Arvi FF: The Three Mistakes: Completed - Page 13

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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice update!!more excited to read the nxt part!!plz do update soon!!😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
heyy Esha very nice update..😃
very eager to know about nik's past..
and wow purvi attending the party..aah waiting for next part..do update soon.😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nyc1. Updt soon. Next 1 will be intrstng
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Posted: 12 years ago
Esha
Firstly it was a really good update😊
Arjun is now thinking of ways to irritate Purvi further. The convo between Nikhil and Arjun was cute and interesting. So Purvi will be attending the party and what will be the surprise for her? Eagerly waiting to know what made Manav mad. Why is it that Archana and Purvi have decided not to reveal anything to Seher? Who is going to be sad or what made whoever sad?

OMG, you have kept us in suspense again. This time, please update soon and give us some clue.

Awaiting your next update excitedly😛
Edited by NadaCinta - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I've edited my comment for chapter 6 and also have apologized for not commenting so long, still I would prefer to apologize again...I'm sooo sorry for not commenting for your updates...I've bookmarked it so that I would remember, but somehow I forgotten...Anyways, here's my comment for Chapter 7...😊

My POV, I still don't take back my words for the comment I've written for Chap.6, he was sweet in the beginning, but later he turned a little khadoss...It was rite for her to call him khadoss (in the serial of course 😆)..Now I'm wondering why did he denied meeting her at the ATM, what could possibly be the reason...*goes into thinking mood once again*

I'm confused about the part where Soham and Purvi is related, he is her cousin, I guess...then who;s Seher, sorry I'm a little dumb when it comes to relationships.. Its a little confusing for me...😳

O.M.G., was it just my imagination or did Teju accidentally told Arjun the whole plan..she really needs to know how to say 'hello, is this the person who I want to speak to' 😆..And why is it bad for Nikhil and Manav to be in one room?First of all who is Nikhil?

Anyways, I'm sure you would reveal it in the coming chapters...😉
Edited by Angelfreak_96 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
My comments for Chapter 8...😊

I should say this, I like the part where you wrote for the precap that Arjun takes a sleepy Purvi home...😆

My POV, well I do think, or shall I say I know for sure that Archana will let Seher stay with them, she after all doesn't really mind anyone staying in her house (not in bad way, I mean to say she's very generous...)

I liked the part where Riya scolded Teju and Teju said that she ws a blabber mouth..😆...and what is the problem between Manav and Nikhil...

I can't believe Arjun just shouted when Purvi walked in...😆..I cold actually imagin that in my mind, it would be so hilarious, hope it happens in the serial...😆..I am just waiting too see what kind of errands will Arjun have Purvi run?

Like I said, I know for sure that Archana would let Seher stay with them, after a lot of thinking of course...😆

That's the end of my comment for Chapter 8...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
My comments for Chapter 9 promo...😊
Superb one actually, better than mine...😛
Arjun irritating Purvi, that was fun..can't wait to read chapter 9...😊
Edited by Angelfreak_96 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
My comments for Chapter 9...😊

My POV, Anuksha is really a good planner, its like she knows what would Archana ask to Soham about Seher and she has told it to Soham readily...The part where Archana went into her mom mode gave me a smile...I'm sure Purvi and Archana will bond with Seher within no time...LOL

I can't believe that Arjun didn't want her to be happy, 😆, I think Purvi would also want the same...😆😛
I can't believe Arjun, he trying his very best too irritate Purvi here, and he actually succeeded..😆..Purvi is getting majorly annoyed...😆

I liked the part where Soham said that he's does not have master degree in child care..😆 The whole conversation of Purvi and Soham gave me a good laugh...

One question which is running through my mind is, where did Manav went...certainly not the office because he had said that it was not the office, then where?*goes into thinking mode again...*
Edited by Angelfreak_96 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
My comment for Chapter 10...😊

My POV, Arjun thinking why didn't Purvi get angry on him...😆..that was cute...But I just wished for Purvi too show a little attitude, but this was awesome, making Arjun feel a little annoyed by doing this, great going Purvi...👍🏼

Nikhil seems to be a flirt and a happy-go-lucky guy...😛 I'm still wondering, what did really happen...hope you'll reveal it soon..😛

LOL, Tej is soo cute, Nikhil and Tej will be a cute couple...😛Just my POV...(no idea why I'm always after Tej 😆)

What was that pooja about, for what? well I need to wait for the next chapter to know that...Looking forward to see more of Arjun and Purvi and as well as the suspense to be revealed.


Edited by Angelfreak_96 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Done commenting for all your stories, I should say, you're story is full with suspense and I'm really looking forward for your next update...
Please do PM me your next update, and don't worry I promise to give regular comment...😆😆

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