The Raging Storm (ARVI) - Chpt 22 - Page 98 - Page 18

Originally posted by: abhimg

Dear Laurie,

On second read...the group of ladies...you know you have caught very well the subtle characteristics of each of the ladies at that table 👏and very very aptly given dialogues to each one of us...how well you know us through our writings and how well the dialogues suit the person concerned...it was all great...but especially loved Shyamala's - we won't bite...Your saying- Won't bite hard and Janhvi's-coughing into her napkin right after that...and then you change the comment when you say it out aloud...Bravo...kudos...really hilarious and too too good...👍🏼

Originally posted by: sashashyam

Dear Laurie,

One question that teases me: Arjun says he switched his pen with hers. If he had simply pinched her pen, which must have been a pretty ordinary affair, there would have been no problem. But he left his pen in its place. Now his must have been, at the very least, a Mont Blanc. What do you think Purvi would have done when she came back to the conference table and found that, like Aladdin, she had got a brand new upmarket pen in return for her old one?

As for telepathy, it does work when the bond is very strong, not just between lovers but also between a mother and her children. I was so pleased that you had thought of this for Arjun-Purvi, it instantly takes them to a different and higher plane.

As for all the cameos, they are uniformly neat, and I am sure all of us would have liked them a lot. All the more so as you have decided to make us 'lovely', an adjective that I would be a tad hesitant to apply to myself, though I not at all bad-looking, especially when, as my son used to say when he was a little boy, when I have "put my face on"!

You know, Laurie, now that you are doing so very well with your story, there is another great plus for me, and I dare say for many of us in the forum. It is that we need not now bother so much about what happens to Arjun and Purvi in PR, which is bound to be anything but satisfactory judging from the way things are moving. Instead, we can cocoon ourselves with your Arjun and Purvi and be at peace. So, I am sure, will you.

Shyamala

Originally posted by: abhimg

⭐️ My dear Shyamala,

👏 You have this innate brilliance about putting in words, expressing so eloquently, what one only thinks...and you express it so beautifully...so free flowingly...the practicality of it all...i just feel like listening to you...you sound like Obi One (spelling?) from Star Wars...the wise one...beautifully and well put...

Hence, that justifies my spending hours watching old ARVI scenes and reading this forum...

😆

👏

Originally posted by: Axiom123

Thank you for reading Jdronamraju (your name dear?) 😃

The 'Clumsy Girl' scene came from the Valentine's Day episode (02/14/2012).

I will let you in on a little secret to my writing. If I ever mention or reference an actual scene from PR I will always give the date of the episode somewhere in the chapter. I like to be a little cryptic sometimes to see if the audience can figure it out 😉

Hope you enjoy the upcoming installments 😃