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Gayathri

@Gayathri_MSK

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#151

Jay,
my spl thnks to u fr gvng bk old memories.. splly the rose boquet.. it was my most favorite scn of sinal..
Well portrayed siddhi n kunal emotions...
overal its fantastic...

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ramya

@rainbowgirl

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#152

Great update Jay, thanks for bringing the aaye back 😉 😆

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SV_20

@SV_20

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#153

Fantastic update jay loved kunal's self talk n shayari

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DiVa

@Dihiva

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#154

Jay!!🤗 Superb update!! Loved how you showed tissue, lunch, auto, roses, Kunal shouting at Richa, kids questioning Sinal and Sinal self-talking!!👏 Loved it!😳 Thanks!

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apoorva

@-apoorvas

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#155

@hima and jay superb updates ..
Loved kc self talk
👏

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bhavis

@bhavis

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#156

Jay worth reading the lengthy essay once again😛😉 👏👏.

Best ones - Ek to aurat uparse Vakil back👍🏼 , I see you showed Siddhi eating rice for a change 😛, and you adding - In Jay's story SINAL can have nothing but the perfect day. Wish the show too showed such days.

Yours shayari at the end made perfect sense to the story you wrote. ⭐️

So full on to bring back the old essence of Parichay

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eshi

@eshi.nl

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#157

Jay awesome update👏👏👏👏👏
i like right from the starting to ending.especially kunal's self talk about siddhi😃
now iam sure u can write a book on sinal's emotions(for just one scene) 😆😆
wil b waiting for next update

guys(to all who r making this contributions)
thanks 👏👏👏
awesome updates.

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jay_bpm

@jay_bpm

Stunner

Posted: 13 years ago

#158

Thank you all for your appreciation.

I will come back and show my gratitude to each one of you but right now I can only say this much and leave. Once again Thank you.

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vipraja26

@vipraja26

Navigator

Posted: 13 years ago

#159

wonderful writing jay !

the tissue , auto and the red roses at the traffic all goes a long way in bringing back wondeful memeories both to sinal and us - the fans !

self talk being one another significant point of kunal ' s charecter is very well done .

i am sure all of us are drawing a great deal of satisfaction from thesenchapters rather than expecting the cvs to bring in such sensibilities in the show .

thankyou for the wonderful work and eagerly looking foward to richa 's exposure .

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Silambu

@Silambu

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 13 years ago

#160

Jay my dear friend. looks like still have found the answers that you are desperately searching for 9 years! Anyway, love your update. Beatufifully written!

You portrayed all the emotions beautifully or should I say poetic literature. Loved it . Especially the tissue and roses.

My favourite part was the telling off to Richa. Really would like to see something like this in Parichay. You could not have phrased it better... Loved it.

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