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Posted: 12 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: paradigm

Great update! But now I want to see Kunal coming out of this phase! Its too painful to read about him feeling so helpless in life!


I know Pankhuri,
I too want to bring him out ASAP, but must pass through required phases
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Posted: 12 years ago
#62

Originally posted by: 11rukshar

good job jay well written👏


so emotional ff never image sinal in this situation😭

watting for next update


thanks😊
this is my other FF I mentioned
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
very emotional update jay...😭
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Posted: 12 years ago
#64
too emotional jay ..have nothing to say after reading this pat but hope he comes out of this soon and sidhi does help him
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Posted: 12 years ago
#65
👏👏👏

Its superb,,,,,but cant see them like diz 😒
update next soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#66

Originally posted by: jay_bpm


thanks😊
this is my other FF I mentioned


yaa got it
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Posted: 12 years ago
#67
Awesome jay
very emotional update.want to see Sinal happy
waiting for next update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
Oh god...completely speechless...don't knw wer to start from...ok first of all a big thank u for sending pm...wat a emotional update jay...terrific writting...i was visualizing the whole scene and had tears in my eyes...the way u hv portrayed Sinal's emotions is highly commendable...loved every bit...every line of tis update...frankly speaking tis track is exactly wat i wanted to c in the show...but nvr got that ...but all thanks to u buddy for giving me my complex kc back...i knw tis track is emotional and everyone wants sinal to come out of it asap and i am sure eventually they will ...but trust me tis phase was actually required and u hv incorporated it very well...for me kc was alwaz a complex character ...completely unpredictable one...and trust me u hv touch the right chord...i hv became a big fan of ur writing dude...and it alwaz our pleasure to read ur ff...greedy people alwaz want more so eagerly waiting for next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#69
everyone, thank you for your compliment. I know this is indeed emotional update and it hurts to see SINAL this way, especially Kunal. I too wish this to not take place but it is required. I will try my best to properly progress in this phase. Sorry but you won't see so called "romance" here till last😊

@Ranizy - thank you very much for your compliments. I too have always liked KC as complex character and morons took that away. With this FF, I am penning down how I imagine Kunal would have behaved given his complexity and will punish Ribhay the way I want, especially Abhay😡
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Posted: 12 years ago
#70
hi jay
read all the parts
liked very much
if story can move this way in the show it got more trps

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