#CRAZY CHAT CORNER# 69

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acre

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1071

nope pratz i haven't anywhere i just little bit lost in my short shayari see i have already post on the last page of CCC 69

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coolpratz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1072

Originally posted by: acre
here are the five lines which i have thought in just five minutes,

unka chehra humare dil kuch sama gaya hain
dil unse pyaar karne ki koshish kar raha hain par kambhakt mausam deewar bankar mere aur unke beech mein aa gaya hain

unki ankhon mein khojne ka mann karta hain mushkil yeh hain woh mujhe apni ankhone dhoond na paye,
mere har shabd ko woh badi khoobsurati se samaj jati hain dil ko sukoon tab milega jab woh meri khamoshi ko samaj jaye,
meri shayari mein to woh hamesha rehti hain kash kabhi meri shayari unki dil mein hamesha ke liye reh jaye

superb...👏👏

its brilliant ..

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acre

@acre

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1073

pratz even i m also feeling sleepy too 😊
thanks for ur precious help otherwise this thread wont complete tonight,
i will see u at CCC 70,
hope u will come back tomorrow also,
gn md & tc,
lots of magical dreams r waiting for u in ur sleep so just sleep well

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coolpratz

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1074

Originally posted by: acre
nope pratz i haven't anywhere i just little bit lost in my short shayari see i have already post on the last page of CCC 69

yup..

n its brilliant

gotta go for now

see u later...

bye

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acre

@acre

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1075

thanks pratz for liking that short composition 😃😊

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LovePRSoham

@LovePRSoham

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1076

Acreji 👏👏👏 Awesome shayari... Thanks for sharing the link else I would have missed ji...😳

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LovePRSoham

@LovePRSoham

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1077

Oops Page 152 😲.. Chalo first nahi tho kya hua last to hai 😆😆

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-Naresh-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1078

Hello rachana. How r u? Gud mrng.

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acre

@acre

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Posted: 13 years ago

#1079

hello rachna ji & naresh 😊

i thought that page 151 suits to be last page of CCC 69 becoz its a palindrome number not a problem page no 152 sounds good also 😆