ShiVi - Pachtave (part 7- page 9)UPDATED - Page 7

Originally posted by: Shivi_forever

Finally you updated

Beautiful update👏

The pain of Raavi and Krish was beautifully described👏

Waiting to know what Raavi has decided to do

Waiting for next

Thank youuuuu

Raavi has decided to face her past first🌹

Awww, Mahi! Lovely update eas emotional, apologies, realization, and remorse from all 3 of them (which unfortunately we will not get in the show especially from the older women😡)

It was no e to read a different Dhara, Raavi and Suman unlike the ones in the show. This update and the story in general is more relatable and heart touching .

Hope Raavi is able to meet Gautam and Krish soon. What a positive change in Mami’s character. She is the only one who showered some of kind love on Raavi so far while others used her.
Looking forward to the next update yo see how other characters are progressing.

Another beautiful update 👏

It was very emotional 😭😭

Loved the way you have described the emotions and feelings of Dhara, Raavi and Suman 😭👏

The realisation and apologies of all three was beautifully described

What a positive change in maami's character ❤️

Waiting to know how Krish and Gautam will react after meeting Raavi

Hoping the suspense regarding Shiva will be revealed soon

read part 5 but wasnt able to read part 6 cuz im feeling sleepy by the time i got to it😆 will catch up tomorrow and then comment

but 5 was very emotional...and i didnt find it short at all...in fact it took me some time to get through it😆

Finally caught up

Lovely reunion❤️ cant wait to find out Shiva's mystery

Part 7

Raaste fir ban jayenge

Uljhe dhaage sulajh jaayenge

Laut kar fir aayega wo waqt,

Zindagi savar jaayegi...

Koshish to karke dekhe hum,

Phool fir khil jaayenge...

Dhara watched Raavi's face. It was filled with curiosity and hope. She sighed. Raavi and Shiva had the worst timing. Their fate was tangled with the threads of misunderstandings and missed chances. She sighed. Such a youthful face but it was Raavi's eyes that gave away the pain. Those eyes looked like they have had hundreds of sleepless nights and restless days. Dhara's heart softened. And she went back to five years ago when Raavi had left.

Dhara and Rishita were in the market when they saw Shiva running behind a taxi calling Raavi's name.

"Yeh Shiva kya kar raha hai Bhabhi?" Rishita asked and then fell silent as they both realised that Raavi was going somewhere. Their hearts stilled because of grave premonitions. They looked at each other and rushed towards the direction Raavi was going towards.

"RAAVI!" Shiva shouted as the taxi turned a corner disappeared from eyes. "Raavi..." Shiva sank to his knees and whispered, watching towards the direction the taxi had disappeared in with disbelief. He couldn't accept it yet. He couldn't accept her departure. He still had trouble believing that she left him. His heart became overwhelmed with grief and something cracked within it. Shiva placed his hand over his chest and winced as if in pain.

Shiva was so engrossed in watching the corner that he missed the car that had sped towards him. The car swerved out of control as the driver hit the brakes suddenly and then it skid towards Shiva.

Screech...

Dhara and Rishita watched in horror as the car hit Shiva squarely and he flew on impact.

Bang...

He fell on the ground some feet away.

Thud...

"Shivaaaaa!" Rishita and Dhara screamed in horror and while Dhara turned to a statue in her place, Rishita ran towards Shiva who was being surrounded by passers by.

"Shiva!" Rishita shouted as she reached by his side and fell to her knees while she cupped his cheeks and cried in disbelief. "Shiva!" She shook him and then turned to say something to Dhara, before realising that Dhara wasn't by her side. She looked around in confusion to see that Dhara had fainted where she had been standing before. Rishita rushed towards her and then cried helplessly as she watched Shiva and Dhara in turns before she realised she had to do something. She called Dev and Gaumbi.

***

Dhara had fainted due to shock. Shiva had been rushed to the hospital where his treatment had begun without delay.

The Pandyas were all standing outside the operation theatre sans Raavi. They were all gripped with constant fear and regrets. Gautam was staring unseeingly towards the door of the operation theatre, hoping that the doctor would exit the room soon and give them good news regarding his little brother. But no one came out of that room.

Dhara looked like someone had squeezed her heart out of her. She looked defeated. She hadn't yet spoken a word to anyone and kept blaming herself for his condition in her heart. She was in guilt and she was breathing regrets instead of air. But everything had actually been worsening steadily.

When the doctor did come out, he brought with him the good news of Shiva's survival but also told them that he had been hit pretty badly so he would take time to recover and that they would have to keep a watch out for him.

After two weeks of stay in hospital, they had brought Shiva home. He had been silent since the day Raavi left. He had just stared at the wall vacantly and seemed haunted by her memories. Everyone had tried to divert his thoughts from her but they seldom strayed.even when he came home, he kept on staring at the walls of their room. He kept touching and sniffing the things that she had left behind. Her perfume was dissipating too, snatching even that from Shiva, who was desperately trying to cling on to her.

Suman had kept blaming Raavi for Shiva's condition initially. She had cursed Raavi. One day when she was at it, Shiva had had enough.

"Bas..." He had said softly. His zeal to live had been lost and his voice had stopped raising since then. But the effect of his lowered voice was instant silence. This was the first time he had spoken after almost two months. Suman stopped her tirade and looked at Shiva. "Bas uski ghalti nahin hai Maa. Aur is accident woh bilkul zimmedar nahin hai. Ek rishta do taraf se nibhta hai. Koi ek chook jaye to woh adhura reh jata hai. Mere aur Raavi ke rishte mein, meri ghaltiyan mera bahut zyada gussa karna aur use importance na dena tha, uski ghalti mere gusse se dar kar mujhse kuch baaten chupana thi. Woh keh nahin paayi aur jab kahi to mere dil mein itne sare shak ke ghere the ki main maan nahin paaya. Maine do logon ke rishte mein teesre chothe insaan ko aane diya. Jab bhi us par ungliyan uthi to usko defend karne ki bajaaye main chup raha aur kabhi kabhi main khud aapka saath deta raha. Jis rishte mein use mere liye sabse zyada zaroori hona chahiye the maine kisi aur ko zyada zaroori kar diya. Yeh sab Raavi ki ghaltiyan nahin hai Maa. Woh thak kar chali gayi hai. Seh nahin pa rahi thi. Isliye mujhe chod kar gayi hai. Ab to use kosna band kar dijiye Maa. Kyunki ab main thak raha hoon." He said, shutting everyone's mouth. After that no one tried to blame Raavi. Shiva wondered why he hadn't said that to his family when Raavi was still present. Their relationship had been reduced to blaming, finger pointing, mud slinging... There was no love, no respect, no trust and no understanding. Shiva sighed.

***

It had been six months since the accident when Dhara entered Shiva's room to call him for breakfast and didn't find him there. She thought he had gone to the washroom. He had recovered but talked very less. The anger which ran in his veins had not appeared again even after Maami kept taunting him initially. He was but a shell of the man he once was. He kept thinking of Raavi and didn't speak about his pain to anyone.

The battle for Cheeku was still going on at that point. Dhara didn't want to give up. She was making plans for everything but Shiva remained aloof from these plans. Shwetha was plotting and was on the verge of victory now a days. Shiva didn't want to play any part in the lunacy. He had lost the will to side with his Bhabhi ma.

But on that fine day, he had suddenly disappeared. No one knew where he went, no one knew when he left. He had just left. The family was worried and tried to search for him everywhere but he was no where to be found. His cell had been left behind and he had taken with him just two pair of clothes.

"That was the last time we saw him Raavi. We don't know where he went. Its almost like he never existed." Dhara whispered. "Some days later Krish messed up with Cheeku and Chutki and everything changed. Shiva never came back. I just hope he is safe, wherever he is."

Raavi looked away. Somewhere in her heart she was at peace. At least he was alive. He wasn't with them all but he was alive and for now that will have to do. So she turned back towards Dhara and smiled.

"Woh kisi din laut kar aayega Dhara di. I have hope." Raavi said softly as she squeezed Dhara’s hand.

***

Gautam and Krish entered the house in the evening tiredly. They frowned. Something was different. The air seemed to have altered. The house didn’t look so desolate today. It felt a little more livelier.

They took some more steps inside to hear Dhara’s laughter ringing around the house. It was coming from the previous store room, Shiva and Raavi’s room. Gautam and Krish exchanged glances. Had Dhara finally lost her marbles? They both thought silently.

Dhara hadn’t laughed so happily since years now. She had become lost and helpless since their family broke apart. But today, Dhara’s laughter seemed to ring with happiness.

Gautam and Krish moved towards the room hastily to see why Dhara was behaving so strangely. They reached the door of the room and stopped when they heard a voice they never thought they would hear again.

“Arre Dhara di! Woh to aapke saamne thoda bahut to izzat se rehta tha par aapke peeche mujhe zyada satata tha bachpan mein. Main to ghar jakar hamesha roti thi.”

Raavi...

Krish and Gautam thought and excitement covered their faces as they looked at each other, then burst inside the room through the doorway. Dhara and Raavi turned towards them, startled.

“Raavi Bhabhi!” Gautam and Krish shouted excitedly and Krish ran towards her, hugging her tearfully as he laughed after ages. Raavi smiled and then patted his head. Gautam moved forwards and placed his hand on her head as he cried too. “Kahan chali gyi thi aap Bhabhi? Aapke bina sab kuch badal gaya tha. Kitna miss kiya maine aapko! Agar maine jaane anjaane mein bahut takleef di aapko, to mere kaan palad leti aap. I am sorry bulwati. Murgha banati. Par yun chod kar na jati. Mere liye aap sab ka jaana bahut bada punishment tha bhabhi!” Raavi was sniffling at his words.

“Maine bhi bahut miss kiya tujhe! Par mera jana us waqt sahi tha.” Raavi sniffled. Krish shook his head.

“Arre use saans to lene de!” Gautam instructed and Dhara chuckled. Krish left her.

“Gaumbi!” Raavi uttered softly as she cried.

“Mujhe maaf karde Raavi. Main tere bhai hone ka farz ada nahin kar paaya. Tere liye stand nahin le paya!” Gautam told her. His eyes were regretful.

“Woh to purani baaten hai na Gaumbi? Main yahan nayi shuruaat karne aayi hoon.” Raavi told him. He nodded his head. She smiled at him and then at Dhara. She could see small cracks but there was still love there. Dhara smiled at her too.

“Tu apne saath is ghar ki khushiyan aur Raunak wapas le aayi hai Raavi...” Dhara told her softly. “Is ghar ke logon ne aur yahan tak ki deewaron ne bhi tujhe bahut yaad kiya.”

Raavi sniffled as she hugged Dhara once againx krish hugged them both as he laughed.

“Chalo meri do bhabhiyan to laut aayi hain. Teesri bhi jaldi aa jayengi...” He said softly.

“Rishita hai kahan?” Raavi finally asked. The other three exchanged glances and then settled down to tell the story to her. They told her about Shwetha’s final act against them and how Krish almost messed up with Chutki. They told her how Shwetha was arrested after that and how Cheeku was taken away by his grandparents. Then they told her about Dev and Rishita’s anger at Krish’s actions and how they left the house.

Raavi held Krish’s ears as she berated him angrily. He cried.

“Pata hai mujhe Bhabhi. Pichle kuch saalon se isi baat ke pashchataap mein jal raha hoon. Par ye saza khatam hi nahin ho rahi hai.” He uttered brokenly. Raavi cried at his helplessness. “Maine apne donon bhaiyon ko ek ke baad ek karke khoya hai. Zinda hote hue bhi woh mujhe ajnabee bana chuke hain. Shayad unke liye main mar hi gaya hoon...” Krish said softly. He didn’t seem like the old Krish at all.

“Krish!” Both Dhara and Raavi shouted. He laughed self deprecatingly.

Raavi sighed. Nothing was as it was... Everything had changed.

“Pehle Rishita ko yahan laane ka rasta sochte hain...” Raavi said, while the other three looked at her interestedly.

***

He threw everything that was within the reaching distance and shouted angrily.

“Itne saalon se intezar kiya aur haath kuch nahin aaya! Chod kar chali gayi mujhe.” Arnav said angrily. “Fir se Somnath gayi hogi. Itne saalon se koshish ki uski jade yahan mazboot ho. Koshish ki wahan connect karti har taar toot jaye. Koshish ki woh fir dobara wahan na j sake. Aur hua kya? Fir se chali gayi!”

He had known when she departed Somnath. He made sure she was followed and then when she reached Mumbai, he kept his distance for some months before contacting her again. She was at a bad phase then. She was in need of a place and also needed a job immediately. And he helped...

But now?

Now she had ran back to that hellhole and he had no more patience left.

“Raavi! Bahut ho gaya! Ab main tumhare par kaat kar dikhaungi. Tumhari life barbaad kar dunga main. Tumne mujhe hurt kiya hai. Ab tum khud hurt hogi! Ye mera waada hai...”

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And thats another wrap

To the people who read liked commented, Thank you for keeping me encouraged

What do you think will happen next?

Mahi, Great update!!

So Shiva had an accident though he survived it. Later he went missing because he didn’t want to be part of plotting and planning. Gautam and Krish seemed to be happy to see Raavi back. So they have to bring back Dev and Rishita and find Shiva. Now Arnav is turning the bad guy? You writing seemed like Choubays here😆

Instead of finding Shiva, looks like Raavi has to face more hardship from this guy probably didn’t like Raavi came back to Somnath leaving him behind😔

Anyway its your story, if you feel Raavi needs more punishment than she already got, nothing can change that 😔 Liked everything except Arnav turning the bad guy out to hurt Raavi🙄

Beautiful update👏

Finally we got to know what happened to Shiva

Shiva survived the accident and left the house as he doesn't want to be a part of Dhara's plotting and planing😊

Glad that Shiva realised his mistakes in the breaking of his marriage

Gautam, Krish and Raavi reunion was beautiful👏

Now all are planning to bring Rishita back

Arnav turning negative, interesting twist

I think now Raavi will get to know the intentions of the person he considered her friend

Waiting for next

Originally posted by: mpks1

Mahi, Great update!!

So Shiva had an accident though he survived it. Later he went missing because he didn’t want to be part of plotting and planning. Gautam and Krish seemed to be happy to see Raavi back. So they have to bring back Dev and Rishita and find Shiva. Now Arnav is turning the bad guy? You writing seemed like Choubays here😆

Instead of finding Shiva, looks like Raavi has to face more hardship from this guy probably didn’t like Raavi came back to Somnath leaving him behind😔

Anyway its your story, if you feel Raavi needs more punishment than she already got, nothing can change that 😔 Liked everything except Arnav turning the bad guy out to hurt Raavi🙄

Hahahaaha

Lets see whats stored for Raavi

Punishment or peace

But Arnav’s fate was already decided in Raavi’s flashback with Shiva long back

U din catch it??😊

Oh no why you turning arnav negative i like raavi and arnav relationship concept please dont do this🙏

Arnav was much better than shiva