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Posted: 13 years ago
its was really beautiful.i liked this part the most it was really really really...excellent
it was good of manav that he performed the rituals performed by the father of the bride but how he changed i thought that he won't be coming to the marriage as he has "nafrat"for archana and as purvi is her daughter...never mind this part was really good.waiting to see love arising between both...
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Posted: 13 years ago
GREAT Kesha ! 🤗


I can see the effort you've put in to deliver us a wedding with all the maharashtrian rituals. I got to know a few things through your fic which I used to wonder when I was a kid. 👏 👏


I just read the last two parts and although there wasnt much of a direct ArVi moment, I did enjoy reading it ! So here's the star for you to keep us entertained with our lead couple removing their anxieties for the grand wedding. ⭐️ 😆


And yes, one more thing ! Take it as a suggestion. Everytime you post a new update, do update you fic's title (which appears on the forum)with the latest part and the page number( if possible a sub-title as to what the part is about). This enables we readers to keep a tab on how much we've read and also for the silent readers as to how far the story's progressed. You may manage to atleast get a reader or two ? What say ? 😛

Also post the update in different bright colours with the picture directly instead of a link, these small things definitely add more to your fic and helps other readers like ME 😆, to view it directly (when we're reading it from our phone) instead of jumping from one link to the other 😛

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Rachel 🤗
Edited by Rach. - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Rach.

GREAT Kesha ! 🤗



I can see the effort you've put in to deliver us a wedding with all the maharashtrian rituals. I got to know a few things through your fic which I used to wonder when I was a kid. 👏 👏


I just read the last two parts and although there wasnt much of a direct ArVi moment, I did enjoy reading it ! So here's the star for you to keep us entertained with our lead couple removing their anxieties for the grand wedding. ⭐️ 😆


And yes, one more thing ! Take it as a suggestion. Everytime you post a new update, do update you fic's title (which appears on the forum)with the latest part and the page number( if possible a sub-title as to what the part is about). This enables we readers to keep a tab on how much we've read and also for the silent readers as to how far the story's progressed. You may manage to atleast get a reader or two ? What say ? 😛

Also post the update in different bright colours with the picture directly instead of a link, these small things definitely add more to your fic and helps other readers like ME 😆, to view it directly (when we're reading it from our phone) instead of jumping from one link to the other 😛

Love

Rachel 🤗

thank you for ur comment🤗
and yes next time will try to keep in mind ur suggestion
thanks for ur suggestion which helps me to know where i m going wrong or what i need to do to make my ff better
love u
kehkasha(kesha)🤗

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Posted: 13 years ago
Sorry for such a late comment!!!! but mast part tha keshu obviosly u cant write much about thing u don't know well but still u managed it very beautifully update sooner i'm waiting for the suhag raat sequence...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey again ! 😛

I dont remember if if told you this, but please PM me when your next update is ready. Really looking forward to read the next part 😳

P.S : I couldnt find my name in the pm list, so I thought to write back to you 😳

Byee !
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Posted: 13 years ago
That was great please update soon👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
Not written beautifully? please!! i am in love with it. i never knew that much so thanks for the info as well. and i love the way you have potrayed dk's emotions and Archana's feelings. I also like the way the two keep on fighting, Arjun and Purvi have alot to face but only these little things can be their strength when understanding and love prevails. :) Loved the wedding part... :) thanks alot for it.. keep writing.. :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
The wedding was written beautifully
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Posted: 13 years ago
behn jaldi update kar
ur part is ready so y r u not posting it😡

ramadan preps is keeping u busy but give it to me i will update😡 pan jaldi kar mane pan vachvu che
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Posted: 13 years ago
all you lovely readers thanks for the response... i so want to thank you all individually but no time in hand
so here goes the update. it is not big but has a big dhamaka for you all😆
hope u like it and also one more thing ramadan is starting after a week and so i will be very busy which means that my update will not be constant. but yet i will try to update and if possible i will pm my frnd who will update😃
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PART 14

After the grehpravesh was done, tej and ovi left for their home where a big surprise was waiting for them. DK asked Arjun and purvi to take rest and blessed them.

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Both Arjun and Purvi were filling uncomfortable to enter the room, they had been to the room together once but then it was a different thing and now it was their own room. Both stood at the entrance of the room and looked at each other.

"Purvi you go and change I will come after wards", Arjun nervously said, actually it was an act to go out and talk to Neil.

"ok, uhmm thank you. I mean for making me feel comfortable", purvi smiled and said. Arjun returned the gesture and went away from there.

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Neil was tired after the wedding and was sleeping peacefully when his phone rang. He got angry at the caller but on seeing Arjun's name he panicked and picked up the phone.

"Did you and bhabhi fight again", Neil asked rubbing his eyes.

"No one fought. And who is bhabhi" Arjun asked confusingly.

"Purvi bhabhi you dumbo", Neil said gritting his teeth.

"Don't call her bhabhi sounds OTT and secondly I called you to tell that I am feeling uncomfortable to share room with Purvi", Arjun shared his feelings which made neil grumble something.

"Good night will talk 2morrow. You just now got married and here you are talking to me. Instead talk with Purvi and share your feelings, all uncomfortable vibes will go away", Neil sleepily told Arjun and hung the phone up.

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Purvi came out from the washroom after changing her clothes. She went near the dressing table and started to remove her jewellery. She was lost in her thoughts that she did not even noticed Arjun entering the room and going in the bathroom.

After some time Arjun came out from the bathroom wearing only his tracks and no t-shirt, on seeing him Purvi immediately closed her eyes and turned to the other side.

"Purvi, what happened? Did you see some ghost", Arjun went close to her and kept his hand on her shoulder. Purvi opened her eyes and stared at those well-built abs and well-toned physique of her husband.

"here I am feeling shy and he thinks I saw a ghost. Never knew ghosts are so hot and handsome" Purvi was so lost in her thinking that Arjun had to snap her out of the dream land.

"Purvi what happened. Why did you close your eyes?", Arjun asked her once again. Purvi pushed him away and started to stammer.

"ttuummne shirt kyun nahin pehna. I don't like kkki koi halllf nnnaked ghume kamre mein" Purvi said and heaved a sigh.

On seeing her face Arjun started to laugh loudly and fell on his bed. Purvi threw a pillow at him and was on the verge of crying. Arjun caught the pillow and noticed the tears on her face. He immediately rushed to her and started to console her.

"I am sorry. I did not mean to hurt you. Please sorry" Arjun said worriedly. Purvi shove his hand off and went near the balcony. Arjun came behind her and turned her towards him.

"I am really sorry Purvi", Arjun said very tenderly, which melted Purvi's heart and she smiled at him "Its ok"

"By the way I sleep like this only. But no problem I will wear my vest if you are feeling shy", he said.

"It's alright. No need to change your habit for me, I will manage", she said and went away from there as the closeness was intoxicating her.

Purvi sat on the bed, when Arjun came from behind and jumped on the bed. Both looked at each other and felt like killing the awkwardness.

"I have a solution. I saw it on tv and even we can apply the same. I will sleep on the couch and you on your bed. OK", Purvi said smilingly.

"I am fine with it but a little change. One day you will sleep on the couch and one day I will", he said and without waiting for an answer went to the cupboard and removed a blanket and pillow.

"And today I will sleep on the couch. No arguments", Arjun commanded and went to the couch.

It was 2 in the morning when Arjun woke up and went near the drawer and was searching for something. This broke Purvi's sleep and she also got up.

"What happened Arjun? What are you looking for so late?" Purvi asked.

"Purvi my medicine. I am looking for it, I can't sleep without it" Arjun worriedly said. He found his medicine and was very happy to get it, he hastily gulped one tablet down and went back to his couch "Go back to sleep Purvi. And sorry for disturbing you"

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Purvi took the medicine bottle and quietly went to the bathroom to read the name of the medicine. She was shocked to learn that Arjun took sleeping pills to get sleep and was worried for him. She stood there still without moving trying to grasp what she just saw, but then she decided to go against the idea of confronting him.

"I cannot ask him now, we just started our relationship so how can I ask him like a typical wife", Purvi thought. She went to the room and kept the bottle where it was.

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Tej and ovi reached home where Manav was waiting for them. The look on his face was of fear which made the girls heart skip a bit.

"Dad is everything alright", ovi asked and rushed to her dad. Before Manav could answer a voice came from behind which was very similar to them "I will tell you why he is scared" both the girls turned their back and a bright smiled appeared on their face on seeing their lovely "aaji" there, they rushed to her and hugged her tightly.

"aaji when did you come" tej asked but when she found that her aaji was not reciprocating the hug she stepped back and stared at her aaji.

"You guys did not tell me that Arjun got married. Manav tu yaha ovi ke rishte ki baat karne vala tha na. Then how come I am hearing something else only" savita said tears building up in her eyes.

"aai I told you na. Arjun was already in love with Purvi and their rishta was also fixed. To fill my daughters jholi how can I snatch someone else's love", Manav explained.

"not someone else it was archana's daughter. The same lady who left you and your daughters 18 years ago" savita screamed. The last statement shocked ovi-tej and both stood motionless trying to think what their aaji just said.

"aaji what are you saying. Archana aunt our mother" tej asked her eyes moist due to tears, she looked at her father and remembered how he did all the rituals that was to be done by the father.

"teju ovi beta i did not want to hurt you so i hid the fact. please believe your dad", Manav went closer to the girls who pushed him away and ran to their room.

Manav stood there helpless looking at his mother, eyes full of pain and guilt.

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i am sorry for the small part, but i wanted to bring archana's truth out and so this also i wanted purvi to know about arjun's habit. now how the habit is changed is what you guys have to wait for😆

please like and do comment😳

Edited by mjht_ArVi4ever - 13 years ago

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