SS - Kunal Suspects Richa!! - Part 12,13,14 UpDt! - Page 3

Created

Last reply

Replies

193

Views

18.2k

Users

33

Likes

496

Frequent Posters

d.padmini thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#21
both parts are good.. waiting for the next
Dihiva thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail The Rang-Rasa Cronicles Winner Thumbnail + 6
Posted: 13 years ago
#22
Part ' 3

Morning around 6:30: At about 4:30 sleep set in and Kunal woke up with a jerk when he heard a door bell ring. It was 6:30AM!! He jumped out of bed and rushed towards the door and opened it.. It was the milk man! Kunal took the milk from the confused milk man(as he never saw Kunal this early in the morning) and shut the door!! He went into the kichen and started opening up the milk packets to make himself some coffee. Seema walked out of her room and seeing Kunal in the kitchen, she was startled!!

Seema: Kunal Bhaiyya aap kitchen main kya kar rahe hain? Woh bhi inti subah subah! Kya hua tabiyat tho theek hai na aapki?

Kunal: Meri tabiyat ko kya hua? Bas neend nahi aa rahi thi.. isliye jaldi utha.. Kyon? Nahi Uth saktha kya?

Seema: Arey aisi baat nahi hain.. aaptho roj rath ko drink karke sothe ho.. isliye jaldi uth nahi pate, isliye, pooch rahi thi!

Kunal: Woh.. maine kal raat nahi piya..

Seema: Kya??(shocked in a good way) aap ne itne saalon baad kal raat ko nahi piya.. kya hua Kunal bhaiyya?? Aisi kya baat ho gayi jiske liye aapne pina bhi chod diya?!(in a mocking tone)

Kunal: Kuch nahi hua Seema.. mujhe aaj subah kuch kam se bahar jaana hai.. case ke silsilen me.. agar maine peeli tho uth nahi paaunga na.. isliye(not looking at Seema)

Seema: (Not satisfied with Kunal's explanation but not probing further) Theek hai.. aap jaake paper padiye.. mein coffee le aati hun.

Kunal drinks his coffee and gets dressed immediately! All in the house were surprised to see him up and dressed this early but did not say anything to him.

Around 8:00 in the morning: AC got dressed and was about to leave for school and opened the front door when none other than Richa was standing at the door. AC was startled to see her!

AC: Oh! Aap? Hello aunty!

Richa: Hello Anand.. School jaa rahe ho? Mein tumhe drop kardun?

AC: Nahi Aunty.. Mein apne friends ke saath chala jaaoonga.. thanks! Bye Papa!!(Saying this AC leaves for school)

Kunal: Richa!! Itni subah! Tum apne ghar bhi jaathi ho ya raat bhar hamare ghar ke bahar pehre karthi rehti ho??(in a mocking and irritated tone) Jab bhi darwaja kholthe hain tum khadi rehti ho! Papa, main kehta hun ham bekaar mein hamare gurkha ko paise dete hain.. Ise (pointing at Richa)kaam me laga lenge tho paise bhi bach jayenge aur pehredari bhi ho jayegi..huh!!

Richa: (observing Kunal's irritation towards her and trying to pretend as if she doesn't care)Mere baare me chodo.. tum kahaan jaa rahe ho itni jaldi!! Is samay par tho thum utthe bhi nahin!

Kunal: Mein jahan bhi jaaoon, thumhe kya? Thumhare permission ke bina mein kuch nahi kar sakta hun kya? Waise bhi.. tum yahan maa ke liye aathe ho.. unse milo aur jaao yahan se!!(getting more irritated)

Richa: Kunal maine kab kaha ki tumhe meri permission leni chahiye(trying to be nice).. main bas aise hi pooch rahi thi!!

Kunal: Tum mujhse baat mat karo Richa.. Jis kaam se aayi ho, woh karo aur jaao.. baat karne ki koshish bhi mat karo!!

Richa: (talking to herself)Itne saal ho gaye Siddhi ne Kunal ko chodke.. tabse maine Kunal ke kareeb jaane ki bahut koshish ki.. lekin woh mujhse baat karne se bhi nafrat karta hai.. agar mujhe is ghar me aane deta hai tho sirf uski maa ke liye!

Kunal: Seema, main bahar jaa raha hun!! Aane me der ho sakthi hain.. Iske(pointing at Richa with hatred in his eyes) jaane ke baad, darwaja band kar lena.

Edited by hima2012 - 13 years ago
Sinal_Reunion thumbnail
Engager Level 1 Thumbnail Explorer Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#23
👏 Hima... Tooo goood.

Kunal's words to richa referring her to appoint as goorkha.. She deserves those kind of words from kuanl. its really wonderful thought..
And cmng to first two parts... Really Anand C is too smart.. Kunal's feelings and the doubts raised in his mind... Sachi mein.. i am eagerly waiting this kind of questionnaire in his mind...

Thanks.gif Mobile Wallpaper
And Please continue dear..

Edited by Sinal_Reunion - 13 years ago
-Rojaa- thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 13 years ago
#24
Hima its nicely written, awesome update , pls update the next part soon 😊
rainbowgirl thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#25
Oh ho Hima...kya baat hai 😉 kash aaisa kuch CVs dikha de show par. anyways, nicely written 👏 👏 eager for the next part 😳 want to see KC throw the air-tight mini dress out of the house 😉 😆
Posted: 13 years ago
#26
again great post. Love your dialogue writing. Waiting for the part when he would meet siddhi...
arabica thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#27
Edited by arabica - 13 years ago
d.padmini thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Dazzler Thumbnail Commentator Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#28
wow.. the 4th part is even better...actually the best...
Drivemecracy thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#29
Loved it hima... waiting for the next one...thanks for this ss...it cleard most of my doubts...
Edited by sarakvp - 13 years ago
san_aish thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail
Posted: 13 years ago
#30
wow..read all the parts..
good job hima..👏⭐️
waiting for the next update😍

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".