ArMan's SR- One Shot- writer revealed- page 13 - Page 12

ok before I leave to my bread and butter

a quick thanks to all those who pressed like - I was not sure how this unfamiliar style and piece would be received

a special thanks who took part in the game, left wonderful comments and thoughts - TB, mansi, Niki, Maneesha, samarth, Tanya, Usha, Guddiya, Claire, Bonne, vishwap, genenisha, monica, ali, teacher 25, bhavni, gaayika, nishi, tulsey, dew drop, carpie. Hope I did not miss anyone

to all those who wanted it to be Kools – mogga please take note and deliver the much awaited treat for your faithful readers and a merry Christmas to all

in closing, I know I have never written like this before, and honestly it was my firm intention to make this a single deviation from my known self, when Niki suggested it I took it as a joke

then I got to thinking why not? It was like a challenge for me. But most importantly when I wrote it I did so because of my "to be or not to be archana" take a few days ago. I was very harsh on Archana (though I still stand by what I said) and I wanted to balance it off for all the dreamers and the ArMan lovers on the forum who took my critique in good stride and surprisingly did not unleash a like tirade on me. So this is my balancing act for all ArMan lovers. Have a wonderful Christmas, a great suhaag raat and a wonderful weekend.

My cue to CVs – when I criticize Archana and Manav – I do it because this is what I want them to be for their fans – bold and passionate. Don't give the fans the senior citizen version, give them what they paid for. Amen.

Have a great day guys. Off to Work and then a very hasty and hopefully not to shabby Christmas prep.

Love Always

Hope

Thanks once again Hope Di,

great piece of work Hope. it was mesmerizing .

As I was not a part of this forum long enough, I could not take a guess. your constant presence in this thread lead me to believe it was you. It reminded me of a show I watched 'O' show .before the curtains were drawn , the clown came a took a person from our front row. he was reluctant to go , but put on the stage. as the show progressed we became aware that the man was not part of us(spectator). You and your co partner(niki) managed the show very well.

their physical act to seal the marriage was artfully presented. It is a normal act followed by a wedding. In the solitary confinement of their dwelling ,when everything is quiet except for the occasional barks of the dog ,or the guards tapping of the stick . the man transforms into a prince and the lady a nymph and do the celestial dance. by the break of dawn they become normal people, who have chores to do and make a living . this part was very aptly presented in you .

keep on writing and keep us entertained.

P.S do you have the links of commentators posts. read about her writing skills and my curiosity aroused. thank you.

oh it ws beautiful Hope 🤗 nice surprise .... 😃

OMG, it was HOpe ...Ok, I admit .I goofed up really bad .I was so sure that it was Kool....the rough hands thing got me thinking it was her ...

HOPE, i knew it i knew it. ok maybe not at first...but a great job writing and even better job of hiding it.

Kudos Niki for hosting, and throwing us off.

PS, we need more of these. 😛

Hope,

Why should a real talent ever thank somewhat pompous remarks from a vain reader who habitually overstretches his reach while commenting? But I need to clarify a thing or two. Although my post clearly relates them (the sited phrases) the way you saw it (hindsight), red herrings I intended to refer were your three continuous posts on page 2 and 3, which led me believe in your 'honesty'!😕 (And first stage erroneous elimination- though I admit, I am not much exposed to your writings- a loss on my part). The sited phrases were those gems which were immensely savoured… Actually any red herrings, which I had 'cleverly' detected initially in main piece, were…' OMG' and that hindi song …believing them to be intentionally planted as miscues by my presumed writer C!... I'd even 'brilliantly' countered that 'mislead' with back ground suggestion of my own -'Silk road'😕…All these simply shows how famously stupid we would always come across when attempting to fathom or estimate the intricacies of better enlightened sex's subtle minds! If only I were able to edit my 'instinctive analysis' post now… 'how now, to trade foolishly, in presence of the eminence!'😳

P.S. And you wanted me to be on other show!😕…the end result here shows the capacity of my deductions- would not loss much time in returning straight back to consolation prize after attempting the apex!..And how come Archana has become princess in your writing? (a big red-red😈 herring!) 😡......👏😆😊

Originally posted by: Jasmine10

great piece of work Hope. it was mesmerizing .

As I was not a part of this forum long enough, I could not take a guess. your constant presence in this thread lead me to believe it was you. It reminded me of a show I watched 'O' show .before the curtains were drawn , the clown came a took a person from our front row. he was reluctant to go , but put on the stage. as the show progressed we became aware that the man was not part of us(spectator). You and your co partner(niki) managed the show very well.

their physical act to seal the marriage was artfully presented. It is a normal act followed by a wedding. In the solitary confinement of their dwelling ,when everything is quiet except for the occasional barks of the dog ,or the guards tapping of the stick . the man transforms into a prince and the lady a nymph and do the celestial dance. by the break of dawn they become normal people, who have chores to do and make a living . this part was very aptly presented in you .

keep on writing and keep us entertained.

P.S do you have the links of commentators posts. read about her writing skills and my curiosity aroused. thank you.

Originally posted by: ..Sonii..

Mesmerizing piece !!

Hope dii, words were so beautifully weaved, I was touched 😃

Loved all the lines

We want to read more of it Anamika 👏

Merry christmas to you and Your family......🤗

Heyy RJ nikki gr8 job!!😉

I missed all the fun......😔

I have really missed your posts on all my threads honey

no probs. will; see you more oftne once exams are done na?😃🤗