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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: paradigm


Thank you.. 😃

The "aap" is a suspense


OHH GOD TILL WHEN I HAVE TO BE IN SUSPENSE😲
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: fasa


OHH GOD TILL WHEN I HAVE TO BE IN SUSPENSE😲


Not for too long.. I will update in a day or two.. 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54
awesome update😃
wo "aap" kaun ho saktha hain. suspense s increasing the eagerness for next update. have to say in our forum many good writers r hidden👏👏👏👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: sinan_sinal

awesome update😃
wo "aap" kaun ho saktha hain. suspense s increasing the eagerness for next update. have to say in our forum many good writers r hidden👏


Thank you 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56
amazing paradigm.. loved the FBs kunal got at powai lake .. how I wished he would have got in the show too..
anyways waiting for the next ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: d.padmini

amazing paradigm.. loved the FBs kunal got at powai lake .. how I wished he would have got in the show too..
anyways waiting for the next ...


Thanks.. Same here.. Even I wish they had shown something similar on the show
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I love your writing. Very nice. 👏👏👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Silambu

I love your writing. Very nice. 👏👏👏


Thank you 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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PART 4

Kunal became fearful that he would lose Siddhi if she found out that he had broken his promise and was in love with her. Over the past few months they had developed a nice camaraderie and level of comfort. But fearful that he would not be able to hide his feelings he began distancing himself from her

Siddhi: Kunal kuch hua hia kya.. aap kate kate rehte hai?
Kunal: Nahi Siddhi nothing like that. Bas kuch kaam ka tension hai.

Siddhi felt that kunal was lying but she didnt know how to go about dealing with him.

A door bell. Raj opens the door

Raj: Didi??? Aap bataya kyun nahi ki aap aa rahi hai?
Buaji: Batati to tumhare chehre par yeh khushi kaise dekhti?
Raj: Baithiye na.Ab aao ki tabiyat kaisi hai? Aur surgery ke baad recovery theek chal rahi hai?
Buaji: Haan sab theek hai. US se tang aa gayee thi. Isliye aa gayee. Shweta (her daughter) mujhe mumbai mein chhod kar 2-3 dinon ke lite dilli gayee hai.. woh bhi jaldi aayegi

Kunal: Buaji!! Aaap?? Kaise ho? Akele kyun aaye? main lene aata..

Kunal goes to hug her.. He loved his bua and she doted on him in turn

Buaji: Kunal, kitna dubla ho gaya hai tu!!! Veena tujhe theek se nahi khilati.. ab main apne bache ko khilaaongi..

Everyone smiled and they sat down.. KUNAL sat down next to her.

Buaji: Aur batao? Anand aur siddhi kidhar hai?

Everyone went silent. Kunal's face clouded up... But he knew he had to tell Buaji.. He held her hand and began speaking?

K: Buaji anand ab hamare beech nahi raha. 3 mahine pehle uski maut ho gayee

Buaji: KYA??? ANAND KI MAUT HO GAYEE.. AUR TUM LOGON NE MUJHE BATANA ZAROORI NAHI SAMJHA...

She was weeping.. and Kunal explained how they were concerned about her health and hence kept quiet.

Raj: Aur didi ab siddhi aur kunal ki shaadi ho gayee hai

He explained the circumstances of their marriage. Just then Siddhi walked in and raj intoduced them

Siddhi went and touched buaji's feet. Buaji hugged her. Her heart went out to this young girl who had seen so much tragedy. Plus she was Her Kunal's wife.. She was instantly dear to her

B: Samajh le kunal.. aaj tak tu mujhe sabse pyara tha.. par aaj se siddhi hogi

Evertone laughed diffusing the atmosphere of tension

Buaji as a newcome could see more clearly how much kunal had changed. How much he adjusted to keep siddhi comfortable. How his eyes twinkled when siddhi smiled.

A few days later shweta came. She was a fun loving and talkative person.she didnt know about anand's death. Immediately she ran to siddhi..

Sh: aur bhabhi how is it like being married ?? How was honeymoon?Aur SR? Anand sr par bhi ladki ki tarah blush kar raha tha??

Siddhi was shattered. She ran into the room. Kunal forgot all about his vow to maintain a distance and ran after her...

In the interim the family explained things to shweta who was very sorry..

In the room Siddhi was sitting at the half berth. Still as a stone. Her eyes looking into the distance. Kunal placed his hands on her shoulder. The stone sprung to life. Siddhi hugged kunal and began howling,,,

Slowly Kunal too embraced her, stroking her hair and soothing her. Despite all that had happended. He felt a certain peace in having siddhi in his arms and being able to comfort her.

Siddhi suddenly spoke: Anand!!!

Kunal's trance was broken. h e felt disgusted with himself..and jerked and moved away leaving behind a surprised siddhi

Buaji had seen all thsi she went after him..HE was in his spot on the terrace
B:Kunal kyun bhag rahe ho tum?
K: Aaap?
B: Jaanti thi tu yahi aayega.. Kyun bhaag raha hain apne jasbaton se?
K: yeh aap kya bol rahi hai?
He turned away knowing he couldny lie to her

B: Tu Siddhi se pyar karta hai.. bahut zyada pyaar////

Kunal was speechless

PRECAP":Kunal: Aaap samajh nahi rahi hai.. mera pyar galat hai
I am impergect and my love is imperfect

Buaji: Nahi beta.. tere imperfections tujhe perfect banat hai.. aur tumhara pyaar bhi perfect hai..


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