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Posted: 12 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: chitsss

I like it Hima!😉 Liked the way you showed KC's confusion with all the questions that are suddenly springing up!👏

And AD has marked Richa , looking forward to see him kick her ass!😆


Thanks Chitra😳
About time the man started thinking😉
Me too looking forward to seeing some Richa aunty ass kicking😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@fariyal and Hima lovey FF enjoyed thoroughly I am not good at writing so I cannot contribute in writing but def contribute in reading and hitting likes for all d updates
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@Fari : Where in the world were you all these yrs?? 😆😆😆... Parichay have had so much impact that even few weeks/months makes us feel like years...🤣.🤣...
One of the most hilarious posts in a long time 👏 and though i had vowed not to comment/post on anything related to Parichay, was not able to resist.. Thanks to you...😛😉...
Great idea of donation assuming CV's have left anything in us to donate 🤣🤣...CV's may have paralyzed KC's left brain but with all the torture , i think we have all brains paralyzed...Luckily i stopped watching at the right time and with proper treatment, just about managed to come back to reality...🤣🤣🤣... And now i am expected to think again...😆😆...
I dread "C" word...🤣🤣 [ Chitra, i only meant "C " word related to the show...😆]...
If i do not relapse , will try to donate something from whatever is left in me...
@Chitra & Hima : Great script. 👏.. As Chitra and Fari know, there was a time when most of us only used to read each other's FF/posts than worrying about the show 🤣🤣
Edited by shamrish - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sorry guys...I have written this next Chapter still heavily influenced by Dreaded "C"...
Excuse me if there are any bloopers..🤣🤣🤣...
I had some scripts i was supposed to work on new FF's, so tweaked one of them to come up with this... Otherwise i am not that skillful to write such a quick story...😆😆😆...
Hope u like it...
Chapter 3 :
Kunal takes Anand [ AD] to his BR and asks him to freshen up telling him that he has a surprise
for him... AD being new is not sure of the schematics of Chopra housee.. So he seems a bit lost
which Kunal quickly notices... Kunal wants to find out what is making him nervous and insecure..
AD immediately realizes that he is being noticed and vows in his mind that come what may, till he
and AC get to the objective of uniting Sinal , he would not let his Parda Fash happen...
He makes some excuses by saying that i did not get to sleep well at the camp, am feeling tired...
He requests Kunal if he can help him get the hot water in the Bathroom..
Kunal is a bit surprised but immediately takes AD and gets the work done...
AD freshens up and as he is coming out , notices Anokhi and decides that he has befriend her
as early as possible.. He also eyes Raj Abbu as a potential candidate..
He definately had marked out Richa aunty but also notices that Veena amma is probably in the same league...
At the same time, Seema Aunty walks in with grocery bag in hand, notices Anand and hugs him..
AC had mentioned to him about Seema aunty good nature , so AD thinks she is definately another candidate to befriend quickly...After exchanging pleasantries with his potential trio to befriend,he walks in Kunal's BR...
When AD is back in the BR, kunal starts to enquire about everything about the camp...
Basically he tries to find details about the other Anand whom Siddhi had come to the camp for...
Little does Kunal know that Siddhiwala Anand is in his BR...
AD starts telling about himself without letting Kunal doubt him...Kunal asks him who is AD's mother as he was told that AD's father is Abhay Dewan.. AD tells Kunal that Abhay Dewan is not ...
When AD was just about to disclose that, Richa walks in the BR to ask AD what he would like to eat for lunch and forcibly takes him away outside...
AD is like ...😡😡😡

Kunal now starts pondering about all the happenings in the past few days and moreso in the last 9 yrs..
His heart thinks that Siddhi still loves him and that he still loves her.. But his mind has all these
questions.. Now AD's word richochette.. He heard ABhay Dewan is not...Could that mean Abhay is not his father etall..
But then if yes, who could be the mother of AD??

Could it be Siddhi?? If she is not, then why did she come to Camp and was worried about AD..
Then if she is, then who is real father of AD..
He thinks could he have MU Siddhi 9 yrs back that Siddhi actually left him for money??

Is it possible that AD is actually his son as well?? May be Siddhi had twins??

May be he made a big mistake of leaving Siddhi in jail at that point??

WHat had happened to his inner feelings that time?? Why did he tell Siddhi that he had married Ritcha and AC is their son...

May be that is why Siddhi is marrying Abhay.. ??
With all these thoughts in his mind and goes out for a walk...With Musafir ho Yaaron in BG,
he walks down the same streets , stop at the same Chanawala , gets his chana and ends up in Santhosh Bar...

He asks Chotu to get him full bottle ..
He says how can he get over all the mistakes he has done so far regards Siddhi...
He gets fully drunk as he has had 3 bottles already... He asks for more and he is refused, so starts bashing the waiters... Someone who knows Kunal calls Chopra house , somehow AD picks up the phone, finds out Kunal's whereabouts and runs to there... This is 1st time going to a bar and seeing his father's drunken state ...
When he reaches there , he sees Kunal on the floor fully drunk...
On another table, there was this Anna Bhai an IT guy who was there enjoying with his friends..

He asks AD who is Kunal ... AD tells him the story he knows so far...
Anna Bhai says this is all... He goes to Kunal and lifts him up , makes him sit up,splashes water on his face.. Kunal opens his eyes gingerly..
AnnaBhai asks him if he is feeling better and says "Hear my story what had happened to me and how i recovered from it..."

He starts singing a song [ Remember the song from Munnabhai MBBS]..

appun jaise tappori s/w Engg. ko kya maalum...
saala programming kis chidiya kaa naam hai...
copy paste kaa kaam miltaa hai bass appun khush...!!!
fir yeh coding kaa lafdaa locha kaiko?
are kaiko ?
arre kaiko re?
fir ek din boleto appun ko project mila...
ya haaa!!!!
saala appun ka khopdi chakkar kha gaya ...
computer ke saath dil saala takkar kha gayaa...!!!
din bhar appun computer ke aagge...
koi lafdaa nahi kuch nahi...
Boss bola kya be Anna saala tu bhi programmer bann gaya...!!!
ye Annabhai kya coding bana rela hai baap...!!!
(fir ...? fir kya huwa..?)
fir ek din appun ne coding poora kar diya...
form poora karke appun ne testing ko bhej diya...!!!
lagataa tha ab appun kaa kaam khatam ho gaya ...!!!
par module me issues dekhake sala appun darr gaya ...!!!
appun ke saamne tester ne mere coding me ki galtiyaa nikali...
aapun ke coding ki poori waat laga di... appun udharich khadaa thaa... par
appun kuch nahi bola... kaiko bolega? kaiko...?
saala ek, ek kaam kiya thaa... usme bhi itne bugs...
par appun ek aansu nahi roya...
kaiko royega...?
kaiko..?
saala appunich yedaa thaa naa...!!!
agale din se phir wohi life chalu...
wohi mails forward karnaa, wohi messages, wohi template, wohi assignments...
saala itnaa mails forward kiya...itnaa mails forward kiya...
log samze mail server down hoyega... bhoolneka hai bhoolneka hai par kya karega...!!!
training milke bhi jab kaam nahi miltaa hai...
haa thoda bore huwa par chaltaa hai...
(phir ...? phir kya huwa..?)
fir ...?
fir kya...?
fir agale din appun ko aur ek project mila...!!!
shaappak...
saala appun ka khopdi phir chakkar kha gaya ...
computer ke saath dil saala phir takkar kha gayaa...!!!
That brings a wry smile on Kunal's face...He thinks i wasted my 5 yrs for Ritcha..
I got nothing out of that relationship but just despair.. Then Siddhi came along and changed him completely...He started taking family responsbilities again until that unfortunate incident
happened 9 yrs back which took Siddhi out of his life and he went back to his old ways..
He wasted another 9 yrs and now that Siddhi is back, he got a job again and started to feel better..
He says i cannot waste anymore years.. I have to investigate this further as to what happened exactly 9 yrs back and whether Ritcha told him the truth or was there something else going on...
He thinks about how Ritcha is manipulating him and may be she may have done the same to Siddhi then ??...
He vows that he will bring the truth out but in this he probably will need Anand's help...
While he was in all these deep thoughts, AD calls him out and asks him if he is ok...
He says he got a call and came running for him and ask him why does he get all drunk...
What is causing him all this pain??? Is it Richa aunty or someone else??
AD knows Richa aunty is not his mother but then who is his mother??... Kunal has no answers for that ...
AD tells Kunal that he does not like Richa aunty and does not want Kunal to be near her... Everytime he sees her, he feels like biting or punching her..
He tells Kunal how he punched her just a while back and now Richa aunty's nose is all swollen up.. Veena Amma is all irritated at him...
Hearing this , Kunal thinks this is a very good opportunity to put the condition of marraige with Ritcha that Ritcha gets Anand's permission first..
This can buy him time to investigate further on what exactly happened 9 yrs back..
Edited by shamrish - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@hima
👏
very well written👍🏼
kunal's self talk is amazing...
and u used all the evidences he had in favour of siddhi...😛


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Posted: 12 years ago
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See!! I knew I was surrounded by good, generous people here😆 What a great start we are off to👏

@Amrish, gee, I'm responsible for your fall back into forum drivel again?? Shucks, thanks, you make me sound like Lilith😳 What a compliment😛😆

Go on you all, I know you have a generous streak about you...reach into your hearts & give us a chapter in KC's name. It's for a good cause😛

it's quite simple really, only thing you need to keep in mind is to not make KC ultra smart in a jiffy. That would be quite a jolt for the audience who've been lulled into seeing their hero consistently doing a Rainman/Forrest Gump/Rizvan khan impersonation for ever so long.😆
Edited by Fariyal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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@chitsss...good one...like it...😃👏ur declaimer is good...


@hima...sinal moments r good...😳


@shamrish... good one AJ...the song is too good...
Edited by -suhani- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Too good both of you. Chitra and hima !

Well just wonderful. Thinking and execution. From all the crap that the cvs had created . Both have wonderfully reasoned all those questions that the cvs. Happily left behind unanswered .

Wish something strikes them after they go through these pages of donation.!

And a very big thank you. To you. All .

Am not good at writing but sure would read and encourage to the best extent possible ,


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Posted: 12 years ago
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cvs free copy rights hai lelo jaldi se🤣
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hima.. Loved the chapter 2 👍🏼

You used the facts very logically and the result is what we desperately want to see!!!!

Anand marking R aunty!!! 😃


Edited by shweta_r - 12 years ago

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