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shamrish

@shamrish

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#161

@Jay : Thanks for the Mahaepi 😉😃...
Very beautifully written 👏... We had already seen the chai and tissue back.. U gave us those famous KC dialogues and rose bouquet...
Thanks...Those were indeed the golden period of Parichay...
Hard to understand how the Creatives still have not realized despite the miserable TRP's...
Perfect end to chapter with the KC shayari...⭐️...

If i may, I would like to add few more lines to depict Kunal's state of mind where Siddhi is giving him clues on how much she loves/yearns for him even after 9 yrs..

Koi Aankhon Se Baat Kar Leta Hai

Koi Aankhon Mein Mulakat Kar Leta Hai

Bada Mushkil Hota Hai Jawab Dena

Jab Koi Khamosh Rehkar Sawaal Kar Leta Hai

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter 😛😉

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Padmini

@d.padmini

Dazzler

Posted: 13 years ago

#162

loved it jay.. esp the way you described how Sidh felt looking at Kunal with tissue..tissue is one of the symbols of SINAL and their love story so glad that they are back an dthat too due to your lovely fff with bang.. loved teh auto scene and Kunal self talk .. this is how you want Kunal think right and you have poured all what you want Kunal to feel and think in your FF.. loved it to core ..

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BornHyper

@BornHyper

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#163

Jay, Congratulations on penning down this wonderful piece... I especially liked the detail in which you have described everything - each emotion, each action and each word...👍🏼

You story has made me fall in love with SiNal again!

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jay_bpm

@jay_bpm

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#164

So I am back to say a word or two, you know I never stop with that😆

@Fari - I thank you for allowing me to contribute. after looking at the length, you may be debating whether it was such a good idea or not, but it's done now.😆😉

@Bharo - I am glad you enjoyed three major scenes.

@Paradigm - well for a change you are giving me compliment for my piece, thanks.

@Gayatri - Glad you were able to experience your favorite scene again. Glad you liked SINAL emotions very much as that was major part of it.

@Ramya - I did read your comment so I had to.😆

@Sinan_sinal - glad you liked Kunal i portrayed.

@Hima - Seems my piece was upto mark set by you guys. Thanks.

@apoorva.maddala - Thanks. I am big sucker for KC self-talk.😆

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jay_bpm

@jay_bpm

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: BHAVI1972
Jay worth reading the lengthy essay once again😛😉 👏👏.
Well glad you considered my essay worth reading and not boring😆
Best ones - Ek to aurat uparse Vakil back👍🏼 ,it happens to be one of my favorite dialogue.
I see you showed Siddhi eating rice for a change 😛, i had read your comment so had to incorporate that😆
and you adding - In Jay's story SINAL can have nothing but the perfect day. Wish the show too showed such days. adding my name was my uncontrollable ego making it's way out😆 I too wish CVs get some sense and provide positivity for a change

Yours shayari at the end made perfect sense to the story you wrote. ⭐️ thanks. that was the goal and your comment suggest it fulfilled it😃
So full on to bring back the old essence of Parichay thanks😃

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jay_bpm

@jay_bpm

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: eshi.nl
Jay awesome update👏
i like right from the starting to ending.especially kunal's self talk about siddhi😃
now iam sure u can write a book on sinal's emotions(for just one scene) 😆😆
wil b waiting for next update

guys(to all who r making this contributions)
thanks 👏👏👏
awesome updates.

thank you for liking it all.

I am big on Kunal's self-talk so I had to add that😛

well if I gather all of my posts, I may be able to assemble a book😆😉

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jay_bpm

@jay_bpm

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: vipraja26
wonderful writing jay !

the tissue , auto and the red roses at the traffic all goes a long way in bringing back wondeful memeories both to sinal and us - the fans !

self talk being one another significant point of kunal ' s charecter is very well done .

i am sure all of us are drawing a great deal of satisfaction from thesenchapters rather than expecting the cvs to bring in such sensibilities in the show .

thankyou for the wonderful work and eagerly looking foward to richa 's exposure .

@bold - glad I was able to do that.

@red - for me, it's most essential factor of his character so I had to add it.

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jay_bpm

@jay_bpm

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: Silambu
Jay my dear friend. looks like still have found the answers that you are desperately searching for 9 years! Anyway, love your update. Beatufifully written!
You portrayed all the emotions beautifully or should I say poetic literature. Loved it . Especially the tissue and roses.

My favourite part was the telling off to Richa. Really would like to see something like this in Parichay. You could not have phrased it better... Loved it.

what can I say my friend. My memory serves me right and believe in natural flow so I look for explanation, I know I am pathetic in that nature😆

@bold - Thanks for the compliment.

@red - Me too waiting for that day. given we need to watch our language or...😆😉

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jay_bpm

@jay_bpm

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#169

Originally posted by: shamrish
@Jay : Thanks for the Mahaepi 😉😃...
Very beautifully written 👏... We had already seen the chai and tissue back.. U gave us those famous KC dialogues and rose bouquet...
Thanks...Those were indeed the golden period of Parichay...
Hard to understand how the Creatives still have not realized despite the miserable TRP's...
Perfect end to chapter with the KC shayari...⭐️...

If i may, I would like to add few more lines to depict Kunal's state of mind where Siddhi is giving him clues on how much she loves/yearns for him even after 9 yrs..

Koi Aankhon Se Baat Kar Leta Hai

Koi Aankhon Mein Mulakat Kar Leta Hai

Bada Mushkil Hota Hai Jawab Dena

Jab Koi Khamosh Rehkar Sawaal Kar Leta Hai

Eagerly awaiting the next chapter 😛😉

I like ME comment most. those who know me will say most of my posts are ME😆

I am glad it reminded you of golden days of Parichay. Only if CVs can understand what made those days Golden, we would have more to discuss and less to criticize.

Glad you thought shayari was perfcet end as that is what I hoped to achieve.

Like your poetry very much as well👏

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jay_bpm

@jay_bpm

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#170

@ padmini - thanks. we all are suckers for tissue, auto and rose bouquet. glad you liked Siddhi's emotions well as being a guy depicting woman's emotions is a challenge.

Yes by this chapter I put forth how I want Kunal to think, feel and behave. 😆

@shweta - thanks for appreciation and glad you enjoyed detail and it is major compliment to hear you've fallen in love with SINAL again.

@Fari - once again sorry, as if my longgg post wasn't enough, I flooded your thread more.😆