The Raging Storm (ARVI) - Chpt 22 - Page 98

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ashu

@white.band

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Posted: 13 years ago

#151

thnx for the chapter..hope arvi becomes soon one😃

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purethought

@purethought

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Posted: 13 years ago

#152

Oh My God Laurie!😊

The fifth chapter is not only interesting because of the seven friends 😆 but so emotional because of the feeling you have generated in Arjun (I can feel his sorrow😔) ...I love the way he refers to Purvi as his flower ..

like I keep saying, the CVs need to not just borrow your thoughts but actually think like you..😳⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️

Your chapters are so beautiful and loving 😳

Loved the setting (Savoy hotel) and how you are bringing Purvi all the way to London. Oh me gosh.. am so excited and looking forward to how their reunion will look like!😳.. can't wait..😍 that too, in London!☺️😍

I loved how Purvi heard him say I love you .. across continents.. wonderful description😳 I know you will do major justice to their reunion!👏

Wonderful Laurie... This is really awesome fan fiction!👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️

Trish

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Aakanksha_7

@Aakanksha_7

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Posted: 13 years ago

#153

hey sry fo late rply though i read ur post yesterdy it is fab
n ya thnks fo updatin d 5th part so soon its tooo gooodd
v dnt get to watch our ARVI these days ur post r treat to watch keep up d good work
do cntinue soon
vil wait fr it

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abhimg

@abhimg

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Posted: 13 years ago

#154

Dear Laurie,

Thanks for the delicious tea at the "Savoy"...hmmm...still savoring it...and for my cameo appearance in this chapter 5...☺️ 7 sisters...and that too in such superb company...am flattered...

Now starts the excitement...oooh...can feel the butterflies in my stomach...with all the excitement...I do hope Arjun will take Janhvi's advice (i think it was her) and totally SWEEEP Purvi off her feet...

TOTALLY agree with Shyamala about the TELEPATHY between ARVI depicting the deep love between Arjun and Purvi and that as Shyamala aptly said catapults them into a different league of lovers...that was tooo tooo good...very romantic and beautiful...like it came from the depths of the heart...

I had missed the pen episode and where Arjun calls her a "clumsy girl"...will look for it again...

Laurie, hats off to you, you rivet, revive, capture...enrich...excite...with your writing and make our dils mange more MORE MORE...so much so that we can visualize each scene, each feeling...OMG...its absolutely AMMMAZZZiiinnnggg!!

👏⭐️👍🏼

Many thanks for this added treat...

Can't wait for Purvi's arrival to London...Loved the names too, waiter RD, Owner of Karma= Karan Dhanjani...love it all...

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Absoluv

@Absoluv

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Posted: 13 years ago

#155

SUPERB dear..👏.luv ur writing.👍🏼..am now getting excited to see how Arjun sweeps Purvi off her feet and what they feel for each other & how affected both are when near each other...😉

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jdronamraju

@jdronamraju

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Posted: 13 years ago

#156

does anyone remember which is the "clumsy girl" episode?

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Old username: salvatore-nina

@FireLordPhoenix

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Posted: 13 years ago

#157

@ jdronamraju - Trish remembers that episode. 😆 I remember a couple of people had asked a couple of times and Trish always had the answer.

@Laurie - 👏

Wonderful yet again. At first when I came on to the forum this morning I thought - do my eyes deceive or did Laurie update Ch 5 already? It was such a pleasant treat.

Loved how you incorporated the wonderful ladies from the forum into your tale. Arjun seriously needed that kind of advice and we all know he wasn't going to get it from the Ks and Ds. Eagerly waiting for the next part.

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abhimg

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Posted: 13 years ago

#158

Dear Laurie,

On second read...the group of ladies...you know you have caught very well the subtle characteristics of each of the ladies at that table 👏and very very aptly given dialogues to each one of us...how well you know us through our writings and how well the dialogues suit the person concerned...it was all great...but especially loved Shyamala's - we won't bite...Your saying- Won't bite hard and Janhvi's-coughing into her napkin right after that...and then you change the comment when you say it out aloud...Bravo...kudos...really hilarious and too too good...👍🏼

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Axiom

@Axiom

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Posted: 13 years ago

#159

Originally posted by: sashashyam
Dear Laurie,

Oh yes, I did, and so will the rest of the forum - enjoy this unexpected bonus, I mean.

You are one clever girl: whoever would have thought of Arjun making off with Purvi's pen so early on in their relationship? When he did not even now what he was getting into at that. A very deft twist, and you have spun it into a whole, utterly natural and delightful chapter. Conjuring up something so entertaining and yet solid out of an airy nothing calls for special skills, above all that of imagination. That, Laurie, you obviously have in spades!

The telepathy touch is also admirable. I loved it. So much, much better than simply making it something imagined by Purvi. It is part of the lore about le grand amour between two people who are halves of a whole, that when one feels anything very deeply - especially great sorrow or pain - the other senses an echo of that feeling. Remember Laila and Majnu - when he is whipped, the same red weals appear on her back.

By showing that Arjun and Purvi are linked by a love so deep and strong that it makes them telepathic, you have elevated them to the pantheon of the classic lovers. Most of those -Romeo & Juliet, Shirin-Farhad, Laila-Majnu, Antony-Cleopatra, Hero-Leander - came to a tragic end, but I am sure that in your hands, Arjun and Purvi will be spared any such fate.

Your tale has now settled down to a nice, smooth flow, and if there are eddies and bubbles, it reminds me of champagne and not of rapids ahead. At least for the present. So we can settle down to enjoy it without any immediate fears of a shipwreck. If ever there should be one, I am sure you will find a nice, sunny uninhabited isle where the two can get acquainted all over again, over coconut water, if not masala chai!

Oh yes, thanks for my very nice little cameo. I am truly flattered to be included in this exclusive group of the Seven Sisters!

Once again, warmest congratulations on your thriving new baby, and take care.

Shyamala

Dear Shyamala,

I am so happy you like this installment. It was so much fun to write 😃 You are welcome for the cameo... I hope I did you justice 😉

I tried to capture the essence of ARVI as I see them. There are so many nuances to scenes that color this couple for me and I hope I can bring some of them to light in this fiction.

Thank you for catching the subtle reference to telepathy. I believe that people do have telepathic connections on certain levels depending on the level of emotional intensity they share with each other. ARVI for me is off the charts 😃

I LOVE the idea of them being marooned on a deserted island rekindling 'their fire' over coconut water

😆 Oh the possibilities 😆

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Axiom

@Axiom

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#160

Originally posted by: *Maleena*
Wonderful update! I loved it! Arjun and Purvi both love and miss each other dearly. I hope they reunite soon in London! I can't wait for your next update!

Thank you Maleena 😃

Yes they do miss each other - more than they could ever express.

London is the destination of choice 😉

Enjoy!