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Hei, jai...you're welcome...you are also a wonderful person...in this short time i have come to know you, i have really liked you...and i also really like india...i have been there twice..my best friend is in india..yes our club is going to be a sensation...😉 ok i have decided to write a poem here, it is a new one that i just wrote..it's my first draft..please give me a real comment..
Emptiness this heart feels,
is as deep as the silent ocean,
Just to breathe,
takes everything that i have,
Oh God,
stop this madness,
Make this heart understand,
that my love can be never mine,
Pain and pleasure, Love and heartbreak,
they say it comes and goes,
Then why does this heart still bleed,
why can't this pain end,
Try as i may,
wish as i might,
To forget you,
is impossible,
You are in every breathe i take,
You are the inspriation of my work,
You are my soul,
You are the beat of my heart.
So what do you think??
Emptiness this heart feels,
is as deep as the silent ocean,
Just to breathe,
takes everything that i have,
Oh God,
stop this madness,
Make this heart understand,
that my love can be never mine,
Pain and pleasure, Love and heartbreak,
they say it comes and goes,
Then why does this heart still bleed,
why can't this pain end,
Try as i may,
wish as i might,
To forget you,
is impossible,
You are in every breathe i take,
You are the inspriation of my work,
You are my soul,
You are the beat of my heart.
So what do you think??
