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Part 3



At lunch everyone was gathered in the garden while all were praising how beautiful Mini looked , Neil was only searching for the guy who is going to marry her. Ever since he got to know Mini was getting married, he was curious to know who is that man. Knowingly or unknowingly, Neil was intrigued by the man whom Mini had chosen. What he would be like? Is that guy really better than him? And Neil got his answer as Siddharta Singhania made his way to the garden looking handsome as ever in off white kurta and churidaar payjama with golden stole. Everything about that man screamed of upper class elegance and riches. But Mini was not that kind of girl who would go after wealth.


Neil was trying to find Siddharta’s other qualities when a kid bumped into him and Siddharta immediately went on his knees to help the kid. The kid looked embarrassed. He straighten the kid’s clothes, picked him up in his arms and assured him that its ok to bump into someone in a crowded place. Then he handed over the kid to his parents. Siddharta then approached Mini’s parents and touched their feet, in fact took blessing of every elder in the close vicinity. Mini was asked by the photographer for a pose and Siddharta helped her by suggesting a better pose and even carried her clutch for her while she posed for a picture. Then some of Mini’s friends surrounded them and started chatting, by their looks and giggling sounds Neil was sure they were just boring Siddharta with the girly talks but Siddharta maintained his cool and infact chatted with them like they were his friends also.


Neil didn’t know since when he was observing Siddharta when all his friends came there and brought him out of thoughts.


“Neil yaar, kya kar raha hai? Itna ghoor mat Siddharta ko.” Bobby nudged him.


“Nothing, just observing what could have drawn Mini towards him.” Neil replied as he took another serving of ice cream for himself.


“Really? Did you find the answer?” Mickey inquired.


“Yes, its pretty much obvious. He is a gentleman, sanskaari, sensitive, responsible, love kids and well trained to mask his annoyance.” Neil said in one breath.


“Basically he is your opposite.” Jasmeet commented and laughed.


“Har ladki ko aisa hi life partner chahiye hota hai. Mini is lucky to find one.” Preet gave her opinion.


“Yes, he has all those qualities which I never had and probably would never be able to inculcate in my life.” Neil sighed.


“Hmm! And you are going to respect Mini’s decision and will not create any scene here...right?” Bobby asked apprehensively.


“Why are you saying this?” Neil didn’t like that doubtful tone.


“Mini’s father was asking lots of questions about you and your past with Mini. All thanks to the argument you guys had earlier.” Bobby informed.


Neil was quiet for sometime and this made everyone tense.


“Neil, what happened?” Mickey shook him.


“Nothing, to be honest I was angry at her. I know I should not feel like that but I dont know why...I just...felt...” Neil trailed off not knowing what to say? He himself didn’t know why he was feeling sad and jealous and how to handle these feelings. He had thought that over the time he has said this lie so many times that he has moved on that it became his reality and he can handle this wedding but today all his pretense, all his defenses were crumbling down.


“Neil bhai, you can leave if its getting too much for you.” Bobby whispered in his ears so that only he can hear it. Bobby being his bestie understood his feelings.


“No, I have to see this happening. See her moving on with the guy she always desired. Man! Look at Siddharta, I have no chance against him. Mini always wanted that kind of guy, he is really her Mr.Perfect.” Neil sighed and went to the other side to avoid further questions.


“What do you think guys? Is he still in love with Mini?” Preet asked the obvious question after seeing Neil’s reaction.


“Even if he is, what we can do about it? Mini has already made her choice.” Mickey replied and everyone nodded their head in agreement.


On the other hand Mini was in a fix, though she was physically present with everyone in the garden, but mentally she was wandering through her past. She was putting a smile for the sake of photographs but she was utterly confused from inside. “Siddharta is the guys for her.” Everyone says it after meeting Siddharta and there is no doubt about that he is everything a girl wants in her husband but then why it feels that something is missing, something is incomplete. She sighed as she looked at Siddharta effortlessly mingling with her friends, he was everyone’s favourite. One would need a magnifying glass to find faults in him. May be thats the problem, he is so perfect that its almost unreal and boring. Even though she likes him but there is no spark between them.


Her life with Neil used to be so lively, excited. At the exact same moment she looked at Neil who was taking ice cream for himself. She could swear it was his second or may be third serving, it was choco fudge flavour, his favourite. She saw Neil heaped his bowl with ice cream so much that it looked like a small mountain then he dropped some of it on his jacket and now trying to clean it with a paper napkin, lazy to go to the washroom to sprinkle some water over it, in the process he completely ignored that some residue ice cream was still smeared on his lips. Mini couldn’t control but laugh at it earning questioning looks from everyone around her. Thats when she came out of trance. Mini put break on her train of thoughts immediately and scolded herself for thinking all this.


“Whats wrong with you Mini? You were the one who was tired of that man child Neil and his behaviour now when you have the perfect guy by your side, you are yearning for his imperfections.” Neha commented as she knew what might be going through her bestie’s mind right now, she was observing Mini since few minutes.


“I dont know Neha...its nothing like that...its just...I felt....you know what, just let it be. I am over thinking.” Mini brushed off the topic and excused herself saying that she is really tired and needs some rest before her engagement in the evening.

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Neil was calm and composed as compare to the earlier lunch. Bobby sighed in relief seeing him all normal. With Ashok Khurana irritating him every now and then asking about Neil’s whereabouts and whether he is upto anything and giving emotional support to Neil, it was getting too much for Bobby. He thought he will get a break from the stress of work because of this wedding but looks like he was on double duty here, one to handle Neil, second to bear Mr.Khurana’s interrogation.


Neil looked at Mini as she descended from the staircase with spot light on her, making grand entry on piano music. She looked like some fairy in light blue gown with silver sequence on it. And from the other side came her prince charming in white suit. They came in the middle of the hall and exchanged the rings. While everyone clapped, Neil noticed the disappointment on Mini’s face. He wondered why is that when he on pretext of congratulating them went near her and his eyes fell on Mini’s ring. It was solitaire. Any girl would die to have a ring like that but only Neil knew that Mini was among those 0.001% girls who didn’t like diamonds that much. She always wanted a simple platinum band as her engagement ring. He felt bad for her. When everything was happening as per her choice then why such an important thing, the engagement ring, was not as per her taste? But who is he to ask questions, so he kept quiet.


Mini and Siddharta then were asked for a couple dance. Siddharta took her to the dance floor. He put his one hand on her shoulder and other one on waist and started swaying on the beats of romantic song. It was Mini’s favourite song. Neil could tell Mini was not enjoying it even a bit and he proved right when only after two three minutes she excused herself. Mini was an out and out romantic person, she loved dancing, especially couple dance. To dance on her wedding was a part of her dream. She used to talk a lot about on which song they will dance. But the way Siddharta was holding her was too mechanical and formal. There was no couple feeling, it looked like it was done for the sake of formality. But Mini liked to be held tightly, hands in hands, eyes in eyes, like a man holds his woman.


After engagement and photo session, everyone sat at the dinner table. Mini and Siddharta was sitting with their families. Neil noticed Mini was looking at the waiter holding the food tray. He could tell she had starved herself since morning now wanted to jump at the food as soon as possible but trying hard to hold patience to appear civilized to the world. Neil laughed at the thought; he remembered how Mini used to eat dessert first than main course.


As the waiter arrived, she asked for the dessert but Siddharta suggested or rather instructed waiter to serve main course first. Mini pouted slightly for a brief time, nobody noticed it except Neil, he chuckled thinking that she still looked cute pouting like that. At the end when finally dessert’s turn came, waiter served Siddharta first and Mini lost her patience this time. She took her spoon and took a bite from Siddharta’s plate.


“What are you doing sweet heart? I am sure hotel has enough dessert for all of us. Be patient till your turn. I dont like someone eating from my plate.” Siddharta said as he shrunk his eyebrows almost in disgust.


Neil noticed Mini was hurt this time by his words. Dont know why but he wanted to shove that dessert into Siddharta’s face for such rude comment. And did he just call her “someone” she is going to be his wife. F**king moron! Neil remembered how Mini always first ate her chocolate pastry and then ate half from his plate and when he glared at her for the cheating she used to give him her toothy grin and he melted just like a butter.Their life was full of these small moments. Neither of them know when these moments fall short before their fights and they forgot how much they actually loved each other.


After some time all became busy in taking photos, some in chatting, some in drinking and some couples started dancing again and dont know why but Neil couldn’t stop his legs when they carried him towards Mini and before he could have thought anything rationally the words escaped his mouth, “Can I have a dance with you?”


Mini wasn’t expecting this from him. She kept looking at him blankly but then she thought she cant refuse him in front of everyone like that as all of them think he was her friend. She put her hand in his hesitantly with a nervous smile and Neil led her to the dance floor.


“What are you doing Neil Oberoi?” Mini whispered in anger as soon as they were out of earshot.


“Just helping you in fulfilling your dream. When you are saying this is your dream wedding then it should also be in a way just like you wanted it.” Neil replied.


“What? What do you even mean?” Mini asked in confusion.


“Your ring, its diamond. Why its not platinum? You didn’t tell Siddharta that you dont prefer diamonds?” Neil questioned.


“I did but he said diamonds ring is classic choice. It will suit his status also.” Mini couldn’t help but share the detail.


“And whats with that ‘touch me not dance’? He was holding you like you are some porcelain doll that comes with ‘handle with care’ tag.” Neil questioned.


“He is like that generally whenever we are in public. May be he is brought up that way. He is always so controlled and well behaved in social gatherings.” Mini answered.


“Thats one way to put it. I will say that he doesn’t have passion in him.” Neil argued.


“And why does your opinion should even matter to me Neil? In fact at the first place, why you even giving me your opinion, I never asked for it. Anyways he is much better than you.” Mini once again reminded him that he is now nobody in her life.


“Ok fine! I shouldn’t have said anything about him specially now, when you have already made your choice. And I am sorry for the scene I created earlier in the morning. See, Mini, we had a past and now facing each other after a long time that too in your wedding, its not a normal situation, weird things might happen. But I want you to know that I have always wished for your happiness and I will not ruin it for you now. Can we call it a truce?” Neil asked genuinely.


Mini looked in his eyes and melted immediately. She nodded her head in agreement. “Now can I go?” she asked.


“Why? We can have a little dance, nothing wrong in that. Besides, let me make it up to you for morning incident. I was being a jerk. Let me give you some good time now.” Neil requested.


Mini raised her eyebrow in questioning but Neil only winked at her not saying directly what he has in his mind. He went to DJ and requested for a song. Music started playing as he came running back to Mini.She gasped finally identifying the music. It was another of her favourite song ideal for salsa dance. She remembered how she pestered him to join salsa classes with her during their courtship. He was too lazy to do so, she managed somehow to drag him to the practice session but once he got the hang of it, he loved it so much that he completed the whole class and never left any opportunity to dance with her.


Mini came out of her thoughts when Neil snapped his fingers in front of her. Without even asking her this time he pulled her to the dance floor and took positions. He snaked his arm on his waist pulling her closer till their bodies were touching and entwined other hand with her freehand. They started match their steps with the beats.


Pyar ki yeh kahani suno
Ek ladka tha ek ladki thi
Hoti kya hai jawani suno
Ek ladka tha ek ladki thi
Woh bhi ek daur tha wakt
Hi aur tha jab woh the ajnabi
Dono tanaha se the par

Woh kehte kise bat jo dil me thi


They looked in each others eyes while dancing, sometimes coming in contact with each others body and sometime parting to perform the lifts and swirls. Others stopped their dancing just to watch their perfectly coordinated steps and chemistry which was oozing out of every fibre of their body.


Gumsum gumsum rehte the

Dono phir bhi dil me kehte the dono

Koyi sapna ham bhi toh paye

Ek din tute ghum ke woh ghere

Jhilmil jhilmil aaye savere

Mausam badala jagi fijaye

Woh mil gaye woh khil

Gaye aur pyar ho hi gaya

Jo manga tha woh paya

Toh hosh kho hi gaya



Mini was lost in the moment, it was like she was back in the past, like she never broke up with Neil, it was just another day in their life, they had a fight and now trying to make it up to each other in their style. They will dance to their heart’s content, enjoy and at the end, like always, end up in each others’ arms in their cosy bed, making love like they had never fought.


Haule haule abb woh diwaane

Gun gun gaye dil ke tarane

Sun sun jhumein sari hawaye

Dhadkan dhadkan hai behaki behaki

Mann mein mann mein chahat

Hai mehaki sapne apne jadu jagaye

Phir dekhoge toh janoge

Kya hai nasha pyar kaa

Yahi sochoge yahi chahoge

Sang rahe yeh sada


And as the intimate images which had come with the memory, flooded her mind, she opened her eyes with a jerk and as if on a cue, the song ended jolting her out of the past and bringing to her present. The song now faintly playing in the back ground and Mini looking in Neil's eyes trying to find out whether he also felt same.


Pyar ki yeh kahani suno

Ek ladka tha ek ladki thi

Hoti kya hai jawani suno

Ek ladka tha ek ladki thi


Neil had his eyes locked with Mini's his hand travled upto her shoulder from her bare upper arm. Mini shuddered under his touch after so long. Just then everyone started clapping for them. Mini looked around realizing where she was. Most ofthe guest were clapping for the performance but some were clearly shocked and surprised. Some had even started whisperings and gossiping. Though she enjoyed the dancing very much but she couldn’t deny the fact that it was not normal if a girl on her engagement dances so passionately, forgetting everything, with another man.


Ashok, her father was also shocked, in fact, had his mouth opened all the while, Babita was so scandalized that she looked like she will faint any moment. Neha, however composed herself and tried to control the situation.


“Ladies and gentlemen give me a big round of applause for our talented bride to be Mini. I myself never knew she is so fantastic dancer.I am sure now Siddharta will dance to her tunes always.” Neha said to divert everyone attention and it worked as people started laughing and clapping for Mini.


“Suno ji, ye kya tha? Ye ladka kaun hai? Aur Mini iske sath kya kar rahi hai. Ladke wale kya soch rahe honge?” Babita nudged Ashok.


“Arre aisa kuch bhi nahi hai. Wo Mini ka purana dost hai. Sirf ek dance hi to hai. Koi kuch nahi sochega. Dont worry, everything is under control.” Ashok assured his wife but he couldn’t shake off the feeling that something is definitely not right with Mini. His baby girl seemed to be in a fix. Is she confused about her decision. Does she still loves this Neil?” Ashok wondered and looked for Bobby. Looks like he has to again grill that boy to find out about the intentions of this Neil.


"Whats his name?" Siddharta asked from Neha. He also found it odd that Mini danced with another man like that.


"Uh...wo...his name...he is...is Neil, Neil Oberoi, he was Mini's colleague." Neha stammered.


"Neil...Neil, is he the same guy Mini was dating? Is he her ex?" Siddharta inquired.


Uh...wo...I dont know." Neha lied and moved from there to avoid further questions but Siddharta till now got an idea who Neil was and by the way his would be wife was taking interest in him, Siddharta was sure there will be a huge scene in his wedding and he wanted to avoid it at any cost.

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to be continued.....

Songs haaayeeeeee

Mineil ...lovely as always...

Their bechaini very well written bulbul😆

Siddharth...bechara...dil tutega eska🥺but we selfish ones will even enjoy that...

Mineil cherishing their memories❤️

Loved it...

Continue soon...

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Superb update

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Them🤣 they just can't resist . They just can't control their feelings 🤣 they know even smallest thing about each other Mini's habits ,Neil's style could imagine them their dance and Neil 🤣 he never leaves any chance🤣

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Pyar ki ek kahaani we wanted MiNeil to dance on this on valentine's day but cvs never gave V day but Anjali did give OS on V day and I remember someone had done vm on this song on MiNeil then and here we get it again🔥 past and present flashes and this song

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Ashok🤣 he is perfect poor Bobby 🤣 could imagine this 2🤣

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MiNeil moments those choti choti things they love about each other . Mini pouting,tooty grin this was so cute. Her typical style and Neil secretly love it Neil habits mini secretly loves it

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Part 4



“Are you crazy Mini? No way I am letting you out of your room tonight. Its your wedding tomorrow morning and you want to meet Neil now, you know its almost midnight.” Neha looked at Mini in disbelief.


“You dont start it now Neha, at least you dont judge me. Mom and dad already bombarded me so many questions about Neil once the engagement function ended.” Mini said in her defense.


“I am with them Mini in this matter. And you know even Siddharta was asking about him from me. God! it was so awkward. I escaped somehow but I think he got a hint about Neil. I told you, inviting Neil to your wedding was a very bad idea. I dont understand why you even want to meet him now? .” Neha asked in frsutration.


“I want to say goodbye to him.” Mini answered.


“What! Why....I mean...what is the need of that?” Neha asked now confused all the more.


“It is important to me. I know you all are wondering what is going between me and him, why I invited him here, why I even interacting with him, why I am unable to focus on my wedding when I broken up with him a long ago...right?” Mini guessed her doubts. Neha nodded her head awaiting Mini’s reply.


“To be honest, I also didn’t know myself what is happening between us, why I am thinking so much about him but after that dance, the brief time I talked to him, I realized that there is something still attaching me to him. Some invisible thread, unspoken words may be. Actually, when I had enough, I just walked out of his house. We had a huge fight and we decided to break off all ties. We never spoke about it, never said goodbyes. May be thats what bothering me subconsciously. I want to end it formally, like it should have been. I understand that I am getting married tomorrow and thats why I want to do it more urgently. I dont want shadow of my past to loom over my future.” Mini explained as clearly as possible.


“Fine! I got your point. But be careful, nobody should know about it.” Neha agreed finally. She helped Mini to get into Neil’s room without anyone noticing.


Neil was lying in his bed wide awake. Sleep was miles away from his eyes. He was busy reliving all his past moments with Mini. All of a sudden now he didn’t understand why they had to break up? Why they couldn’t talk it out? He came out of his thoughts when he heard a knock at his door. He checked the time, it was midnight and he didn’t know who could be there at this time.


He opened the door and Mini hurriedly came in almost pushing him in. “Give me a call once you are done here. I will come to take you back to your room.” Neha said to Mini and in return Mini promised she will call her soon.


“Mini, is everything alright? What are you doing here at this time?” Neil asked getting worried for her.


“No, nothing is right Neil, I have come here to set everything right.” Mini replied.


“What do you mean?” Neil asked as his heartbeats increased in anticipation.


“I thought I had ended it all between us but ever since you have come here I dont know why I feel that all has not ended. There is something...something...” Mini couldn’t complete the sentence for the lack of words.


“That there is something to talk about, to ponder over how we ended like this and why we didn’t put enough efforts to save our relationship?” Neil completed her sentence and Mini couldn’t agree any more.


“Yes, exactly what I am thinking right now. But how do you know? Are you also thinking the same?” Mini uttered, half in relief that he didn’t misunderstood her and half in confusion as to why this is happening with both of them.


Neil nodded in head in reply. “But none of this matters now. We made our decisions and we have to stick to it. Its been a longtime now. What we can do about it?” He added further.


“I agree with you. Thats why I have come here.” Mini said.


“What do you mean?” Neil didn’t understand the meaning.


“I want to end it formally, like mature people, like it should have been at the first place...you know...talk about it, about us, say our goodbyes.” Mini explained.


“No....no...I am not doing this. Mini, I think you should go from here. We dont have to do it now. Tomorrow is your wedding and I’ll be going after attending it. We both will go our own different ways, thats it.” Neil disagreed as he didnt want to go through the emotional roller coaster again.


“Please, try to understand. Its important for me. If I have to move ahead in life than I have to cut off the past ties completely. Some unspoken words between us are still holding me back. We have to do it for our future.” Mini requested.


Neil saw the plea in her eyes and felt her emotions. May be she was right. They need to talk it out. May be he will be able to finally move on in life after this. “Ok, if you say so.” Neil agreed.


“So?” Mini started with questioning eyes.


“So?” Neil shrugged his shoulders implying he dont know where to start from.


Mini chuckled at the awkwardness of the situation but after a brief moment became serious starting the conversation. “Everything was fine between us during those initial days. I have spent some of the most wonderful days of my life with you. I was naive at that time. A girl who always stayed in the protective bubble of her father, when I became independent, moved out in another city to make my identity, it was like I got wings. Then come you. You just walked into my life and swept me of my feet. You were everything that could attract a girl like me. Handsome, charming, that liking towards risks and adventures, a lively personality, you were my first serious relationship. All of this could satisfy a girlfriend, you were a cool boyfriend. But when we think about settling down with someone, we girls want a mature guy, someone having a good husband’s quality. Someone dependable in the matter of household chores and responsibility, a family man, someone who can contribute equally in a life long relationship. When we were in live in, I figured out that you were far away from having all those qualities and the more importantly, you were not even willing to change your ways. You were like a man child who was refusing to grow up and I was fed up. I was fed up from our frequent fights and arguments, from taking care of the house alone. It started taking toll on me and finally I gave up.”


Neil listened everything patiently. He knew whatever she said was true. “I think it was too fast to understand and handle everything. We were like two magnets, got attracted to each other easily, fell in love, moved in together and started talking about marriage. It was so quick that I didn’t even get time to think upon it and what changes it may bring in my life. From my point of view, you went straight from a fantastic girlfriend to a nagging wife mode and I couldn’t handle it. I failed to understand your expectations and therefore I couldn’t change myself accordingly. At the end I was so frustrated that when you moved out of our house I could only focus on the freedom I got from the expectations of a relationship. It never occurred to me that I have actually become lonely. When I finally realised what I lost, it was too late, you were already gone. But then I thought what could have I done to get you back? I was the only boy of my parents, a spoiled brat, I never learned to be responsible and mature. Though I could have put more efforts in our relationship but Its not like I could have change my basic nature. So I thought you deserved someone better than me and look, you have really found one. Siddharta, he is the guy I could never become.”


Mini didn’t know when her eyes become moist. She liked how honestly Neil accepted his mistakes and she was happy to know that he wanted to make everything alright between them, though it never happened but she was content with the feeling that he atleast thought about it. She also realized that may be she burdened him with lots of expectations, all at once and wanted to change him overnight which was not correct on her part because he never tried to change her.

"Do you think there was a chance for us if anyone of us showed some patience and not back out like cowards, not given importance to our egos?" Mini asked the question which was bugging her ever since she sent him the invitation card.


"It doesnt matter now...does it? we have come a long way. But yes, if there was a time machine and I could go into the past then definitely I would have tried to stop you from moving out." Neil answered as he had a sad smile on his face. Looking at him another stream of tears flowed through Mini's eyes.


Neil noticed her tears and before he could think twice, his hands on his own went to wipe them off. Mini didn’t move away his hand, in fact, smiled at him. “So, I guess, thats it. All done between us.” Mini said, her voice still cracking with the emotions.


“Ya, I guess its finally over.” Neil nodded his head, smiling a little.


“I am happy for you. I congratulate you from my heart this time. May you have wonderful future ahead...with Sid...Siddharta.” Neil wished her but stuttered at the last part, taking Siddharta’s name. He still didn’t like to take that name with Mini but what he can do about it.


“Thanks, I also wish you luck. I hope you will find someone special soon.” Mini replied but didn’t know why while saying these words she couldn’t picturize him with some other girl.


“You should go now.” Neil reminded her because he was not sure what he will do if she stays here anymore.


“I should go now.” Mini repeated his words but didn’t know why her legs feels so heavy to move.


Neil backed a few steps and gestured to walk her to the door of the room. Mini held his hand as she started walking. Both of them stood right behind the closed door, none of them trying to open it and actually end this moment. After few moments, Mini sighed and gathered courage to hold the latch of the door.


“Final goodbye then?” Neil asked as he opened his arms for her offering a one last final goodbye hug.


“Final goodbye it is.” Mini replied and without wasting any time got settled in those waiting arms.


Both of them stood hugging each other for the longest time, none of them wanted to break the hug. With great difficulty Neil pulled himself back but as soon as he looked in her eyes, they captivated him their world. Myriads of emotions were crossing through their eyes. Love, sadness,confusion, warmth, grief but the strongest one was the urge to never let go of each other. Just like he said, they were like magnets, almost unable to resists each other when in close vicinity.


Before Neil could have pulled him back again Mini cupped his face. Neil’s heartbeats increased suddenly when he saw the same urge in her eyes. At that moment he wanted nothing more than to close the distance between them but at the back of his mind he knew it was not right. They should stop before its too late.


Neil held Mini’s hand which was cupping his face from side. He took a deep breath clutching it tightly across his heart. “We should...should not...I mean we should remember where we are....in what situation....I think...nothing should happen between us...its for the best.” Neil said with difficulty.


“Yes...yes you are right. We should not...its for the best...nothing should happen. I should go immediately.” Mini repeated.


“You should go immediately.” Neil also repeated but none of them moved even an inch away from each other.


Then they did the mistake of looking in each others eyes again and before they knew it, it went out of their control. Their lips started mating with each other in a desperate attempt to convey their unsaid feelings. Neil’s one hand was lost in Mini’s hair and one was holding her from waist possessively. Mini’s one hand was supporting Neil’s neck and another one was holding the collar of his t shirt, pulling him closer. Their breaths mingling, tongues dancing together and soon they were all over each other.


After sometime as their emotions settled down they found themselves on Neil’s bed, naked, wrapped in the blanket. None of them remembered who pulled whom towards the bed, how they fell on bed, what led to them to undress each other and how they ended up having wildest sex of their lives.

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Originally posted by: N_sharmaa

Them🤣 they just can't resist . They just can't control their feelings 🤣 they know even smallest thing about each other Mini's habits ,Neil's style could imagine them their dance and Neil 🤣 he never leaves any chance🤣


jo mauka chhod de wo Neil kaha🤣

mineil ki yahi usp hai ek dusre ko dekh kar jal bin machli ban jana🤣

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Originally posted by: Krithzz

Pyar ki ek kahaani we wanted MiNeil to dance on this on valentine's day but cvs never gave V day but Anjali did give OS on V day and I remember someone had done vm on this song on MiNeil then and here we get it again🔥 past and present flashes and this song


this song is hot. It suits mineil perfectly.

I would have loved to see them grooving to this number

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Originally posted by: Krithzz

Ashok🤣 he is perfect poor Bobby 🤣 could imagine this 2🤣

Wanted so desperately ashok to return, reunion of father daughter, a good convo then finally ashok becoming a positive character but damn ph and channel.😡

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