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Posted: 15 years ago
#51

Wonderful work!

I have come to say
I am going to stay.. 😆


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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
Cmon Thamizan , join in ur doing Great 1
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
And now for that Bhavna
who thinks she can throw a tantrum
although Ajit is garbage
just coz she is the boy's mum

Well such mums need lessons
well defined and hard
Will Varsha ever blast her
and reduce her egoistic lard

What Ajit Ajit are you doing
Satish should have asked her
Am I your son or he is
Tell me without fear

Yes Tell if u did a mistake
In your youth Oh mum
Satish should ask her coldly
Why force Ajit on me as a chum?

Stupid stupid Bhavna
And her husband so lallu
Couldn't he have spoken up
instead of hiding behind her pallu

Ultimately she and Rasika won
But she doesn't know the fun
Rasika is like a viper in a lab
who won't hesitate to back stab

And I sincerely hope this happens
Only the stabbing should be done in her bun
Not the back , its too mild for her
This lady must be made to RUN !
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
WOW!!!! OMG! U guyz r so talented 👍🏼
This is probably the longest poem but fabulous, not even one dull verse, engrossing, charming nd fun to read....quite a versathon (silly word made it up 😆)
Wish I cld rhyme but I suck as I do in most things.....kudos nd take a bow! guyz 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
Piya cmon join in I insist
just 4 lines please
Just u set your mind
It honestly is no grind

Oh Piya , young Piya
who i know is unmarried
we need a perspective here
of a bride not yet ferried

For u do have humor
and are so jocular
So jump in oh youthful one
and shine like the rising sun !
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: piya007

WOW!!!! OMG! U guyz r so talented 👍🏼
This is probably the longest poem but fabulous, not even one dull verse, engrossing, charming nd fun to read....quite a versathon (silly word made it up 😆)
Wish I cld rhyme but I suck as I do in most things.....kudos nd take a bow! guyz 👏


come on piya just a couple lines at least...u have to unleash that creativity in you..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
oh my gawd we have awaken the poet in kools and she cant stop!!!! 🤣 🤣
Edited by PRnerd - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58
Fifi Im ashamed dudette . Im spouting garbage and I can't seem to stop , its addictive !
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59
piya oh piya listen to kool
for she certainly aint no fool
just two lines of poetry at least
and you will awaken the poetry beast

piya on piya the youth of this forum
your heart will beat like a drum
the minute you decide to take a chance
to write this verse kools will do a dance...ok very lame 🤣
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
Oh Fifi Fifi dearest
Look what u have done
U unleashed an addicion
that has made my tongue run

And it is running without breaks
making me look so silly
All im doing is rhyming
with anything willy nilly

And this is hardly poetry
What it is I don't know
Where the hell is our Doc
Only she can stop this flow

For I only to stop to read
when others contribute too
Or I am afraid i'll go on
till others will shout BOO !

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