The Raging Storm (ARVI) - Chpt 22 - Page 98 - Page 19

Originally posted by: Urben

Dear laurie i jussttt loveeed ur chapters 4 and 5 it was amzing and sooo very heart touching...loved it till the end...just now eagrly wating for ur chapter 6 ... :) please keep contue writting like this u are very talented on wrtting about arjun and purvis love story and their pavitra rishta...love for it laurie...:) plzzz post chapter 6 soonn... :)

Originally posted by: soapwatcher1

Dear, dear Laurie, I dropped in griping and moping as I haven't had a chance to check the updates today and what do I get? Manna from the heavens, a gift from the gods, a virtual treat at the Savoy!!

You have outdone yourself! I loved the way you portrayed the 7 Lovelies! Yes, I got it along with Abhi, our conversation was right along the lines of how we come across!😆 I had to laugh out loud at the term Himalayan! But at the rate you are going, endearing Arjun to all, I might have to relent and accept an apologythe size of the Rockies or the Alps instead!!

As Abhi says, you enrapture,enthrall and hold us captive with this web that you have woven around Arjun and Purvi!! What a subtle touch, youtiedArjun's I love Purvi right back to the first chapter, gave me the chills!

The pen, hmm, who knew Arjun had it in him? Hidden depths, untold and unfelt sensibilities, ourArjun has become quite the man, thanks to you!

Shyamala is right we worry less and less about Arjun and Purvi in PR as we now have our own ARVI ensconced within thismagicalworld that you haveconjured up to delight us!

Bewitching! Mindblowing, Spellbinding!Cannot wait for the next chapter! Dil maange more! 👏

Originally posted by: archverma10

LAURIE!!!!!! What an awesome chapter!!! Thank u so much for the cameo :). I do feel that the 7 of us have become great friends and a soothing cup of tea with young Mr. Kirloskar is just the perfect afternoon...count me in anytime!!!

Now as to the chapter...absolutely loved it...and especially the attention to detail in regards to the pen. I love noticing the small details nobody else does...almost always it's the little things that wind up being the biggest part or a story!! And the trip to London for Purvi. Very fitting. Just as It happened to end up being Purvis company that AK/Manav bought..thereby ending young AK to India in the first place...closiing the circle with Purvi going to London in the same coincidental manner is right on! Making the next chapter, of course,the one we are all going to be holding our breaths for!!!!

Keep it coming girl 😆

Originally posted by: bee5

Who in the world can think of including audience in a story, only you can do it, Laurie. This is one of a kind and so are you!

The cameos and the telepathic touch were both excellent.

RD! & Karan Dhanjani!! Both were a bit spooky for me 😆. In the beginning the concierge guy, RD, left me a little confused .. but later I literally stopped when I read "Karan Dhanjani". I could continue reading only after a few seconds.😆

Enjoy chapter 5 and being part of the tea-party at Savoy. Thank you for including me.

Originally posted by: Inkpen4877

Oh My Wow-

I just I have no words...This was lovely! You are a very talented writer!

Originally posted by: soapwatcher1

Dear Laurie, had to come back for a second read, third read, this is getting as addicting as, er, ahem, RD's face!😳 Noticed some finer nuances - the pen ended up with me? Purvi's mom? was that intended? Archana soothing her erring boy just as a mother would, that was funny! You are too clever! Cannot wait for Karan D and Arjun to have a face off!

If only the reel story enfolded like this, sigh!

Again, well done!👏

Originally posted by: Axiom123

Thanks Archana 😃 You are quite welcome. I hope I did you justice 😃

I love the finer details myself. For me it adds the finesse to the story.

Thank you for catching the subtleties. Yes, it has to come back full circle - I'm all about the yin and yang ☯️

The next one is going to be interesting to write 😉

Originally posted by: Axiom123

I doubt there can be anything as addicting as, er, ahem, RD's face 🤣

I take the fifth 😉

I'm so there with you 😍

👏 I knew you would catch on - there's my brilliant girl 😃 at second read, not first time around 😭

Of course the pen had to end up with you - don't you have to give your damaad a dowry?

Dowry? what dowry? 😆 The boy has to be properly repentant first (though you are doing a stupendous job on his behalf!!)

A very priceless gift? Well what could be more priceless than his Purvilicious Pen? 😆 (my beti herself? 😉)sure your samdhan Archana would highly approve of you giving her ladla beta this most special gift 😆

And yes, only a mother could soothe her sons ruffled feathers like that - so it had to be Archana 😃 even her words rang true

I like it that you all are decrypting my puzzle boxes. Everybody has been able to get different bits and pieces so far. Its awesome 😃 You are awesome! And I mean it😊

Its not just chapters - its puzzles too 😉

Originally posted by: Axiom123

Thank you Janhvi 😃 [Laurie curtsies]

Your posts were part of my inspiration 😉

What can I say - stud puppy has a special place in my heart so I may not be as hard on him as I should be 😉 🤣

'My Arjun' or should I say Archana's ladla beta has many facets and hopefully I can convey them to you all 😃

@ bold - I am honored😊 but lol, please don't tell me my Arjun bashing so got to you that you had to take up the cudgels on his behalf!!😆 He could not have asked for a better person, I am loving your characterization of him. ⭐️