Don't roll your eyes at me! And because they involve love. And stupid, overdramatic sacrifices that only lead to endless tears and repetitive dialogues.
Purvi: They're classic! No one make them if people didn't like them!
Arjun: Well then, like you said before, I'm most probably not human.
Purvi: Hey! That was… a long time ago.
Arjun: Try 3 weeks ago. *awkward silence* Uh, so I'm guessing you're a believer?
Purvi: *smiles* Woh toh mein hoon.
Arjun: *smiles* No fimly sacrifice?
Purvi: *laughs* No! *checks time* Oh! Sir, it's almost 10… They're not back yet either. Maybe they—
Arjun: Left? I think so too… call them?
Purvi: Didn't answer.
Arjun: Message?
Purvi: Didn't reply.
Arjun: Drop you?
Purvi: Uh. I don't think so.
Arjun: What? Why? I do it regularly—
Purvi: Yeah, but then you're not drunk! *smiles*
Arjun: I'm not drunk! *smiles*
Purvi: *gets up* Well, I should go.
Arjun: *gets up* I'm still dropping you. It's too late for you to be wandering around alone.
Purvi: *looks back at him* Uh…. Um fine. If I die, you're telling Aai how it happened.
Arjun: What if I die too?
Purvi: *sarcastically* Thanks. That's reassuring. And I don't care. You still have to tell her. *smiles and starts walking*
Arjun: *follows and mumbles behind her* And she thought I was drunk?
****
April 25th, 2012: Karanjkar Chawl, 10:30 p.m.
Arjun: Hello? Miss Purvi? *shakes her shoulder* You can open your eyes now.
Purvi: Huh? Hey! I'm alive!
Arjun: *shoots annoyed look at her*
Purvi: I mean we. Thanks. *gets out of car* *before closing door* Bye, sir… Thanks again.
Arjun: Bye, Miss Purvi.
Purvi: *hesitantly pauses* You sure you'll get home in one piece?
Arjun: For the last time, Miss Purvi, I'm not drunk.
Purvi:*laughs* Just checking.
Arjun: *laughs* And what's the worst that could happen? If not, I'll be at work tomorrow in two pieces. *looks back at Purvi, smiles, and drives off*
Purvi: *out loud* He's been flashing his dimples a lot lately… Purvi! Did you just spend the last two and a half hours casually talking with your boss? My god what's going on?
****
…. And that night, both a confused Purvi and Arjun went home, wondering the same thing. Oh, and I haven't forgotten about Soham and Kunjal… Where were they?
Chapter 22b coming soon!
-Esha


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Posted: 12 years ago
Awesome.

Cutesy khadoos boss, with a sense of humor( shades of RD?)
Sassy subordinate

Love their interactions the Ms. Purvi's , the snide remarks, the underlying unmistable link!

And the best part, can absolutely picture the scenes very very clearly.

Will be at work in two pieces?🤣
Edited by Pancham101 - 12 years ago

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