Originally posted by: toothbrush13
I like the way you based the commentary on the theme of passion, it was interesting to read it that way.
Archana was... well, awkward. The whole thought of telling all of these workers her personal life just seems awkward to me.
I hope they don't make Jaywant a totally negative character. I like grey, unpredictable characters. They keep the story interesting. I would prefer that Ekta's brilliant idea in introducing Jaywant was not to make him marry Archana.
I don't know what I want to think of Dharmesh yet. I like that he's practical, but he seems... condescending? I think that might be exaggerating it a bit, but he always seems to put himself above others. It's as if he wants others to always concede to his ways and thoughts. I understand that he put a lot of work into his company but he doesn't have to be so uptight about it to everyone including Satish.
The way you stated the paradox was intriguing and makes it sound even more interesting. This is the second only time that I've felt like their "union" is going to happen or that it should become apart of the storyline. The first time was some time around February or March, and this is the only other time thus far that I feel like they should go for it.
Can't wait to read your interpretation of the scene.
