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Posted: 12 years ago
Hey!! I am so sorry I haven't been on the forum lately...but caught up with your story right now!! LOVEDDD IT! I loved the ARVI love part...so glad to see Purvi show her love to Arjun! And what a great proposal from Arjun's side too! Perfect in the rains :) It reminded me of the scene on the bridge in the rains! :P You really bring a smile to my face through your story. The chapters are getting better and better...you've woven them so well, it always ends on a note where you want to read what is next! :P I am lovong the soham track, so much better than the current one going on in the show...I really want to see how everyone reacts with Soham's identity out! Loved that Purvi told Teju first, since she seems the most sensible right now. I love Archana-Purvi interaction and how much it affects Archu to know Purvi is someone else's daughter. I love Soham, literally loveee him. Waht a sweetheart! I like how you bring shades to characters and make us love them...its great that you keep their personalities intact despite all the problems that come their way...I like Purvi being strong and being able to tell Manav that Ovi was behind the gundas, I like Arjun protecting Purvi even though eh was angry after Soham's revelation...I love how Manav is strong and knows how to make his children straighten up...They have so butchered the characters on PR, I only read your stories when i come by the forum..atleast it ends in a smile on our faces :)

Thanks a lot and waiting to read some more fantastic chapters from you :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
Abhi🤗Nice update.I loved this line 'Arjun doesn't love you, he loves Purvi. She didn't take him from you, he went to her.'So true Ovi is going crazy becaz she is not accepting reality.
Loved how Arjun went up to Purvi and whispers in her ears.Awww so cute.
U can feel Archana's pain as she thinks her daughter will be taken away from her.Teju is such a sensible and wise girl.She is so caring and knows how to sheer her sister up.I am happy to see her and Purvi bonding.Waiting to know what her reactions will be as she learns Vishnu is Soham.Will she believe Purvi?
I am just loving this story.
The part with Ovi on the balcony she could jump for all i care.She should be sent to a mental institution far away from India.
BTW Abhi i already had already read ur update before the PM.
Do continue.We Arvians are surviving on ppl's OS and FF as Arvi scenes are scarce these days.
Edited by ameilia - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: pp29

Hey!! I am so sorry I haven't been on the forum lately...but caught up with your story right now!! LOVEDDD IT! I loved the ARVI love part...so glad to see Purvi show her love to Arjun! And what a great proposal from Arjun's side too! Perfect in the rains :) It reminded me of the scene on the bridge in the rains! :P You really bring a smile to my face through your story. The chapters are getting better and better...you've woven them so well, it always ends on a note where you want to read what is next! :P I am lovong the soham track, so much better than the current one going on in the show...I really want to see how everyone reacts with Soham's identity out! Loved that Purvi told Teju first, since she seems the most sensible right now. I love Archana-Purvi interaction and how much it affects Archu to know Purvi is someone else's daughter. I love Soham, literally loveee him. Waht a sweetheart! I like how you bring shades to characters and make us love them...its great that you keep their personalities intact despite all the problems that come their way...I like Purvi being strong and being able to tell Manav that Ovi was behind the gundas, I like Arjun protecting Purvi even though eh was angry after Soham's revelation...I love how Manav is strong and knows how to make his children straighten up...They have so butchered the characters on PR, I only read your stories when i come by the forum..atleast it ends in a smile on our faces :)


Thanks a lot and waiting to read some more fantastic chapters from you :)



Hei Pooja...thank you so very much...i love the rain...if i could i would write rain in everything...the bridge scene was beautiful...so far ago...and u bring a smile to my face with ur comment...thanks for thinking the chapters are getting better...i guess hoepfully my writting has gotten better...i love soham hence his track here is good...i am very bias...when it comes to ankit...thanks for loving him too...i try my leave best to keep the track intact...glad u approve...the manav and purvi i felt in love with are strong chracters, so i write them that way...the way they use to be...thanks for liking it...😃
Edited by arjunaluis - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update Abhi. So finally Manav slap Ovi. She deserves this. I hope she will get few more in reel PR also.
Purvi telling Teju abt Soham. Is it real or dream. Hope it is real n Teju will help Purvi to get their Dada back.
Ovi jumped from balcony. Is she alive. Pls update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: ameilia

Abhi🤗Nice update.I loved this line 'Arjun doesn't love you, he loves Purvi. She didn't take him from you, he went to her.'So true Ovi is going crazy becaz she is not accepting reality.

Loved how Arjun went up to Purvi and whispers in her ears.Awww so cute.
U can feel Archana's pain as she thinks her daughter will be taken away from her.Teju is such a sensible and wise girl.She is so caring and knows how to sheer her sister up.I am happy to see her and Purvi bonding.Waiting to know what her reactions will be as she learns Vishnu is Soham.Will she believe Purvi?
I am just loving this story.
The part with Ovi on the balcony she could jump for all i care.She should be sent to a mental institution far away from India.
BTW Abhi i already had already read ur update before the PM.
Do continue.We Arvians are surviving on ppl's OS and FF as Arvi scenes are scarce these days.



Hei Ameilia...first about the line...if manav did this or allowed Archana to do this months ago...arvi wouldn't have separted... that was me when nobody brought Ovi beta back to reality...this is me now seeing Arjun and Ovi together......thanks for loving this story...about Ovi jumping...you must really hate her cause u don't care...who can blame u...about the PM guess it took me time since i have so many people to PM this days...though i enjoy doing it...i get to read ur comments...thanks for the comment again...will continue soon...will put in some Arvi scenes for u guys...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: PariD

Nice update Abhi. So finally Manav slap Ovi. She deserves this. I hope she will get few more in reel PR also.
Purvi telling Teju abt Soham. Is it real or dream. Hope it is real n Teju will help Purvi to get their Dada back.
Ovi jumped from balcony. Is she alive. Pls update soon



Yap she deserve more than one slap from Manav if u ask me...and he should have given it to her a long time ago...too late now...yes, it is real...Purvi did really tell Tej about Soham...now i have to wait and see what happens next...i mean wait and read...ovi alive or not...can't tell...yes will update soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
luvd ur updates... sry i was nt able to comment on ur earlier updates as my xam's were going on...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks for the update and the PM Abhi.

Trust me, even your emotional scenes are better than the sucky PR tracks we see now and then where people cry forever.

Manav teling off Ovi, go Manav 👍🏼

I hope Ovi is reformed or just sent back to Canada or something. If she dies too many people may feel guilty (I mean I know you're OS is a sensible one, unlike PR, but still).

ArVi's small scene was very cute, looking forward to their phone conversation.

Purvi telling Teju the secret, like that too - as we both agree on Teju being the sensible and rational one.

Originally posted by: arjunaluis

Sachin :- I am going out. I think I need a drink.

Archana stares at him.

Sachin :- I mean, I need fresh air.

😆 😆
Edited by peachesnplums - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
hey abhi...u never disappoint with ur updates... i loved this part...it was great...loved what arjun said to purvi'take care i love u and happy birthday' when he was leaving... archana-purvi convo was superb... teju got to know about vishnu being soham... i guess next part is going to be really interesting...cant wait... thanx for PM...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Heyya abhi..
Another superb chapter..first of all lovd its length..but it must be very tiring for u though..
I m seriously shocked after reading first para..i mean what will happen to ovi but for dat i surely have to wait..!
I loved how soham became angry wen archana told him not to celebrate purvi's birthday and coz of dat ovi truth came out..
Wow manav and arjun knocking some sense in ovi's head..those dialogues were best ha..
Hehehe i loved saching going out to take FRESH AIR..
And also ArVi moment wher he wishes her happy birthday..
The bond between archana and purvi is superbly shown in ur os..just love them..
Tej will kno abt soham..wht abt whole family when will they know..?
Hehe i again started asking questions will wait for your next update..


PS-m so happy dat ur trp increased this week..u even left DABH behind..good going my friend..proud of u..:)
Edited by ashvikluverrr - 12 years ago

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