ArMan's SR- One Shot- writer revealed- page 13 - Page 13

Hope you tricked me..it was you all along..i just wasted so much time doing detective work..🤓

Originally posted by: Jasmine10

great piece of work Hope. it was mesmerizing .

As I was not a part of this forum long enough, I could not take a guess. your constant presence in this thread lead me to believe it was you. It reminded me of a show I watched 'O' show .before the curtains were drawn , the clown came a took a person from our front row. he was reluctant to go , but put on the stage. as the show progressed we became aware that the man was not part of us(spectator). You and your co partner(niki) managed the show very well.

their physical act to seal the marriage was artfully presented. It is a normal act followed by a wedding. In the solitary confinement of their dwelling ,when everything is quiet except for the occasional barks of the dog ,or the guards tapping of the stick . the man transforms into a prince and the lady a nymph and do the celestial dance. by the break of dawn they become normal people, who have chores to do and make a living . this part was very aptly presented in you .

keep on writing and keep us entertained.

P.S do you have the links of commentators posts. read about her writing skills and my curiosity aroused. thank you.

thanks Jasmine

that was why I did it on emotions rather than actions

the actions are for enteraining others, the emotions are for pleasurizing yourself😳

in a real husband wife relationship intimacy is spontaneuos, casual and private. it is not visualized by anyone or meant to be

manav would not have had half those thoughts if he knew there were others in the adjoining room and that is what I want to show

the intimacy is an elusive escape but with dawn comes reality stark and clear😃

anyway that is how it is in my life and I could only write from my own experience😃

of course assuming jeeju was having similar thoughts about me the whole time

I dare him to deny it😈

mrs. claus will be maha upset😆😆😆

oh jasmine I forgot so this is an edit add

here are links to three of C's posts.

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/pavitra-rishta/1339695/commentators-v-day-special

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/pavitra-rishta/1340430/dedicated-to-the-rough-mechanic

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1337458

I couldn't find the limca lady one. sorry😃

Originally posted by: piya_10

oh it ws beautiful Hope 🤗 nice surprise .... 😃

piyu remember when I send you that PM a few months ago and told you I was writing you a SR special?

I never kept my promise then. It slipped me by

AM I forgiven for the delay? 😃

I am glad you enjoyed it piyu😃

Originally posted by: Tanyaz

OMG, it was HOpe ...Ok, I admit .I goofed up really bad .I was so sure that it was Kool....the rough hands thing got me thinking it was her ...

Brilliant Hope ...you can write the roamance so well.

I never thought it could be you because you have never shown us this side of yours ...

2 thumbs up for this piece .And well done Nicki for such an interesting and fun thread ...

thanks Tanyadi

oh BTW

I would love to do the update but cannot because I will be at work and it is Christmas Eve so by the time I get some free time to sit and the SR update will be old news

I might do a take though if I have time😉😆 and I promise I won't be unkind😆

anyways Kools is returning on Saturday and has promised to be on the forum on Sunday so I was not planning on doing anymore 'takes' since the 'to be post' because Kools will be back in form in just a couple of days😃

Originally posted by: carpe-diem

HOPE, i knew it i knew it. ok maybe not at first...but a great job writing and even better job of hiding it.

Kudos Niki for hosting, and throwing us off.

PS, we need more of these. 😛

yes carpie, but I was good na?

I have never played poker but now that I know my hidden potential I want to start and WIN😆😆

Niki did a fantabulous job👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

I love all of you so much🤗

Originally posted by: smrth

Hope,

Why should a real talent ever thank somewhat pompous remarks from a vain reader who habitually overstretches his reach while commenting? But I need to clarify a thing or two. Although my post clearly relates them (the sited phrases) the way you saw it (hindsight), red herrings I intended to refer were your three continuous posts on page 2 and 3, which led me believe in your 'honesty'!😕 (And first stage erroneous elimination- though I admit, I am not much exposed to your writings- a loss on my part). The sited phrases were those gems which were immensely savoured' Actually any red herrings, which I had 'cleverly' detected initially in main piece, were'' OMG' and that hindi song 'believing them to be intentionally planted as miscues by my presumed writer C!... I'd even 'brilliantly' countered that 'mislead' with back ground suggestion of my own -'Silk road'😕'All these simply shows how famously stupid we would always come across when attempting to fathom or estimate the intricacies of better enlightened sex's subtle minds! If only I were able to edit my 'instinctive analysis' post now' 'how now, to trade foolishly, in presence of the eminence!'😳

P.S. And you wanted me to be on other show!😕'the end result here shows the capacity of my deductions- would not loss much time in returning straight back to consolation prize after attempting the apex!..And how come Archana has become princess in your writing? (a big red-red😈 herring!) 😡......👏😆😊

Actually I put in some clues to distract but I also put in clues that would reveal my identity if you knew me well like:

• OMG (TB got that)
• the princess bride and the princess wife (Gauri should have got that) I remember one post where I explained the difference😆 in my opinion
• the song - ajao meri tamana - i remember mentioning that I listened to it often

anyways most of these clues would have been recognized by Akash or Fifs who never ended up coming on this post😆

Originally posted by: archanamanav

Hope you tricked me..it was you all along..i just wasted so much time doing detective work..🤓

but admit it Usha you had fun doing the detective work😆😆😆

it was fun..but i never thought it was you..you are more besharm than this i thought..😆

Originally posted by: archanamanav

it was fun..but i never thought it was you..you are more besharm than this i thought..😆

I am so besharam

how do you think I got designate the title of gundi

I have still got to see today's epi

how was it
read that manav was hot

princess bride n wife....ahhaaa!! I shud hav got it.