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Nikita Lakhe

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1071

SH::: Thanks a lot !!!

Topsyturvy::: Added you! Enjoy the next part!

@Omana: Yup! I'll add you to my list.

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1072

Niki ... no pm??

I liked the bits where both Archana and Manav are realizing in their own ways that they still have a soft corner for each other. Manav loves Archana, and is trying to suppress all that beneath the practicalities of the world, that how will the 2 families now agree to the two after so much tamasha..... Archana is realising what Manav feels for her and respects his feelings more and more as the days go by...... slow and steady progress...... wish there was more of Archana -Manav together......

well, thanks for such a long update.... glad to know what all characters are going through.....

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chdmc

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1073

Hi Nikita,

Thanks for a long updates. To me personally, it was refreshing to see Vedant-Vandita getting some screen space and dialogues rather than being silent spectators. I actually liked the small scene between Vandita and Archana. One that I couldn't quiet understand was Varsha's rudeness. I would have expected her to soften up after landing herself in such a big mess. Am sure you must have something in mind...but it just left me a little disappointed/confused.

Good work!
Kavitha

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umayal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1074

Hai Nikki,
Nice part yaar. Enjoyed reading it and awaited for this part.
It is a best part too. Liked many scenes and aspects.

Especially vandu-archu scene and vandu saying,you are not my Vahini and the manav scene followed it. Exactly the reaction which will make archu feel what she is losing.

And archu's say-back to vinod was also nice.

Nice to read that they are feeling inside and moving towards the thing,that they are going to be together as they wish and love to be together rather for proofs and saving marriage.

Waiting eagerly for your next part(Though know it is hard for you to update soon on your busy schedules)

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dhahi

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Hi Nikita,

I've started reading your FF just 3 days back & finished it in a stretch. Thanks for it. Let me tell you what I feel after reading this.

I really loved the way how the story started, how they got married, all their cute moments during their 15 days companionship, their night walks, everything😛. I felt you also acted like this CVs by ruining it just at the time of their honeymoon. But s i understand, it is the biggest twist so ok.

I really liked how Manav took this up and tried to sort it out by showing the evidence and all. But again at t time of court hearing, everything is fallen down .

Poor Manav. Y did u let this happen? Y cant he have some happiness 😕?

U know how much he suffered in initial days of PR.. I feel same s going on with him now in PR reloaded too what with financial disaster, all that divorce court hearing, then Archana's rude comment even though she was feeling bad, Sachin & Aai's ungratefulness, that Shravani, talk about Archana's remarriage, his emotional breakdown, everything... i m feeling very very sad about that 😔.

I was literally in tears when he was feeling for Archana after agreeing for divorce 😒. Y r u making him cry yaar? Pls giv him som happiness. I'm v v angry at Varsha. Y cant that stupid gal talk to Manav or at the least to her Tai. V bad.

But I really hope u ll make Archu go to Manav even he dint prove his innocence. Pls make Ajit pay back for all his deeds and Savita Aai & Sachin too. I dont want Manav to suffer in financial break down, I ve seen enough of that in PR itself, pls do make him richer sooner that PR's curent track..

1 last thing, pls do add me in ur PM list.. I'm waiting for your updates. Pls post it often.

1 humble request. Unite Achana & Manav soon so we can have some cute romance between then like we get to watch nowadays so rarely in PR.. :)

Sorry if i hurt u in my comments...

Pls do update soon.

Edited by dhahi - 14 years ago

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Nikita Lakhe

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1076

@ Minakshi::: Oops... I'm sorry I missed you out on my PM list... sorry!!!

I know, there was less of Manav Archana together in this part... but somehow this part is important in the future course of the story. As the divorce date is approaching closer, we will only see doubts increasing in their minds about their decision..

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Nikita Lakhe

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1077

Originally posted by: chdmc
Hi Nikita,

Thanks for a long updates. To me personally, it was refreshing to see Vedant-Vandita getting some screen space and dialogues rather than being silent spectators. I actually liked the small scene between Vandita and Archana. One that I couldn't quiet understand was Varsha's rudeness. I would have expected her to soften up after landing herself in such a big mess. Am sure you must have something in mind...but it just left me a little disappointed/confused.

Good work!
Kavitha

Hey Kavitha di! :-)

The Vandu Vedant part had to be brought in.. I tried to introduce it little by little on each part prior to this and finally wrote this 'Rakshabandhan' part especially for them. They will have a role in the story just like Sachin has a subtrack of his own.

About Varsha, I will clear it up in the next part. Wanted to do it in this one only, but it turned out too long and people were sending PM's for updates. Thanks for commenting.

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Nikita Lakhe

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1078

@umi::: thanks dear! I always like your sweet, hopeful comments! Yes, Manav Archana are like fish without water right now.. I will be devoting a song to them for this situation soon.. ;-)

@nabilah: Thanks a lot! Keep commenting!

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Nikita Lakhe

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Posted: 14 years ago

#1079

Originally posted by: dhahi
Hi Nikita,
I've started reading your FF just 3 days back & finished it in a stretch. Thanks for it. Let me tell you what I feel after reading this.
I really loved the way how the story started, how they got married, all their cute moments during their 15 days companionship, their night walks, everything😛. I felt you also acted like this CVs by ruining it just at the time of their honeymoon. But s i understand, it is the biggest twist so ok.
I really liked how Manav took this up and tried to sort it out by showing the evidence and all. But again at t time of court hearing, everything is fallen down .
Poor Manav. Y did u let this happen? Y cant he have some happiness 😕?
U know how much he suffered in initial days of PR.. I feel same s going on with him now in PR reloaded too what with financial disaster, all that divorce court hearing, then Archana's rude comment even though she was feeling bad, Sachin & Aai's ungratefulness, that Shravani, talk about Archana's remarriage, his emotional breakdown, everything... i m feeling very very sad about that 😔.
I was literally in tears when he was feeling for Archana after agreeing for divorce 😒. Y r u making him cry yaar? Pls giv him som happiness. I'm v v angry at Varsha. Y cant that stupid gal talk to Manav or at the least to her Tai. V bad.
But I really hope u ll make Archu go to Manav even he dint prove his innocence. Pls make Ajit pay back for all his deeds and Savita Aai & Sachin too. I dont want Manav to suffer in financial break down, I ve seen enough of that in PR itself, pls do make him richer sooner that PR's curent track..
1 last thing, pls do add me in ur PM list.. I'm waiting for your updates. Pls post it often.
1 humble request. Unite Achana & Manav soon so we can have some cute romance between then like we get to watch nowadays so rarely in PR.. :)
So if i hurt u in my comments...
Pls do update soon.

Hello!

No dear I'm not at all hurt by your comments. In fact, I'm very happy bcos this is exactly the sort of reaction I wanted to read when I wrote the part... don't get me wrong... I don't want to make you all cry, its just that whenever anyone says that they feel for the characters, I feel I have done my job well. 😊

I understand that you want to see some happiness in this FF after all the gloom in PR. Agreed. But dhahi sirf khushi khushi se to story will be boring na? Some realistic drama has to be as well, hai ha? Plus the name 'Pavitra Rishta' holds no significance if Archana goes to Manav simply bcos of proofs and not bcos she loves him. What do you want to see--- Archana accepting a rich, happy household (this is bcos you said you wanted Manav to be rich)-- or Archana loving her husband the way he is?? What shows true love? Right now we are nearing the high point... divorce date is coming closer!!! In any story, the climax is what makes or breaks the story... so am preparing for it.

About Manav's state-- I understand that you must be sad. Manav has always been my favourite character, so if this all had been shown in PR, I would have been sad too. But all of it serves a purpose in the future track- and problems are part of one's life. Just take one thing from me-- I will not make Manav suffer. If he has problems now, they will get solved in a nice way in the future.😉 After all Bappa is watching from above na dhahi??? He must have thought something about his favourite devotees, hai na?--- after all, the Lord has a plan for everyone.⭐️ Similarily, everything in this FF is happening for a reason and with a purpose with reference to the future track. Later all the tracks will intermingle.

Keep reading!

Edited by nikitagmc - 14 years ago

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dhahi

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Posted: 14 years ago

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@Nikitagmc

Thnx dear.

Of course i would love to see Archana getting back to Manav one & only for the love. But also, in the mean time Manav can sort out his financial worries na.

I also agree that Bappa will never let down his followers. There is a filmi dialogue in one of the films, kuch aisa hai ye 'Bhagwan bhure logon ko bahuth kuch dethe hain; but aakhir main chod dethe hain - Acche logon ki bahuth saari parikshayein lethe hain; magar kabhi nahin chodthe'. Waiting for that day to happen & would love to see Ajit's & Shravani's reactions for it... LOL 😆

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