Dard Dilon Ki (FF) - Chapter 2 Updated - Pg 2

Prologue

Tomorrow was raavi's 18th birthday.

And everybody were excited about it except the one.

Everyone in pandya house decided to surprise her at midnight itself.

As no one was allowed or they were not willing to go Narayan house they decided to call raavi at the pandya niwas itself.

But they were shocked to learn that raavi has gone to ahmedabad along with her maasa.

Shiva was a little more upset as first time he bought first serious birthday gift other than chipkali ,as a token of apology for his deeds on her birthday.

He was restless why she has left suddenly.?

What has happened that it was so urgent to go ahmedabad. .?

What will happen if she never returns again?

Will pandya family ever come to know the hidden secret ?

But if she ever returns will be she the same raavi?

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After four years

Shiva was working diligently in his shop pandya store. He loved his family and his work passionately.

He was happy in his little world.

Life was so cool, no trouble or kaands,just working in his own shop,eating and sleeping peacefully.

But something was missing.

He was happy as no one there to bicker ,tease and harass him.

But he misses that bickering, his cute fights with her not cute but annoying,her smiling face ,her foolish acts to gain his attention, he just missed everything about her. He missed her.

But he acted normal. He didn't want anyone to know the storm raised in his heart especially when it is related to her.

Its been almost 3 years 320 days she has left somnath.

What has happened to her?

Why mama and mami are hiding her like she is a treasure.?

Why they are not telling about her location or what she was doing present?

After raavi left mami accompanied them after 2 days and she came directly after 4 months.

But when Dhara bhabhi asked about her she replied she was fine .Just fine.

Fine means had anything happened to her?

But she never told where she was staying in ahmedabad?

What she was doing there and why was she there particularly?

And why I am thinking about her ?

Shiva just shrugged his thoughts away and concentrated on his customers in his shop.

No one was in shop as everybody were busy in their own life

Dhara bhabhi will be working in home while gaumbi has left to janardhan's house for discussion related to stock.

Dev went to meet his secret friend and krish was in college.

Maa will be busy at kanta kaki's house discussing how to solve the whole somnath's problems arising due to their daughter in laws.

And also there was a strange thing happened in his life.

Mami has changed a little bit. She no longer gossip in anyone's place or try to interfere in their lives .

She was always little moody and sad as it was clear at her face, that she was missing raavi miserably.

Mama has returned to somnath after 11 months when he left with raavi but he didn't bring her along with him.

He just informed gaumbi that she was studying somewhere in ahmedabad and she asked her mausapa not to disturb her.Strange right?

I can't understand when did she got sudden interest in studies.

As far as I know her she was least interested in her studies then how come she had gone too far that too for studies.

She used to go school only for extra curricular activities like singing,dancing,theatre etc .

To explain in simple words, except study she used to do everything in school.

"Shiva"she squealed as she placed her bag at the counter and settled herself at the counter chair.

She came directly from school.

"Kya hua chipkali kaan mein hartal kion baja rahi hai" shiva asked her irritated

"Tujhe pata hai aaj school mein kya hua...aaj"as raavi began ignoring him "Nai pata aur sunna bhi nai hai" shiva break her words

"Shiva sun na" raavi insisted,

"Teri bakwaas sunne mein mujhe koi interest nai" shiva said still cleaning counter tops and placing boxes properly.

"Ab to mai bhi dekhungi tu kaise rokhega mujhe"raavi asserted being clear and continued "Ek hafte baad school mein 10th class waalon ki farewell party hai aur hum unke liye ek dance kar rahe hai ,ab hum 9th class mein hai to hum hi organize kar rahe hai,tujhe pata haiShiva stopped his work and gazed at her. He smiled amusingly at her and replied "Haa kar lena par party ki kya zarurat hai"

"Matlab" raavi asked curiously, Shiva replied "Matlab tu jab chudailon waali dance karegi tab to woh waise hi Bhaag jaayengi to party ki kya zarurat hai?"

"Shiva ,mai somnath mein sabse Acha dance karti hun" she replied proudly flipping her hairs in the air,

"Ek dum sasti shakira ki tarah "he groaned ,

"Shiva tu jalta hai na mujhse, isliye aisa bolta hai hamesha, tujhe yeh baat chubti hai ki mai,teri mami ki behan ki beti itni sundar,itni sushil ,itna achi aur talented kaise ho sakti hoon, aur yahi baat na teri hajam nai hoti isliye hamesha ladta rehta hai, dekh lena ek din tu khud kahega ki mai somnath ki sabse sundar ladki aur best hoon " raavi replied flipping her hairs

Shiva was bit irritated at her behaviour.

"Ay chudail rukh" he stopped his work to throw her out but before he could catch her , she ran outside hurriedly grabbing chocolates from counter, leaving her bag behind the store itself. He observed it was raining suddenly.

"Chipkali agli baar aas paas dikhina"he screamed but before he continued, she equally shouted standing outside the shop where she was fully drenching in rain.

"Mai to zaroor aaungi tere sarr pe naachne, tujhe kabhi chain se jeene nai doongi"

Before he could react she ran away.

He remembered her words "mai zaroor aaungi tere sar pe naachne, tujhe kabhi chain se jeene nai dungi" but he didn't understood why she hasn't came till now to not let him live in peace.

Unknowingly even if she is not present, she was not letting him to live him peace .

He closed the gate of the shop and went to his home in his bike ,trying to refrained himself from her thoughts.

As soon as he entered the house he saw beaming faces of his family members feeding each other sweets among themselves. Anita and Hardik bhai were also present with them.

He was confused why they were so much happy .

He straightaway went to krish as he is the one who can easily split anything and everything.

"Kya hua krish,sab itne khush kion hai?"

"Arey mere bhai ,tu aagaya khush rehne ke generally ek wajah kaafi par aaj do do wajah hai ,tujhe kyaa hi bataaun"he howled over shiva pinching his cheeks and feeding him kaju katli

"Ay phiddi batayega ya mai kaan ke ek niche bajaaun "he showed his palm near his ears

"Rukh na itna gussa kion karta hai?

Pehle yeh hai ki hardik bhai aur anita di ki shaadi fix hui hai aur dusri baat ..."he failed to say further seeing his shocking face.

Shiva was shocked listening to it,he know that hardik bhai and anita were in relationship but he never thought that his Dhara bhabhi would agree to it, although everybody said that anita has changed and moved on still he hated her because she and that naagin has insulted his brother and a reason for their father's death.

And one thing he couldn't understand, how the hell hardik bhai has fallen for her ?

Before he could ask another reason for his over excitement and extreme happiness krish squealed,

"Raavi"

"Abey oo woh chipkali ko kion yaad kar raha hai?"

"Arey mere bhai yaad nai kar raha hun,tu peeche dekh " and before he could register his words krish ran

Shiva turned and saw her.....

His heart skipped a beat unknowingly.........

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2- PANAUTI

Shiva turned and saw her.

He was astound to see her different.

She was wearing a long green frock with dupatta pinned to her shoulder which was quite unlike her, as she always preferred to wear modern before.

He know that one day he had to meet her again , she was chipkali and will never leave somnath so easily but mentally he was not prepared for it.

He didn't know how will he react or how he would confront her ,or what he would do when she again appeared in his life.

She was his enemy but due to her vanished mode on, his feelings towards her has drastically changed but he cannot show it to anyone, especially to her.

He wanted to ask her where she had been all these days leaving him and why?

Although he was the one who always wanted her to leave him alone,but he didn't expected her to leave somnath also, leaving behind him.

He observed her clearly, there were physical changes too. She has still perfect curves but was still same phoolkumari and her face was little pale and before he could clearly observe her, krish hugged her tightly.

One thing shocked him was that raavi had not reciprocated the hug with same intensity just as krish did, she just slowly kept her hands hesitantly on his back and removed immediately which make shiva frowned.

Then she straightaway went near Dhara bhabhi and hugged her tightly as if her hugs wanted to tell her how much she missed her.

Bhabhi also hugged her tightly.

But she was not leaving bhabhi even after continuos gluing of two minutes.

After some time, she left her or she forced herself to leave and just gazed whole family.

She went to maa and seek her blessings.

"Kema cho raavi, kitne din laga diye somnath aane mein?"Dhara asked her caressing her head

"Mai theek hun Dhara di aap bataiye,aap sab kaise hai mujhe miss kiya ki nai?"she asked smiling

"Arey raavi in sab ka to pata nai but maine to sabse zyaada miss kiya meri crime partner ko" krish replied back hugging her

She held his hands and replied "Maine bhi aap sabko bahut miss kiya,pata hai Dhara di mai to har roz aap ko yaad karti thi ki Dhara di kaise hogi,gaumbi kya karte honge,krish kisi ne naya partner to nai banaaya hoga,Dev mujhe bhul to nai gaya hoga aur yeh bhootnath ab mera pandya store kaisa sambhalta hoga.

Ab mai aa gayi na dekho, mai waapis nai jaaungi." while gaumbi was side hugging her.

She tilted her face and saw shiva who has same frowned expression after watching her, definitely disappointing her.

She took small steps towards him and snappedat his face breaking his trance,

"Hey bhootnath kaisa hai? Bahut miss kiya hoga na ki somnath ki sabse sundar ladki nai hai ,ab kaise rahoon ga usko dekhe bina"

Shiva was just gazing her from top to bottom and he was back in form of rudra shiva,

"Hey mami ki behen ki beti, mera dimaag kya ghaas charaane gaya ki mai tujhe miss karoonga" he pointed his fingers at her face

"Oh acha isliye ghoor raha tha oopar se niche tak haina" she teased..

"Aye chipkali, mai isliye dekh raha tha ki yeh panauti phir se is ghar mein kaise tapak gayi, rukh tujhe abhi batata hun" he grabbed her arm to throw her out of the house

"Shiva" gautam shouted "bichari abhi abhi aayi hai aur tu usey baahar phekne ki baat kar raha hai, chhod usey chhod"

He reluctantly left her arms while she smirked at him.

"Waise raavi tu somnath kab aayi?"suman asked her while raavi bend to her level and replied

"Mai to do din pehle aayi thi"

Everyone were shocked listening this because she came two days before but didn't met anyone in the family, which was very unusual thing about her.

She saw their shocked faces , but before anyone could questioned her, she spoke clearing their confusion,

"Woh mai ,mai thak gayi thi to so gayi aur kal ke pura din busy thi aur maine anita di ko kaha tha ki aap sab ko kuch mat bataaye, to isliye unhone bataaya nai hoga, mai aap sabko surprise karna chaahti thi"

"Ooh but raavi" krish spoke in between "tum to surprise karna chaahti thi lekin anita di ne ham sabko bataaya ki tum aa gayi ho,just tumhaare aane se pehle"

"Kya anita di aapne kion bata diya,mai to in sabko surprise dena chaahti thi" she cutely pout while anita sighed at her,

"Nai raavi woh galti se muhn se nikal gaya"

"Acha koi baat nai but aap sab to surprise ho gaye the na, wahi mere liye kaafi hai"

"Waise tum ahmedabad kion gayi thi?"Dev asked her

"Padhaai karne mausapa ne bataaya hoga na" she replied tugging her hair behind her ears,

"Haa pata hai par kya kiya tumne graduation ya diploma yeh nai bataaya" asked gautam,

"Bcom aur kya karungi"

"Bcom ke liye ahmedabad kion somnath hai na, utni door jaane ki kya zaroorat thi?" asked shiva shocking everyone.

He immediately covered "mera matlab hai ki acha hua chali gayi thi chaar saal kitne aaram se beeth gaye the chain se aur aaram ki zindagi"

"Chup kar shiva" Dhara scolded "par shiva ka sawal sahi hai bcom ke liye itna door kion?"

Raavi was just gazing at everybody and pouted "Kya Aap log mai yahan utne door se aayi aur woh bhi itne din baad, aap mere se kbc khel rahe ho."

Everybody started pampering her and she was enjoying this.

Shiva was just observing her.

He guessed something was awkward with this chipkali.

First thing she came two days before but she met them today.

She has lost her charm ,her spark which one could easily tell looking into her eyes. His thoughts were broken by suman's voice,

"To kaagdi sun agle hafte sagai aur theek 10 din baad shaadi" informed suman

"Ji suman ben " mama responded

He was so engrossed in gazing raavi and thinking about her, that he actually forgot that raavi had actually came with maasa and maasi.

"Jai somnath,ab hum jaate hai moti ben"

"Jai somnath"

"Ayy raavi tu thodi der aur rukh jaa" dhara requested her,

"Nai raavi hamaare saath jaayegi ,bahut der ho gayi hai na" mama replied

"Dhara di mujhe bhi rukhna tha,par mujhe jaana padega, woh main kal se mausapa ki factory jaa rahi hun accounts sambhalne ke liye isliye..

Please Dhara di bura mat manna" raavi requested dhara pinching her cheeks

"Acha thik hai ,khayaal rakhna tera" Dhara replied

Hardik left with narayans. Suman too left to her room.

"Kitni ajeeb baat hai na gaumbi jo bachi din bhar is ghar ka naam jhapti thi, dhara di dhara di kehti thi, aaj ghar jaldi jaane ke liye bol rahi thi,tumhe kuch ajeeb nai laga ?" Dhara asked gaumbi who was sitting on bed

"Haa ajeeb to laga par shaayad ab thodi badi ho gayi hai ,thodi samjhdaar bhi, isliye aisa kaha hoga,tu zyaada soch mat" gautam replied,

"Haa shaayad mai kuch zyaada hi soch rahi hoon"

Meanwhile everyone left to their respective rooms (yes they have their own rooms as their three bandars have grown up)

Shiva was just thinking about her why was she so awkward today while placing himself on his bed

He noticed how she felt awkward while hugging gaumbi ,krish and she had not even talked properly to dev.

Has she forgotten dev ?

Has she finally understood that it was her bachpana about dev?

Or has she loved someone in ahmedabad?

Has something happened in this four years which he didn't know about it?

These thoughts slowly consumed him in a deep sleep.