FF:Ek prem kahani READ IMP NOTE..pg9

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 1- pg 1

Part 2 pg 2

Part 3- pg 3

Part 4- pg 4

Part 5- pg5

PROMO- pg5

Part 6- pg6

PROMO- pg 6

Part 7- pg 7

Part 8- pg 7

Part 9- pg 8

PROMO: pg 8

Part10 - pg 9

Part 11 - pg 9

Shaurya - He's arrogant but sexy at the same time. He is the third oldest in his family and because of his past experiences doesn't want to fall in love again. He thinks that all women take ur money and leave you.

Radha - She's cute, and is acting like Mallishka in front of Shaurya's sister Sangam. Since she's already had 2 men leave from her life.....she doesn't noe if she should believe in love or not

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Yay! Finally someone!
Don't forgrt to also participate in the FanFic competition jaan!
Waiting to see your work

Yuks
Edited by queenyuks - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Heyy

U can write in English if u have a problem with Hindi.. In tat way, many of the members might feel easy to read it in english than in hindi 😉

But final decision is urs... Do watever is easy for u...

And iam waiting to see ur work dear...

Krishi
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks alot yuks and khumnum....... i wanted to include some hindi text.......so thats y i need help...

ppl pm whos good at hindi writing (in words)
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Whoohoo - looking forward to your FF (which reminds me I need to update mine🤔)

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Posted: 18 years ago
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ok guys this is my first ever fanfic do comment. if my hindi is wrong pm me and tell me the line ill fix it......please do give ideas for the fanfic...i will edit this post cause i think i only saved half 😕 😳

It was 1 AM at midnight and Radha just put Misty to bed. She was sitting on the sofa thinking about her family and having tears in her eyes.

R: "No, I shouldn't be crying my family is in good hands. Avinash kai paas achi se nokri hai aur woh ghar ko sambhal saktha hai. Mai kyon itni fikar karti hoon?"

She wiped away her tears and started to go up the stairs to check up on Danny and Naiya.

Naiya is standing in her room wearing a black silk dress, which reaches up to her knees, a white jean hightop, long sterling silver earrings, and her hair help up by a small clip and her bangs falling onto her face.

N: "Oh my god? Yeh Larkiya kahan hai? They told me to be ready by 1 and they'll come 15 mins later but I see no sign of them." (Suddenly she hears steps coming towards her room). "Oh damn, someone's coming"
She quickly jumps into bed and pretends to be asleep.
Someone opens the door and we see Radha checking on Naiya. Radha notices that Naiya is sound asleep so she leaves.
" Oh my god, agar aaj mai pakrai gaye……." Suddenly she jumps out of her bed hearing a rock hitting her window. She see's that its no other than her friends. She opens the window and is about to leave when she notices a familiar car approaching and tells the girls "Wait I have to do something" she smiles mischievously.

Meanwhile in Danny's room Danny is fully asleep and is snoring. Radha smiles and leaves.

She is about to go down the stairs when she notices Shaurya.

R: "Shaurya ji, itni raat kohaap kahin thai," (She said it with a woresome face)
S: " Tum koh kya farkh parta hai, aur tum kohn hoti who mujhe puchnai wale?" He went up the stairs opened his room door and went inside.
Radha was taken about with his words and followed him inside into his room.
R: "Mujhe apnai sawale kah jawaab chahiye"
S: " Mein apnai dosto kai saath tha, any problems"
While Shaurya was talking Radha smelled alcohol and she knew that Shaurya was drunk.
R: " Shaurya Ji, aap sharab peh kar ahrai ho?"

Flashback

Shaurya is sitting at backyard of one of his friends house and having his 4th glass of his favourite beer and laughing and talking with his friends Aryan, Abhi, Jai, and Nikel.

N: " So yar, mainai apni patni koh kaha, mein kyon dosrai aurat kai sapna loh jab itni sundur patni mujhe mili." And you know guys what she said. " aacha, tho agar mai itni sundur hoon tho Muscaan koon hai jo hamaisha tumara sapna mein rahti hai?"

All the guys laughed.

S: "Ok, guys time for me to go, cya all later!" Aryan, Abhi, Jai and Nikel said there goodbyes and Shaurya left for home.

His thoughts were interrupted when someone closed the door behind them and locked it from the outside so no-one can get in or out. Radha and Shaurya exchanging glances and banged on the door yelling for someone to open the door. Someone is twisting the key ring around their hands and it's no other than Naiya.

N: (In her mind) "Abh mein dekh thi hoon mujhe club janay se koon roktha hai" She smiles and leaves.

Edited by *saakshi_fan* - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Interesting start sweets....I especially like the idea of SR being locked in one room - Hum Tum Ek Kamre Mein Band Ho; aur Chabhi Kho Jaye!😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Go Naiya!
She finally got something right.

Great start jaanu, I do hope you update soon (warna you'll be bombarded with PM's asking for updates)

Yuks
Edited by queenyuks - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks guys
u noe sept 12 epi sort of had my idea in it that naiyas "boyfriend" somehow traps her and radha comes to the rescue but instead they take radha.............im not going in details but do u guys still want me to do that or come up with something else...

go ahead and give me ideas PM me or just rite it onto the forum!
Edited by *saakshi_fan* - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: queenyuks

Go Naiya!
She finally got something right.

Great start jaanu, I do hope you update soon (warna you'll be bombarded with PM's asking for updates)

Yuks

haha thanks for the advice

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