mr shayar & PR leading ladies.

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acre

@acre

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: carpe-diem
nice description of beauty, and also a nice representation of their nature to an extant. 👏
I liked Vandita's description a lot...her very complacent nature.
though there is very little beauty left in Varsha's character. 😒

thanks for appreciating my shayari's,😊
yup u r right in my post,i have dedicated most emotional lines to vandita,
becoz she is my both strength &weakness,
vandita is the only reason which still binds me with this serial,
but still i haven't done injustice with the other characters in my post,
every character has got equal lines for their beauty & personality

Edited by acre - 14 years ago

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acre

@acre

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

@sanu
thanks for using such beautiful words in the appraisal of my work,

@rizi
thanks is se pasand karne ke liye,

@nadz
thanks for liking my this effort,
i know that ur hindi is not that good,
but still u have read my post,
i m really thankful to u,
may be in near future i will also comes out with its translation

@monica
many thanks for liking my this tribute to PR's leading ladies,
nahin yaar my work can't be superb all the time,
becoz law of average will also applied on me,
jaane kya baat,

@sonii
thanks for giving ur valuable appraisal for my this shayari's
my main motive iis that i can't be biased with any particular character,

@prati
its a small tribute to all the PR ladies,
after all becoz of their superlative performance i m still attached with this serial

@cutebaby92
thanks for ur appreciation towards my shayari,

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acre

@acre

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Posted: 14 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: koolsadhu1000
Bahut khoob .😊

Ha par Vaishali ki sabse khoobsoorat features is her large brown eyes . Why didnt u mention them and their color shayarji ?

Loved it . U have a real talent for this kind of thing . The best part I loved was ............archana ki masoomiyat se soye hue armaano mein uthane lage chingari,
vandita ki mushkurahat se badh jaye is dil ki bekraari
vaishali bhi apni khamoshi se is gumsum bhari zindagi mein bekhar deti hain thodi si muskaan
saare sapne poore ho jaye mere main kab tak raho in sab se anjaan

shukriya for reading my shayyari's
btw i have already fulfilled ur wish in my post

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SONU

@BhatSonu

Sparkler

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

superb shikhar
it seems like ur mesmerized by the beauties of pr
par yaar rasika ko kyun bhool gaye*rofl* don't u remember the stories of SD
everyone in pr was once after her*lol*
just kidding
great work done
keep it up

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Priya

@nycsweetie

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

awesome work...thx for the pm

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koolsadhu1000

@koolsadhu1000

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

vaishali ki aankhon mein kuch hain aisa nasha,
jo is dard bhare dil ki ban jata hain dawaa,
uski jhuki hui palkoon mein dikhta hain mujhe apne hi saya
hum to sab kuch har gaye uske pyaar mein
lekin phir bhi apni is har mein bhi sirf tumhi ko paya"

LAJAWAB ! Very lovely poetry ! Thank u so much Shikhar . Dil khush kar diya .