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Posted: 13 years ago
Great going, Abhi. Cannot wait for the next chapter. Is Sachin going to confess voluntarily?
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: soapwatcher1

Great going, Abhi. Cannot wait for the next chapter. Is Sachin going to confess voluntarily?



I think you have already predicted it...😆😆 Yes he is...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Great going Abhi...i loved the part that Sachin pushed Purvi away when Manav was about to slap her...😛...update the next chap soon...
Edited by saf2012 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

PART Sachin..

Manav :- Sachin??? what are you doing?

Sachin :- What is right?

Manav :- What are you talking about?

Sachin :- Yes baba…Purvi doesn't deserve you slap. I do because the truth you asking her to tell, she can't tell. I can.

Archana holds Purvi.

Sachin :- The signature on the divorce paper wasn't aai's it was aaji's. Sachin tells the truth about how Savita forged Archana's signature and how he asked Archana to divorce Manav, when he realized that his plans wasn't going to work.

Manav grabs hold of Sachin's collar.

Manav :- WHY?

Sachin :- I wanted you to marry Shravani aai.

Manav :- What?

Sachin :- Yes baba. I thought Archana aai took away my mother's right that was what aaji has always told me.

Manav :- Aai told you all this?

Sachin :- Yes baba, but today I realized that you can never love anyone other than Archana aai and that she too loves all of us. I should have realized the day she asked all three of us rather than money. I become confused even than and when I told aaji, she told me that it was Archana aai's tactic to get more money.

Sachin takes a step towards Archana.

Sachin :- She doesn't love money baba...(Sachin is in tears) if she did she wouldn't remember everything about us for 18 years. You know baba, even today she cooks food that I loved when I was a child. Even today she kisses Teju's forehead when she sleeps. Yes, aai I saw you yesterday night.

Tej cries.

Sachin :- Forgive me aai. I made a big mistake. I should have never asked you to do it. I was wrong aai. I was so wrong.

Sachin cries and hugs Archana.

Archana :- It's ok. You have realized today that is more than enough for me. I love you beta, I will always love you.

Tej :- I am sorry too aai. I said so many bad things about you. I scolded you, I didn't know. I should have known, I stayed with you. You took care of me. I am sorry.

All three have a good cry and hug. Manav looks at them he smiles. Purvi comes to him and he smiles at her. Looking at Archana he becomes serious again.

Manav :- What about me, didn't you think how I would feel to lose you again. You should have told me.

Archana :- I know Manav, I am so sorry.

Archana hugs Manav.

Manav :- It's ok. We were both used. Aai used you weakest point, Sachin so that you would ask for the divorce. She knew that you would agree that you would do anything for Sachin. She used your love for Sachin and played us all.

Archana looks at Manav

Manav :- Yes, we made mistakes as well. We should have been more honest with each other, and I promise you starting today I will be more honest and I will never leave you again. Never.

Archana :- Yes, Manav. I love you.

They hug again.

Tej ;- Ok…I think that's enough for me. If I see any more I might start vomiting.

Purvi and Sachin laugh.

Purvi :- What people say is true, it is never nice to see your parents so romantic. Anyone else ok, not your parents…

Tej :- Shall we go out then.

Sachin :- Ok. I want to go to the beach. It's been so long since I have seen it.

Archana :- Come back by eleven.

Tej :- Ok aai…sounds so nice aai…I have been wanting to say that for years.

At the beach Arjun joins Sachin, Tej and Purvi. Tej and Sachin are shooting balloons…

Arjun :- Meri Jaan…looking beautiful today. Even these red roses can't match you beauty. I think my heart is having a heart attack.

Purvi smiles at him.

Arjun :- Only a smile. This heart needs more than a smile. A smile is a small medicine it's needs a powerful dose, how about a kiss.

Purvi :- In your dreams.

Arjun :- Everything starts with a dream, meri jaan.

Tej screams and is jumping up and down.

Tej :- Come on…dada…I am winning so easily.

Sachin :- It's not my fault that you are better in boy's game then I am..

Tej :- Dada…

Tej runs after Sachin…

Arjun :- So it worked?

Purvi :- Yes it worked.

Arjun :- Now ovi..

Purvi :- Tom Ovi…Now we dance…I am so happy today…

Purvi takes Arjun's hand.

Arjun :- There is a first time for everything. Someone is not thinking about her family today. Wow.

Purvi :- No. This moment, right now it is our moment. Today we make a memory, and I want to remember it for the rest of our lives.

Purvi kneels down on one leg.

Purvi :- So my hero I ask you again…I can I have this dance.

Arjun :- Yes.

The D house…

Archana :- Manav what is all this.

Manav has lightened up the whole house with candle lights. Manav plays a song and comes in front of Archana.

Archana :- Manav…What are you doing?

Manav kneels down on one leg.

Manav :- Can I have this dance?

Archana smiles at him and takes his hand.

Both dance to Yeh Hassen Vaadiyan song.

Balan is watching Purvi from a distance. She is like you bhaiya, she might look like her mother but she is brave like you. Balan thinks to himself, I need to give her Harish bhaiya's letters before father reaches her. She needs to know who her father really is.

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice updates again Abhi. I liked it. Finally Sachu n Teju realised their mistakes. Arman reunited n that too without Arvi seperation 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing update...i liked it...happy in ur story also ARMAN reunited...and ARVI is still together...:):):) eager to know that what balan is going to do next...please write scenes b/w purvi and soham if u r okay with it...as its ur story...:):) and ya thanx for the pm...:):)
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: latika_AshVik

amazing update...i liked it...happy in ur story also ARMAN reunited...and ARVI is still together...:):):) eager to know that what balan is going to do next...please write scenes b/w purvi and soham if u r okay with it...as its ur story...:):) and ya thanx for the pm...:):)



Thanks a lot...Yes i will write scenes between them in my next part...i love them too...😃😃 very cute bro and sis those two...😳😳
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: PariD

nice updates again Abhi. I liked it. Finally Sachu n Teju realised their mistakes. Arman reunited n that too without Arvi seperation 😃



Hei deepika...change of pic i see...thanks again..yes what is happening here is almost the same with PR except Arvi are still together...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
hehe abhi awsum..lovd it...m still smiling over arvi scene..how great it wuld look like to see our purvi kneeling before arjun asking for a dance...hmm heaven it seems..!!
lovd this part and lovd evry dialogues..u shud take dat cv stuff seriously... 😛
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ashvikluverrr

hehe abhi awsum..lovd it...m still smiling over arvi scene..how great it wuld look like to see our purvi kneeling before arjun asking for a dance...hmm heaven it seems..!!
lovd this part and lovd evry dialogues..u shud take dat cv stuff seriously... 😛



Thanks...even i was thinking how nice it would be to see purvi kneeling before arjun...would be so different right?? for the first time purvi taking the first step and not arjun...thanks for loving this part and the dialogues...Cv's stuff...let me think about it...i am not that good...i am just ok...😊

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