The Raging Storm (ARVI) - Chpt 22 - Page 98 - Page 21

Originally posted by: jdronamraju

My name is Jyothi..thanks for your help...

Your writing is amazing.. !! I am enjoying every word of it... we can literally visualize arjun and purvi and their reactions in every scene with your words.. your story is a balm to our anguish over the debacle that it has become in the real story...

thank you so much.. will wait for the next chapter from you impatiently !! :):)

Originally posted by: abhimg

Dear Laurie,

It is only my 3rd read--

-Simply love the dialogues at tea, very apt- and i had not caught that Janhvi- Purvi's mom having the pen 😉...Shyamala's practical and very wise advice (which is why the Obi van title to her)-..."Fates can be cruel but we are masters of our own destinies..."

-Loved your quoting Tagore in there was like icing on the cake...

-Finally saw the pen episode, hats off to you for such brilliant imagination and handily tying to that episode...

-To see Arjun/Rithvik blush...oh what i would not give to see that look!!! 😍

-Arjun's flat- "Even if it takes me seven lifetimes...I will right all the wrongs..." - please Arjun don't wait for the next lifetime, your FLOWER will have wilted by then!!!

-Purvi - getting into the car- wanting to open the window to enjoy the rain- you tied it from when Arjun gives her a lift and in the car she opens the window and he says- "Yeh kya kar rahi ho"...as she enjoys the rain...AND there in we have the title- THE RAGING STORM!!!

-Talking about island (from Shyamala's quote)...if they are shipwrecked- Arjun better have his coat on - so he can cool-ly and gentlemanly-put it around her to protect her from the cold...😳

lol and many thanks Laurie...just want to sip a cup of green T and enjoy reading this again and again...and again...until we get the next one...😍🤗

Originally posted by: sashashyam

Dear Bee5.

I do hope so, and in any case, even if the PR CVs were blind (as usual), to the possibilities a payal opens up, Laurie can always opt for creative licence and get the payal back to Arjun. It is a classical love token, and FAR more romantic than a pen.

Just think of what Laurie can make of the scene when Arjun kneels at Purvi's feet and fastens the payal round her ankle. In the old days, the blushing maiden would have had slender bare feet, which would have made the fastening procedure more elegant. But Arjun has to make do with what he has, and one hopes that despite having had no practice in such matters, he knows how to avoid getting the payal entangled in the straps of Purvi's flats. Also that Purvi uses Krack cream regularly; badly chapped heels would be most off-putting even for a devoted and uncritical lover!

Then again, if Arjun can rhapsodize over something so mundane as a pen just because it had once belonged to his love, it says a great deal for the strength of his passion for Purvi!

Shyamala

Originally posted by: Darlyne

Dear Laurie,

Finally I caught up! I am so happy that I did. These are absolutely beautiful posts! You can write a romantic novel on ArVi or find the investors and make a movie, it will be hit. We have many creative writers on this forum along with you. Excellent job!🤗

Originally posted by: Axiom123

Somewhat 😉

I'm on the side of true love. ❤️ 😍

We have this guy in the office who's supposed to be taking care of these things but his damn diaper keeps falling off and he's always missing his deadlines.

So I have to step in when he's "indisposed" to make sure the world doesn't go into a cataclysmic shock from a lack of lovin' 🤣

@Laurie.. next chapter please...

Hi Laurie, I am very very happy to read your wonderful thoughts/analysis/chapters...what I can say about you...I can say I am big fan of Laurie...I am so lucky I didn't watch last few epis...bcz of so much work...but today morning I started and red all written updates and our frineds beautiful comments...at least story is moving forward...

All Characters in PR compare to Indian stock Market...

Savitha/Sachin and Punni: Bull Market

Archana and Purvi: Bear market

Arjun: Flat and choppy Market

Manav: High Volatile Market

DK: Holiday for Market

Originally posted by: ramki1

Hi Laurie, I am very very happy to read your wonderful thoughts/analysis/chapters...what I can say about you...I can say I am big fan of Laurie...I am so lucky I didn't watch last few epis...bcz of so much work...but today morning I started and red all written updates and our frineds beautiful comments...at least story is moving forward...

All Characters in PR compare to Indian stock Market...

Savitha/Sachin and Punni: Bull Market

Archana and Purvi: Bear market

Arjun: Flat and choppy Market

Manav: High Volatile Market

DK: Holiday for Market

Hi Ramki,

Originally posted by: abhimg

Hi Ramki,

Liked ur characterization and likening to the stock market...but bear markets bhi turn hote hain and we are all waiting for the tides to turn...especially the flat market...better not stay flat forever...and as regards volatility, that will always remain...so please don't expect that aspect of the markets (ieManav) to change at all...Loved DK - markets closed for holiday...🤣

Originally posted by: Axiom123

Thank you Aakanksha 😃

I appreciate your comments - feedback feeds the writing collective so I appreciate you taking the time to leave this for me.😃

I hope you enjoy the rest 😃