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Posted: 13 years ago
once again im lost for words...thanks for ur effort...loved the part whn purvi tells arjun bout making their memory...loved it all...cnt wait for the next update...u shd really consider writing... 😊 😊 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: diana72

once again im lost for words...thanks for ur effort...loved the part whn purvi tells arjun bout making their memory...loved it all...cnt wait for the next update...u shd really consider writing... 😊 😊 😊



Thanks...i also liked writting that part...to me that's how you should life live...that's why i wrote it...thanks for liking it...😆😆 second person to tell me i should consider writting today...must be doing something right...thanks...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Oh Abhi! Great update as always! I love how the Deshmukh family is finally reunited ❤️ and finally an Arjun and Purvi moment! I've missed them in your story! and ahh, Balan 😡 Anxious for your next update! Can't wait to see what will happen with Purvi and Balan's family..
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: arjunpurvixo

Oh Abhi! Great update as always! I love how the Deshmukh family is finally reunited ❤️ and finally an Arjun and Purvi moment! I've missed them in your story! and ahh, Balan 😡 Anxious for your next update! Can't wait to see what will happen with Purvi and Balan's family..



Yes..the Arvi part was for you Arvi fans..hopefully i have done them justice...would have gave them a moment earlier but then i was focusing on Soham-Purvi...I haven't written my next part yet...still thinking on what to write...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: arjunaluis



Yes..the Arvi part was for you Arvi fans..hopefully i have done them justice...would have gave them a moment earlier but then i was focusing on Soham-Purvi...I haven't written my next part yet...still thinking on what to write...😊


Aw, you did do them justice, don't worry! 😊 Take your time Abhi and I know this OS will turn out to be amazing!
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Posted: 13 years ago
👏Loved the post!!!!! I wish the CV's really take a hint on how to make your viewers happy! Such joy to finally read about ARVI. WAs truly missing seeing them since past week;s melodrama. Even I was so bored with Arman reunion that I just had to forward most of it. I think After Sushant it's hard to imagine a romantic Arman also, even though Hiten is brilliant, they have butchered his role so muhc since the leap, I had no emotion seeing them today.

Your latest chapter was so amazing, I smiled throughout imagining our beloved fiery Purvi using her brains at home matters instead of just the office and finally being successful at it too. Loved the making memory part, it was so cute!

I wanna see my ambitious, arrogant Arjun and my fiery bold and confident Purvi back together making more memories on screen. But till the CV's decide to grace us, I will live my hope through your posts!

Great work! Loved it and waiting for more:)😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: pp29

👏Loved the post!!!!! I wish the CV's really take a hint on how to make your viewers happy! Such joy to finally read about ARVI. WAs truly missing seeing them since past week;s melodrama. Even I was so bored with Arman reunion that I just had to forward most of it. I think After Sushant it's hard to imagine a romantic Arman also, even though Hiten is brilliant, they have butchered his role so muhc since the leap, I had no emotion seeing them today.

Your latest chapter was so amazing, I smiled throughout imagining our beloved fiery Purvi using her brains at home matters instead of just the office and finally being successful at it too. Loved the making memory part, it was so cute!


I wanna see my ambitious, arrogant Arjun and my fiery bold and confident Purvi back together making more memories on screen. But till the CV's decide to grace us, I will live my hope through your posts!

Great work! Loved it and waiting for more:)😊



First of all thanks again...yes hiten was brillant in the past two episodes...great display of emotion...yes hard to imagine hiten as manav...too used to sushant...but getting there..😊thanks for liking Arvi moment...😃😃it was especially done for you guys who are Arvi fans...thanks for thinking it was amazing...even i waiting to see how the Cv's are going to bring Arvi back...

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Posted: 13 years ago

Part:-Family Time

Purvi :- For you.

Soham opens the container. He smiles.

Soham :- Vada pav. I love this also. How do you know?

Purvi :- because I like it. Actually my mother loves it a lot, so I made it for her and you.

Soham :- Thank you. Eat with me.

Purvi :- It's ok, I have eaten.

Soham :- At least sit with me.

Purvi :- Ok.

Soham :- You have given me so much but I haven't given you anything yet. Tell me, what you want.

Purvi :- Nothing. I just want to spend time with you. I don't know why, but every time we are together I feel safe. I feel comfortable...I don't know like...like we...

Soham :- Like we are family?

Purvi looks at him.

Soham :- Because I feel the same, maybe last...

Purvi :- last life we were family...like real brother and sister.

Soham :- See we even finish each other sentence. There is something that connects us.

Soham breaks his vada pav into half and feeds purvi. She eats it.

Soham :- Will you come with me?

Purvi :- Where?

Soham :- Dinner. I want you to meet my family.

Purvi is thinking about what happened that day while waiting for Arjun. His mother's face, I have seen it before but where, when.

Soham :- Don't be sacred, they are not all bad I will take care of you. You trust me don't you?

This is my chance to find out more about his mother.

Purvi :- Ok, when.

Soham :- Tom?

Purvi :- See you tom big brother.

Soham watches Purvi go. I want to buy her something. Big brothers always buy things for their sister, but she won't accept anything from my dirty money. Its ok I will find a part time job, but what job to do?

The D clan house.

Tej and Archana are playing chess. Tej is teaching Archana to play.

Tej :- Come on aai...knight can't move in a straight line, only in L shape.

Archana :- If you keep shouting at me, how am I supposed to remember.

Purvi smiles at them.

Purvi :- Where is baba?

Archana :- Up in the balcony.

Purvi goes to see Manav. Manav is lying down and watching the sky.

Purvi :- Baba, what are you doing?

Manav :- Waiting for it to rain. It has been so long since I enjoyed the rain in Mumbai.

Purvi sits with Manav.

Sachin comes from work.

Sachin :- No aai...not there move the queen here. Check.

Tej:- Oh I see...two verses one. I will still beat you. Sachin dada has never beaten me before.

Sachin :- Show off.

Tej makes faces at Sachin.

Archana :- Cut it out, both of you.

They both smile at Archana. Archana moves her castle.

Archana :- Check mate.

Tej :- No...no...no...

Sachin and Archana high five each other.

Sachin :- Aai you are great. Tej has finally lost.

Tej :- No. It was luck. Let's play again.

It starts to rain. Manav and Purvi are enjoying the rain.

Manav :- You love the rain too.

Purvi :- More than anything. You know baba, when I was small and it rained I use to run out and play. I would always dream that you were beside me playing with me. All the other babas were there making sure that...

Manav looks at Purvi.

Manav :- Let's do it now. I am here now, so come.

Manav starts to kick the rain water and Purvi joins in.

Archana :- Manav is going to get wet.

Archana runs up and sees Purvi and Manav playing in the rain. They look so happy, like a father and daughter would. Archana remembers how she used to play with Purvi as a child. Her eyes are filled with tears. Tej comes. Archana holds Tej's hand.

Archana :- Let them have this moment. It has been Purvi's dream since she was a kid.

Tej :- Then come with me. I have a dream I want you to make come true.

10 minutes later.

Tej :- Come on Aai. The rain is going to stop.

Archana comes out, she is wearing a track suit.

Tej :- Wow, you look different.

Archana :- Tej, I look weird, I don't know how to wear this.

Tej :- It's ok aai, you will let get used to it. Come let's go outside.

Archana :- Outside? What will people think?

Tej :- Who cares what people think. Come on, let's go you promised, you will make my dream come true. Sachin dada has gotten everything ready. Please aai come.

Archana :- Ok, let's go.

Sachin has set a tennis net in front of the chawl.

Tej :- Yes, what great rain. Ok aai. You stand this side; I will go to the other end. I will serve the ball and you must return it, if you don't I get a point. Ok?

Archana :- Ok.

Manav and Purvi hear Tej's voice, they see that Archana and Tej are playing tennis and Tej is winning easily, Archana reaches the ball but can't send back the ball to Tej side. Tej is jumping.

Manav :- Let's go help Archana.

Tej :- See dada, aai might beat me in chess but she can't beat me in tennis.

Manav :- I can.

Tej :- This is not fair baba. I am playing with aai.

Manav :- It was so one sided. Let's play doubles. One strong player, one weak player.

Tej :- I choose aai. Together we will beat you for sure.

Manav :- Ok, then Purvi go and change. You are in my team. Wear Tej's track suit and come.

Purvi :- But baba...

Tej :- It's in my cupboard. Faster the rain might stop. Go run, you have 2 minutes.

Purvi runs up.

Manav :- Sachin you will be supporting us right.

Sachin :- No. I am with aai always. Aai will definitely win.

Arjun :- I am with Manav uncle. Only uncle will win. Sorry aunty but my uncle is the best.

Tej :- You and your uncle. When are you going to support me?

Arjun :- Never. Manav uncle is the best. Give up already Tej.

Tej :- Baba has won 48 times but lost 49. Today he will lose his 50th match against me.

Arjun :- Let's see. Uncle don't lose or Tej will never let me hear the end of this.

Manav :- Don't worry beta. We will win.

Arjun smiles at Manav.

Purvi :- Ok, I am ready.

Sorry guys for the late update, i have been busy this week. Hopefully you guys like it, let me know what you think.

Edited by arjunaluis - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow it was amazing...update soon...thanks for the pm :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
Aw this was just so cute! It put a smile on my face. Family is one of the most precious things a person could have and I love how you implied the fact that no one is ever too old to have some fun with the family 😆 I can't wait to see what will happen at Soham's family dinner 😲 Thanks for the PM by the way!

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