In a charitable mood ;) chpt11 on pg20 - Page 7

Fari, your chapter was poetry in motion 😆 Seriously ... it was beautiful and you even managed to elevate the drab FB's to a grander level 😳 Great job... thank you!

Hmm.. I feel so bad for Kuna😭l! Thanks for the beautiful update Fari!😳

Thanks, for all the praise guys😳 I'm not much of a story writer, so I decided to just draw circles around Kunu's convoluted mind instead😆

Ramya I look fwd to your chapter tomorrow, I have no doubts, it's going to be a great one!

Annie, the golawala scene has irked me forever, had found it particularly trite & there have been some of those to go around. Am glad you think the FB here makes it sound better. WTH, one does have the tendency to romanticize aspects of one's past😉

Originally posted by: hima2012

Hmm.. I feel so bad for Kuna😭l! Thanks for the beautiful update Fari!😳

@fariyal: loved the way u have pen dwnd the emotions😊👏...

Originally posted by: chitsss

Somehow the CV's and writers failed to do that right Hima?😕

Originally posted by: hima2012

Hmm.. I feel so bad for Kuna😭l! Thanks for the beautiful update Fari!😳

I shed tears for Kunal too Hima, it must be terrible to be live as a victim of circumstances & be caught in a web of your own making. I can only liken him to a helpless leaf
caught in a dust devil, spinning flailingly.
We can only wait for the wind to die down & the mist to clear... that I meant for the cvs😉 for Kunu's fate is inversely related to the cvs😆

@ paradigm - Good update yaar.

Fari feels like i am reading a poem rather than story. Very beautifully written story👏 👏. Loved the gola wala scene. Reminded me the golden period of Parichay😃.

☺️☺️ Sheesh! My meandering scribbles being likened to poetry is humbling. I don't know how to handle such generous praise😳


Much as I love KC, I've always considered him to be lacking in various aspects & since the start was waiting to see him "man up", the dislike took on new meaning when he left his pregnant wife in jail.

I wrote what I did, in part tnx to the on going brouhaha on the forum with regards to the characters... It made me realize that just as KC lives in a darkness of his own making & is a victim of his own small mind, real people too, with their one track notions & refusal to budge from their narrowed down POVs of their favorite characters, create the same damage to themselves & others they encounter on the forum.

If anything, the disquiet on the forum has made me a little more understanding, even forgiving of the scrambled state of my hero's mind😆