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stuti

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Posted: 13 years ago

#51

first of all thanx Fari for this thread ...

and all the writers are doing an amazing job ...loved reading everyone 's version of how the story should proceed ...👍🏼

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bhavis

@bhavis

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Posted: 13 years ago

#52

Annie - stopping at the cliffhanger. 👍🏼

Hope CVS show something as mature as you have suggested.

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shamrish

@shamrish

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Posted: 13 years ago

#53

@Annie : Great script.. 👏... Excellent twist in getting Sinal together for Bangalore case and who of all makes that happen, Abhay...😛😉...Liked their talk during the walk... Obviously perfect end to the script 😃😉...

@Silambu : Could not comment over the weekend.. Obviously liked the way you took forward AD - Ritcha.. Overall good effort 👏👏...

Glad to see most of us are on the same page as how to take current Parichay forward...😃
Wish CV's are reading this...😛...

Look forward to reading other writer's takeon moving forward...

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palzs

@palzs

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#54

tooo good jus loved it...😊😊

great job..

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paradigm

@paradigm

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 13 years ago

#55

Part 6

It was Abhay calling Siddhi. Unhappily Siddhi picked up the phone.

Abhay: Hi Siddhi!! Congrats on the case

Siddhi: Thank you Abhayji

Abhay: Woh maine flight tickets book karwadi hain. Tumhari flight 3 ghante mein hain.

Siddhi: Flight aaj? Par hum to kal aane wale the

Abhay: Woh main aapko miss.. I mean Anand aapko miss kar raha tha..

Siddhi: Accha okie..

Siddhi: Kunal woh Abhayji ka phone tha. Anand, unka beta, mujhe bahut miss kar raha hai..Unhone aaj raat ki hi tickets book karwa di hai. Anand mujhe miss kar raha tha.

Kunal: Oh accha.. woh... theek hai.. chalte hai airport

Siddhi: Kunal hum jo baat kar rahe the

Kunal: Its okie Siddhi. Whats the point being caught in the past?

Abhay's call had broken the trance that SINAL were in and they were unable to complete their conversation.

Siddhi got back home at around 5 am. Anand was sleeping. She sat beside him for a while gently running her fingers through his hair. Her son. Kunal and her son. She kissed him on the forehead and went to her room.

She was sitting her on her bed resting for some time. Sleeping at this time made no sense. There was a knock at her door. She opened her eyes to find Abhay standing there

Abhay: I hope maine aapko disturb nahi kiya

Siddhi: Nahiye.. Please come in.

Abhay: woh siddhi mujhe aapse.. woh pata nahi kaise.. kaha se shuru karu

Siddhi: Abhayji we are friends. You dont have to hesitate

Abhay: Siddhi, Deepika ki death ke baad I was all alone. Then Anand came into my life.. uska pita bante bante i found a purpose in life.. a will to live.. then you came into our lives.. And after many years i felt like my family was complete.

Siddhi can we really make this family complete?

Siddhi: I am sorry I dont understand

Abhay: Siddhi, will you marry me???

There was a deathly silence. Abhay was nervous abour Siddhi's response and Siddhi was shocked by what abhay had just said.She hadnt seen this coming

Siddhi: Abhayji.. I dont know what to say.. I had never expected this.. But honestly I dont think i can marry anyone. I am still in love with my ex-husband... he will always be my husband for me.

Abhay: Siddhi there is no real point stopping our lives for people who have moved on..Why are you rushing your reply?? Take your time nd think.

Saying that he left the room, leaving a shocked Siddhi behind

At the office

Abhay: Siddhi aap bina bataye hi chali aayee office..woh kal ki baat se aap...

Siddhi: Woh Abhayji abhi mujhe ek meeting ke liye jana hai.. Aakar..

As she began walking away Abhay held on to her hand

Abhay: Naraaz to nahi ho na?

Siddhi: Nahi.. ab please jaane dijiye

Kunal had seen Abhay hold Siddhi's hand. Just yesterday he had promised to himself to be civil with siddhi, but now his jealousy pushed him to taunt her.

Kunal: Lagta hai Abhay ke bete ke saath saath Abhay khud bhi tumhe bahut miss kar raha tha

Siddhi: Kunal please dont interfere

Kunal and Siddhi had a successful meeting. During and after the meeting she had been receiving calls from Abhay that she had been ignoring. She was signing some documents while kunal waited outside Abhay called Kunal up..

Abhay: Hi Kunal.. yaar siddhi tumhare saath hai na.. I proposed to her today morning and she hasnt been talking to me ever since. I finally realized what i did wrong. I had bought a beautiful diamond ring. But in my eagerness i forgot to give that to her while proposing. Can you try and calm siddhi down from my side please?

With every passing word kunal's pain kept increasing and by the time the call was done he had tears in his eyes

Siddhi: Kunal aap theek to hai na?

Kunal: Main to theek hoon.. but tum kis tarah ki insaan ho?

Siddhi: Kya matlab hai aapka? and please behave yourself... hum client ki office mein hai..

Kunal: Ab abhay ko kyun bhaga rahi ho? usne ring nahi dia to uske proposal ko accept nahi karogi.. kitni matlabi ho tum? mujhe paiso ke liye chhoda.. ab abhay ko paiso ke liye ghuma rahi hoon..

Siddhi: Kunal STOP IT!! people are staring at us!!!

Kunal suddenly realized what he had been doing.. he walked away.. i just cant control myself around her..we cant work together...I should resign

Siddhi (thought) As long as i amthere kunal will not be able to work properly. I should resign

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chitsss

@chitsss

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Posted: 13 years ago

#56

Nice update paradigm!😉 Expecting an update from Fariyal soon!😃

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eshi

@eshi.nl

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#57

@ annie , paradigm nice updates👍🏼

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Fariyal

@Fariyal

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#58

Chapter 7 - "No Escape"

Escaping her eyes, I sighed with relief as I turned my back on her & left the office,
eyes that troubled me with their fathomless limpid pools of love & yearning,
eyes that belied her harsh words, words that had broken me,
that I have lived with for almost a decade.

Almost a decade... what had my life been like without her?
Each desolate day had merged into the next, without an end or a beginning, for 9 years I have known neither dawn nor dusk...
I exist, bare to bones, tormented into abysmal nothingness.

I clenched my fist & tried to distance myself from the memories as I walked away from the building. I hate her, reminding myself of her betrayal, I tried to keep that thought afloat, amongst the vastitude of emotions crowding my mind.
The tinkling bell on the golawala's ice crusher brought me to an involuntary halt.
There she was, I smiled indulgently, brushing away a playful wisp of hair from her face
as she slurped away at her gola with child-like abandon.
The honk of a car & she was gone. "Snap out of it, Kunal", I chided myself,
"chasing shadows is a futile pursuit".

I willed myself to put one foot ahead of the other & walk, walk away from the golawala,
from her...
She tried to kill our baby; I said it out aloud to myself, as if feeling the words roll off my tongue will make them sound more real, more convincing. I walk on resolutely, jaws clenched, trying to look ahead, trying to leave her behind'.
The melancholic strains of a Guru Dutt song wafting from a balcony above, wash over me... Humne To Jab Kaliyaan Maangi Kaaton Ka Haar Mila
Bichhad Gayaa Har Saathi Dekar Pal Do Pal Ka Saath

I find myself at the lake, solaced, I empty my chest of pent up breaths & allow my shoulders to slump as I gaze into the familiar still waters.

Time & again I have come here, seeking answers, trying to look through your icy surface into your fiery depths. Fire & ice'

Who am I fighting? Her or myself? Is the darkness real or make believe?
All my questions yet unanswered, new ones unsettle me further...

She is evil, then where does the feeling that she is the shield between me & the evil stem from? What is that question in your eyes, Siddhi? What is it that you are asking of me?
Why do you have that expectant look in your eyes when I am near?

There is an answer to every question, a solution to every problem, I know that, but...Where do I seek mine? Why do the answers elude me?

A gentle breeze drew ripples across my reflection on the placid lake, contorting it. My misshapen, disfigured form stared back at me, mocking me, challenging me.
Look inwards, you hold the answers, look within,
it chortled wickedly, dancing, keeping tempo with the breeze.

Back home, I draw the curtains, blocking out the moon's knowing smile, switched the bedside lamp on & readied for bed... Siddhi is afraid of the dark.

Siddhi, always Siddhi!

She is the one that left me.... Healed me, then broke me, kissed away my tears only to make me cry again, loved me, then left me. She is my past & the more I try, my unshakable present too...

My face softens as I smile at my son's sleeping form, Anand, my life, Siddhi's ansh... I try to sleep, squeezing my eyes shut, burningly tight, trying to empty my mind of her...

Her arms clasped around my neck, she looks up impishly at me, as I surrender to the echoes of the past...

Aap jahan bhi jaaoge, mujhe hi paaoge.

I slept.

Edited by Fariyal - 13 years ago