FF:Ek prem kahani READ IMP NOTE..pg9 - Page 5

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: *saakshi_fan*

plzzzzzzzzzz comment.....im watiting...or else ill post after diwali....seriously

nooooooooooooooooooo and one more thing plssssssssssssssssss apne fanfic mein shourya ko mat marna plssssssss
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Posted: 17 years ago
#42
pplz plssss comment anju is the only sensible person to encourage me.....

@ Anju šŸ¤— and ā¤ļø
Edited by *saakshi_fan* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#43
lalalalala dear saakshi fan I don't want to be rude or something he 😳 he but Im waiting to hear some new storys hehehe 😃 šŸ˜›
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i'll update today or tommorw

but i need 7 comments first!!

Edited by *saakshi_fan* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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pplzzzzzzzzz y no1 commenting.........i have kept sharuya alive in my fanfic.....plzzzz comment........if boring tell me........give ideas.....come on ppl motivation.....im starting another fanfic.........hopefully i get comments in that! 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
#46
ok guys heres the next part, the next one will be long so hope u enjoy! do comment!

Shaurya had decided to go and get some water for Radha.

S: Radha i'll brink u some water, u'll feel better

R: (Nods) thanks

Shaurya leaves and goes to the waiter. Meanwhile Walia has a conversation with Radha.

W (Walia): Hey, how's it going?

R: Good (Feeling uncomforatable and hestiantely says) and u?

W: That'ts great, oh i'm good to

W: So i heard ur an international fashion designer?

R: Yeah, thats rite

W: So what gender do u do?

R: I do females, only

W: OK, wut do u design

R: Um... i.....i ...about anything my boss wants me to do

W: Indian?

R: Mix of Indian and western

W: Interesting

R: (Smiles)

W: well, good luck in the competition

R: thanks, same to u

Shaurya with watier

S: One water please

Waiter: Sir, for the water u'll have to ask the man with the tray of juices, he will have glasses of water with him

S: Ok, thanks

He comes to Radha and he sees that Biki has just left.

S: What was he doing here

R: Oh, (she smiles michevevoulsy) we were having a good small heart to heart conversation

S: the other waiter has water and he just left to get a refill for his glasses (thinking to himself: hope she didn't say anything that she wasn't supposed to)

R: Oh, ok i see

Naiya outside with friends

Girls: Yaar Naiya why did u call us here

N: I was kinda getting bored inside- business party

Girl: Well, guess what i brought with me?

The Girl takes something out of her car and holds it infront of Naiya

Naiya looks shocked but has a smile on her face

S: Waiter.

The Waiter cannot here because of the music "Where's the party tonight?"

S: Radha just wait here i'll be right back. Don't start talking to anyone, without knowing how they are.

R: ok , (She nods)

Shaurya goes up to the waiter. He taps him on the shoulder.

He is shocked to who he sees.

Meanwhile outside Naiya and her friends are stirring up some fun.

N: Wow, champain how did u guys even get this?

Girl: Did u forget? I have an older bro

N: Oh, OH (She smiles)

Girl: OK so comeone girl, drink up

N: No yaar, aaj nahin

Girl: Kyon, kya hoowa (why, what happened)

N: Bua mite not let me go n sleep in my own bed.

Girl: What?! Why would she do that?

N: Cause i'm drunk. and its a rule " Mere ghar mein shaarbi auratha nahin ayaien gaye" she say mockingly (In my house there will be no drunken women)

Girl: Just have a small amount

All the girls agree

N: OK sure, but with what should I drink, my hands?

One of the other girls: I have come prepared

N: Wow, lets get the party started!

Shaurya is shocked to see the waiter, or is it even the waiter? naiya has started drinking....kya hoga? will drunken radha be able to save naiya, or will radha not be able to save herself?
Find out next time!



Edited by *saakshi_fan* - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#47
come on guys....plzzzz comment....is it that boring...tell me i'll spice it up in the next part (thier tango is gunna make the floor hot šŸ˜‰ )
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Posted: 17 years ago
#48
Its good. As long as you keep Shourya alive and the piece romantic between
the SR then I am all for reading it. Keep it up. Thanks. šŸ˜‰ šŸ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
#49
hey guys..won't be able to post for a few days.most prbably on tuesday i will post!
heres a promo

PROMO:

tango! things get heated up on the dance floor. does naiya get caught, or does she get saved by radha on time? will there be another love story stirring up?

FIND OUT NEXT TIME!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#50
great dear next part jaldi likho plss cant wait

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