SS - Kunal Suspects Richa!! - Part 12,13,14 UpDt!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Dear Friends,

I made a poll yesterday about who would suspect Richa first.. and the response was mostly Seema. Not even one vote for Kunal including me😆😉

But then, I thought of a scenario where Kunal gets to suspect the witch!! At first, I was apprehensive about sharing it on the forum with all the talented writers👏.. but then thought.. what good is it if I don't share.. so, here is my version of how things would unfold!! Hope you all like it!! Please let me know if I should continue!!

Thanks
Hima.

Here are the links for the remaining parts as well:

Kunal Suspects Richa!

Part1

Background: AC and AD have met in AC's school during sports festival. They were initially surprised to see each other being so identical.. they talked to each other and found out they were both named Anand which was weird in the beginning but as they talked, they found out they were brothers. As they know the names of both their parents, it did not take much for them to connect the dots!! AC came home with innumerable questions.. he wanted to rapidly fire each question to his dad and get all the answers but he knew his dad would not talk about his mother. But he was determined now to make his father think about his mother in the hope that they would get back together. He understood his father very well and knew how to plant ideas in his brain!!

At the Chopra House

AC walked into his room with all these thoughts and questions racing through his mind and was surprised to see his father sitting on the bed and reading a book!

AC: Papa, aaj aap ghar pe ho? Court nahi gaye?

Kunal: Roj court kyon jaoonga? Koi kaam hai tho jaoonga na! Accha ye batao tum school se jaldi kyon aagaey?

AC: Woh hamare school me aaj sports festival chal raha hai papa.. isliye! Aaj se theen din yeh festival chalega.

Kunal: Sports festival? Toh tumhara cricket team ka match kab hoga?

AC: Tomorrow Morning, papa. Aap ko pata hain.. aaj Mumbaike sabhi schools ke bacche hamare school aaye the!! Aaj ham sabhi students ek doosre se mile or mera bhi bahut sare new friends ho gaye papa!!! (saying this AC was lost in thought about his meeting with AD.. he wondered if this was the right time to talk to his father about it)

Kunal: Arey tujse kaun nahi friendship karega? Tutho itna sweet hai ki tujhse friendship kiye bina koyi nahi reh sakta!!

AC: Haan, Kyon nahi?!.. akhir beta kiska hun??..

Kunal: A very warm smile broke out on his face at hearing AC's words!!

AC: lekin.. (he hesitated to say it)

Kunal: Lekin kya? Kya soch raha hai?

AC: Aaj ek ajeeb sa incident hua papa. (Kunal's gave his full attention to AC) Saare schools ke bacche aayethe aaj. Unmese ek ladka tha. Uska naam bhi Anand tha.

Kunal: Arey, isme ajeeb ki kya baat hai.. Kitne boys ka naam Anand hota hai? Yeh Lakho me ek naam thodi na hai.. Tu mujhe yeh bataane ke liye soch raha tha?

AC: Arey, nahi papa.. aap pehle meri baat tho suniye! Us ladke ka naam Anand tha aur woh bikul meri tarah dikhta hai!!!

Kunal: (A little taken aback by what AC said) Anand, woh coincidence bhi tho ho saktha hai.. Waise bhi hamare shakal se kuch logon ka shakal thoda milta hai.. natural hai!

AC: Nahi papa.. thoda milna nahi. Poora milta hai jaise hum dono judwa bhai ho!!!

Kunal: Yeh to bahut interesting hai! Tune usse baat ki?

AC: Haan papa.. baat tho kiya. Maine uske parents ka naam bhi poocha!

Kunal: Accha, Kaun hai uske parents?

AC: Usne kaha ki woh apne maa ke saath rehta hai! Uske mom aur papa ka divorce tab ho gaya jab uska janam hua!!

Kunal: (Suddenly sat up straight on the bed and was having an expression of disbelief!.. He thought of the possibility.. was that kid his son?.. was his Anand a twin?.. no.. he thought.. can't be.. the boy said he lived with his mother.. but Siddhi is in jail.. so, this must be a coincidence!!.. thinking this, he asked AC) Kya naam bataya usne apni maa ka?

AC: (pretending to think about what name the boy said).. Kuch naam bola tha usne.. Riddhi?? Ya..

Kunal: Siddhi??!!!

AC: Haan papa!! Siddhi! Aapko kaise pata chala?

Kunal: (Already dumb-struck by what he heard.. he could hardly move a muscle or answer AC)

AC: Papa.. aap theek tho hain? Kya hua aapko? (he shook Kunal to bring him to his senses)

Kunal: (Coming back to his senses).. haan.. woh maine guess kiya tha! Anyway, thumhe Homeworks nahi hain aaj? Jaake padayi karo, jaao!!

AC: Aaj tho koyi HWs nahi hain papa!! Main baahar jaa raha hun.. khelne!! (saying this AC went out of the room with a wide grin on his face.. he was happy he succeded in his attempt!!)

Kunal: (Talking to himself) Anand ne abhi jobhi kaha.. kya sach me mere do bete hain? Aur Siddhi jail se bahar hamare doosre bete ke saath hai? Yeh kya ho raha hai? Mujhe kuch samajh me nahi aa raha!! Ek kaam kartha hun.. kal subhah mein khud jail jaakar pata karoonga!!

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Posted: 13 years ago
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just nw logged in to IF...
n the first thing i read was ur PM...
i must say...hima...awesome job...loved this very much...
waiting fr d next part😊
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Awesome do continue waiting for it
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Superb ss hima...very interesting...plz do continue...
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Hima... superb convo... plz do continue writing...
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OMG! Superb convo. Cant wait for the next part. Please continue and write the next part asap. Waiting desperately for part two
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Part – 2

That night: Kunal could not sleep all night! He did not even drink his usual peg last night! He was waiting for the Sun to rise tossing and turning in bed so he could go to jail and find out about Siddhi.

Kunal: Why did I not visit Siddhi in jail even once all these years? What stopped me from visiting her? (Then he remembered about his last encounter with Siddhi soon after she was jailed 9 years back..) Siddhi did not want me to see her or talk to her.. but why did she say all those things? Did she really mean it when she said I was not a good husband? My heart says she never meant all those things she said and that she did all that for my sake!!

(He then remembered the day when the baby Anand was born.. how Richa brought the baby and handed him to Kunal) What was that about? Why did she want to send the baby away from me? She did not even let me see her on that day! Did she think I would not be a good father? Good thing Richa gave me my Anand, or else what else is there to live for? If Siddhi betrayed me for the sake of the baby, then why would she want to send the baby away? What kind of a mother would do that? (Anger was building up inside him.. he suddenly felt his face was red hot and had to wipe it off with a hanky)

(Suddenly, he remembered AC's words the previous evening) Did Anand say the boy's mother was Siddhi? Could it be my Siddhi? If she was out of jail.. why did she not come home? Is she still angry with me? No.. I am sure this Siddhi is different.. because I know I did not live up to her expectations and always gave her troubles but then MY Siddhi would never blame me like she did. She would come back to me if she was released from prison.

My heart refuses to accept Siddhi's words.. but then all the circumstances are against her. May be I did not visit her because I did not know what I would say to console her or may be I was scared of what else she would say to me!! As they say, Time is the healer.. I must have unknowingly stayed away from her all these years hoping when she is released, she would be a changed person, the person whom I fell in love with 10years ago! Hoping she will accept me and also our Anand once she is out of jail!!

Not a moment passed by when I did not think of Siddhi.. whether good or bad, she occupied my mind not allowing any other thought! I was unable to move on because of her!! I have become a good for nothing in the eyes of my own family members!!

After all these years, I am going to meet her in jail after all these years.. what will she say? Will she be angry that I did not visit her all these years or will she be happy about it?(he still thinks she might be in jail and what AC said to him was a coincidence)

All these thoughts made him all the more anxious.. he restlessly turned to the other side on his bed and saw AC sleeping with a smile on his face. He gently stroked AC's hair and kissed him on the forehead! You are the only person after Siddhi who has accepted me for who I am! How I wish your mother could see you now!! She would be so proud of you!! You are my life and without you, I would have died all those years ago when Siddhi left me!! I want you to know that I don't believe that your mother tried to send you away from me nor do I hate her!! And I will do my part to give you as much love as possible!! Forgive me Anand for keeping you away from your mother all these years.. but I had no other choice.

I will go to jail and find out about Siddhi in the morning. Even if she is unwilling to see or talk to me, I will find out if she is fine. I know what Anand told me is simply not possible but it is a sign that I need to go and visit my Siddhi tomorrow!! Hope I find some answers this time!! Thinking all this he tried to close his eyes forcibly around 4 in the morning.

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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi

hima i thought i did vote for kunal?

anyways really well written. enjoyed it. i can so imagine kunal's expressions when he finds out he has another kid too whom stays with siddhi

i really hope its kunal who suspects witcha and ends her game

do continue please

norzar
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: norzar

hi


hima i thought i did vote for kunal?

anyways really well written. enjoyed it. i can so imagine kunal's expressions when he finds out he has another kid too whom stays with siddhi

i really hope its kunal who suspects witcha and ends her game

do continue please

norzar


Oh really! I did not check the poll again.. there was no vote for Kunal until yesterday night.. so, anyway.. thanks for liking it.. updated 2nd part!!

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