The Raging Storm (ARVI) - Chpt 22 - Page 98 - Page 65

👏Omg. I LOVED LOVED LOVED LOVED it Laurie...🤗

WOW !! Laurie !! You outdid yourself, gal !! Amazing !!! I was reading it all with eyes popping out and with the silliest grin on my face !! That says it all !!!
You wouldn't believe it, but I was seeing our very own Arjun and Purvi in the entire dance and the whole scene !!! More so, Rithvik !!

Perfecto !!! 👏 ❤️ This is for you !!!! MUAAAH !!!


I read it in a rush, couldn't wait to see how it all goes, now got to go read it all over again... brb...

Ok, back again..

Let me say this first, The meeting was as unique, lovely, and worthy of your style.. Well worth the anticipation and wait. She thinks it was all a dream .....
"His Flower" !! 😆

"he saw the rest of his life with her.." ❤️... Reminded me of Arjun on the star gazing night..

"Mine !!" - tum meri ho !! 😳..

Real Emoticon Fest, Laurie... Bravo Again... 👏👏

No guesses on the future for me.. Will just wait eagerly for more to come...You are one CV, we have full confidence on that you will give us what we want and much more ..😃

Laurie!!! U out did urself tonight my love!!!

wow...laurie u really outdid urself..this ws by far the best chapter of urs accotding to me..marvellous...!!


wow laurie..!!..i culdnt express it in words hw much i liked it...m really amazed..the thing which v wer waiting from 17 chapters is in this chapter and i wanted to read this chapter vry slow so dat it wuld never end...its end wa vry tragic..arjun nd karan both wer furious at each other and u ended da chapter wid so much suspense..nw its lyk u better post another chapter right away or else i will be mad thinking what will happen next...though i kno i have to wait though and i will be eagerly waiting for nxt one...u surely are an awesome writer...arvi meeting it ws so so ao damn awesome and dat song tum ho.. will be playing in my mind for sum tym...!!!

Applause my friend, applause!! Sorry cannot do emoticons from my phone!
Brilliant again better than the previous! That drug did kick in I hope it's not lethal, I know but still!
The dance and Arjun Purvi with each other could imagine it so well, extremely well written! The song is just perfect with scene u portray Laurie! Laurie Karma and KD are sooo always there for Purvi, so heartwarming and I did not miss Arjun saying in underlined I will do ANYTHING for you, to Purvi! The intensity with MINE for both was well depicted!

Trust Purvi to be so unabashed only as she thought she was dreaming and teasing and dancing with HER Arjun, the MAN of her Dreams ;-)

Can feel war between Arjun and Karan, only because they don't know yet the whole truth!!
They met only to be parted! Can imagine Purvi post realizing she was not dreaming... her tears, her embarrassment, et al!

Arjun still has her phone in her pocket( do not disturb from post Purvi confession was a great idea) and so at least he will know it's not a dream, perhaps only a dream come true ;-)

Purvi completing her presence in their dream and Arjun absolutely baffled by it... Aah true love!



A good writer still has their audience at the edge of their seat well into the 18 th chapter Laurie Karma, and you are doing that very well my dear!
Lol
Totally fabulously done!!!

awesum update dear... luved it...

OMG...what an amazing update...finally ARVI met...awww loved their dance and that song totally belongs to ARVI...and i cant imagine anyone else in that song...ur updates r always treat to read and it made my day...:):):)

Laurie, absolutely awesome, spellbinding from word one to the last. My heart lurched, beautiful choice of words, she owns his soul, what a way to express her total hold on him. Theirs is a love to cherish and remember. I felt a vague ache at the end of it all thinking of the real ARVI and the way the CVs have butchered their love story. But we have you and as Jyothi says you will never disappoint.

"Great job" seems pitifully inadequate, you have more than outdone yourself. You should be writing and publishing novels for a living.

Dil maange more and more! ❤️

Thank you for a delicious, most tantalizing after dinner treat!!