Babita OS : Piya Tose Naina - Page 2

Originally posted by: Mishti_Dahi

So happy you liked it! Thanks a lot! Coming from you, this is big :)

Haaye, mere compliment pe mujhe hi compliment de diya 😆❤️

It might be a big compliment but it's big because you've written sooooo beautifully, I love it! 😍

Originally posted by: Octothorpe

I totally loved it Mahi! You should totally write more. Lovely song selection. Classics would always be classics

Thanks a lot Octo! <3

Yeah classics.❤️

Originally posted by: Manasi_MD

Haaye, mere compliment pe mujhe hi compliment de diya 😆❤️

It might be a big compliment but it's big because you've written sooooo beautifully, I love it! 😍

Awwww thanks <3

What a perfect song you chose dear. This song is beautiful but what you have done is no less.

They say poetry in motion, I would say this is poetry in writing. I just loved it how you correlated the song with the incident. I thought there would be more but alas it ended. Please do write the next part. I would love to see her confronting him n confessing thru which he may het his solace which he is longing.

I would love to read your work in future for sure. Please keep writing.

Originally posted by: asmitasb

What a perfect song you chose dear. This song is beautiful but what you have done is no less.

They say poetry in motion, I would say this is poetry in writing. I just loved it how you correlated the song with the incident. I thought there would be more but alas it ended. Please do write the next part. I would love to see her confronting him n confessing thru which he may het his solace which he is longing.

I would love to read your work in future for sure. Please keep writing.

Thank you sooo much! Wow. Your comment makes me very happy :)

Bold - well, I haven't thought of anything yet. I just wanted to utilise this brilliant song in some way, hence penned this down. I'm somewhat bad at emotions so I'd like to leave that to CVs and the other brilliant writers here.

Thanks a lot again! <3