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Posted: 15 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: koolsadhu1000

Fifi Im ashamed dudette . Im spouting garbage and I can't seem to stop , its addictive !


oh my gawd kools..i cant stop...i am sitting in front the computer dying of laughter 🤣 🤣 imagine all of us in this forum from all parts of the world sitting in front our comps and rolling with laughter at the same time 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
#62
Me too Fifi , me too ! Gosh ! This is better than any kitty party yaar . Whats worse I cant seem to stop ! I may be spouting rhymes in my sleep !
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Posted: 15 years ago
#63
Where oh where is tanya
has anybody on this forum seen her?
has she disappeared i dont know
she could've said she wanted to go

She must have gone out shopping
or maybe to do some banking
you know she is always dabbling in stocks
maybe she made some big bucks.

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Posted: 15 years ago
#64
She has joined some new clubs
of Fans and of Hate
But don't worry she'll peep in
before it is too late

Tanya oh dear Tanya
We r missing you
Come back soon ,very soon
before the evening dew
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Posted: 15 years ago
#65
Uff , too good .
I love it when you guys write poetry on me . This is the first time someone has written poetry on me ....😳
I had gone to check on my new house . Appointment with the decor department ..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: koolsadhu1000

Oh Fifi Fifi dearest
Look what u have done
U unleashed an addicion
that has made my tongue run

And it is running without breaks
making me look so silly
All im doing is rhyming
with anything willy nilly

And this is hardly poetry
What it is I don't know
Where the hell is our Doc
Only she can stop this flow

For I only to stop to read
when others contribute too
Or I am afraid i'll go on
till others will shout BOO !

Here I am dearest Kool
after working all night like a fool
sleepy eyed but still engrossed
by the poetry bridges you've crossed!
The tired Niki has vanished somewhere
And now is sitting in her chair
writing the first thing coming in mind
and leaving all frustations far behind.
Cos todays episode was just so bad
Manav and Archu were again sad
Savita was a rockstar
Sulochana should just go away far.
Monday will be bad for Archu again
Savita will inflict more pain
like a tigress wounded, will thunder
What will Manav do, I wonder
coz he was truly concerned today
And fought for Archu at bay
Manav, oh Manav, Archu needs you bad
She's the only one you've ever had.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#67

Originally posted by: koolsadhu1000

In continuation with Nicki

But will Manav really deliver
Or will be stuck in that rut
What about all that fever
Of that Insaaniyat ?

I'll give that much to you Doc
In him you have confidence
From where , how I don't know
For I don't have your lens

Sometimes Oh Doc I suspect
On him you have a secret crush
You have fallen for him badly Doc
Now don't blush and don't brush !


😆

👏
Never did I deny, I don't like him
He's like the moon, lights you within
with the rays that are cool and blissful
with him, life would be beautiful.
Didn't you read my FF dear
It was made coz I had the fear
that the creatives would kill my guy
For TRP's that their crap could buy
So decided would keep him alive
In the FF I would retrieve
The 'old Manav' we adore
Its my 'Taj Mahal' to my love lore (sorry couldn't think of anything else)
But creatives have some kindness left
They are greedy but they are deft
In handling the story such
That the character hasn't been harmed that much
They can turn it around any day
that is my faith, that is my say
I count on my analysis, I count on my guy
He will deliver, he just has to try.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#68
In continuation with nicki
Ah ! So now we have the admission
out in the open
That Doc does a soft spot have
for this specimen
Well I bless u with all my heart
in real life shall u find
a guy exactly like Manav
and you shall read his mind
Just the way u have read
Manav as the serial progresses
but wait ......on second thought
what if by then your fire regresses
For by the time PR ends
your energy will be depleted
by reading Manav so deeply
your life's goal will be completed
Oh Manav Manav what hast thou done
to our very own Doc
To anyone who crosses you
She gives a hard sock
Ouch my jaws r still hurtin
from all the ones I got
I am applying soothing creams
lying in my first aid pot .
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Posted: 15 years ago
#69
In continuation with my last one:
Till then I'm prepared to wait
Although the present track I do hate
But what to do, can't call it quits
PR is addictive, PR is fit
Anyhow had a great day
Contacting big celebs away
And writing for them long long mails
Asking them to come without fail
To my college festival, I request
Believe me, it is the best
We'll think, they say all the time
and consider my emotions worth a dime!!!!
But my other Sweetu Rajeev (Khandelwal) said 'yes'
I felt that's coz Bappa blessed.
Danced all day, sung sweet songs
Dreaming about my hero whom my heart longs
And all my friends laughed like hell
He isn't so great, time will tell
Go away I shouted aloud
He's the best that can ever be found
Of course Sushant is catching up fast
He is a rocking guy, a real blast
With eyes so cute and a smile so sweet
This guy, I would love to meet
Lets see if I have the luck
To meet them together, both these hunks
This festival will be really special
if I achieve the unbelievable.
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Posted: 15 years ago
#70
Manav was asked to leave
Varsha's engagement
How sad that no one there
had a correct judgement
Yes , not a single soul
stood up for him and spoke
except for Archana
is his honour a joke ?
Poor Poor Manav
didn't deserve this at all
neither did Archu
who is such a baby doll
I hope Bhavna suffers
immensely for her deed
Her son shud dump her
with Varsha taking the lead
For ladies who think they r special
just for being the boy's mom
Should realise that he is not God
but just any roadside Tom
So what makes the boy so special
or for that matter his mother
is a question I have asked myself many times
Why do I even bother !

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