mr shayar & PR leading ladies.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi doston,😃
first time mr shayar has paid the tribute to the young ladies of PR,
becoz of their amazing beauty,brilliant acting & their unforgettable screen presence which always makes this serial beautiful,
being a romantic shayar i thought that why should not i write something for the PR's girls,i.e archana,vandita,varsha & vaishali,
after all without their effort this serial has never achieved that huge amount of success,
beauty can't be expressed in any forms of words,
but its old habit of shayars they have always expressed & praised beauty in their work,
i also don't know but still one unknown magic has always forced to write shayaris
i hope u will all like my this work,


archana ki masoomiyat se soye hue armaano mein uthane lage chingari,
vandita ki mushkurahat se badh jaye is dil ki bekaraari
vaishali bhi apni khamoshi se is gumsum bhari zindagi mein bekhar deti hain thodi si muskaan
saare sapne poore ho jaye mere main kab tak raho in sab se anjaan


varsha ki nazarein bhi karti hain is dil par bahut hi gehra asar
PR dekhne mein main itna kho jata hoon in sab ke chehre par aakar thehar jati hain meri nazar
khwaboon mein aa aa kar archana karti hain mujhe bahut hi pareshaan
vandita aise beimaan mausam mein bhi kaise mere zazbaaton ko leti hain pehchaan


mere liye to chhupp gaya chand bhi phir vandita kyun mujhse itna sharmai
in khamoshi bhari raaton mein bhi kyun varsha ki yaad mujhe aayi
vaishali to mera gujra hua ateet thi phir kyun uske dard ne meri mushkilein badai
archana ki nigaahein mujhe baandh rahi thi ek unchahe bandhan mein,main kyun nahin samajh sakha is bandhan ki gahrai
manzil to mere paas hi thi par main raaste se tha shayad anjaan,
vandita mere hi taqdir mein likhi hui hain isliye shayad isliye waqt bhi hain mujh par meharbaan



vaishali ke kareeb jaane se kyun sheham jaata hain yeh dil
archana bhi kyun nahin samjh pati hain mere badnaseeb halaaton ki mushkil
vandita mein kuch aisa hain jaadu
aur mushkil ho jata hain is dil par rakhna kaboo
benaam rishton se jud gaye hain mere dil ke zazbaat
itne andhron mein bhi jagmane lagi hain yeh raat
uski unkahi baaton se kyun ho jata hoon main heraan
yeh sab bhi ab samjhne lage hain is shayar ki zubaan


on the request of my kool di,
she asked that question to me why i didn't praised vaishali's khoobsurat eyes in my post,
so here is my answer to her,

"vaishali ki aankhon mein kuch hain aisa nasha,
jo is dard bhare dil ki ban jata hain dawaa,
uski jhuki hui palkoon mein dikhta hain mujhe apne hi saya
hum to sab kuch har gaye uske pyaar mein
lekin phir bhi apni is har mein bhi sirf tumhi ko paya"



plz post ur comments regarding about my work,
your comments r so precious for me,
it always plays a vital role in my shayari's😃

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Sanu4u thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG acre...Awesomest, wowest, dhansu shayaris...loved it..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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wowwwwwwwwwwwwww 👏
awesomeeeee hai buddy
loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hiyaaaa shikhar...
my hindi sucks bt i managed to understand ur poem bro!!!
i loved it......

keep writin bro!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Bahut khoob .😊

Ha par Vaishali ki sabse khoobsoorat features is her large brown eyes . Why didnt u mention them and their color shayarji ?

Loved it . U have a real talent for this kind of thing . The best part I loved was ............archana ki masoomiyat se soye hue armaano mein uthane lage chingari,
vandita ki mushkurahat se badh jaye is dil ki bekraari
vaishali bhi apni khamoshi se is gumsum bhari zindagi mein bekhar deti hain thodi si muskaan
saare sapne poore ho jaye mere main kab tak raho in sab se anjaan


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Posted: 14 years ago
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superb as usual.....loved it*clap*
kya baat hai shikhar!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awesome acre, justified each and every character so beautifully 👏👏
Kudos!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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gr8 shayari acre....👏
luved it as usual....awesome tribute to PR ladies..👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Gr8 job @sanu4u u sound like mona in jdj
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice description of beauty, and also a nice representation of their nature to an extant. 👏
I liked Vandita's description a lot...her very complacent nature.
there is very little beauty left in Varsha's character. 😒
Edited by carpe-diem - 14 years ago

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