ShiVi FF - Geeli Pappiyaan - Chapter 1 updated - Page 3

This is funny 🤣

Barkha lighting up my mood thank you 😭

The nicknames you or we say shiva 😏gave to raavi Roopi chudail ,sasti Alice in Somnath 😂😂😂

Raavi asking Shiva about Geeli pappiyan 🤭😂

Raavi watching their joined hands💗💗

The vivah amrita rao reference 💗😂

Shiva scared ki raavi voh na bol de

And finally she said it 😭😂😂😂

Dobi raavi becomes bold raavi 🙂

The misleading 

I love this flower for you 🌺

Do write more

And tag me 😆

I'm so excited for this! Believe it or not, I was literally thinking about a scenario where Raavi blatantly asks Shiva to kiss her and it seems like the universe heard me and granted my wish through you lol 😆 Also, I'm loving your writing style!

Please tag me from now on 🤗

Bold Raavi Supremacy y’all 🥰🤌🏻✨

Awesome

Shivas thoughts about Raavi were hilarious

Hope Shiva gets to chakao his udhaar soon

That was such a tease barkha!!

Shiva ke sath sath hamara bhi kat gya 🤪

Do tag me in the next chapters❤️

Loved it ❤️

Waiting for more 🤗

Awwww....I don't mind the teasing.

Loved the first chapter...funny and very Shivi at the same time.

Dobi that she is she comes and asks for a kiss because she's the only one left from her class to do it. lol.

Bandi has guts!

Ye tho maanna pdega.

Can't wait for the next update. ❤️

I'm so much matlab kya bolun🤣

Aisa laga first half padhke someone took me back to my old ShiVi & jab GS , Pandya store hua karta tha

"Shiva decided to shrug it off because he had no intention of letting this sasti Alice in Somnathland drag him down whatever Rabbit hole she was intent on going down today."

Well I just imagine Shiva saying this & I'm like 🤣, old Shiva Pandya comparing Raavi with Amrita Rao & Meena Kumari...

"Kya tu dega mujhe .. my first kiss?" She enunciated for him.

Ek baat bolun the way Raavi was behaving actually I was waiting for The classic Raavi to say this & when I actually read this line , I screamed ... I knew this 😆😳

Bas di I just want next part fastum fast & pls tell me you'll continue this & tag bhi kardena di pls pls

Apne iss choti bacche wali behen ki request accept karlo😃

❤️

& most important part I love pre marriage shivi ❤️& your way of typical writing for them makes me love them more 2x times.....

Wow.

Like reallyyyyy wow, barkhaaa writing a proper full fledged ff and on what?

Pappiiiiii, that to 'geeli' pappiii!!!☺️

And oh, raavi isn't sooo dobi here,is she?

Instead she's all Ultro pro and Shiva being his bhola kadduuuu the cute mochaa to our notorious milk!!!!❤️

Ab mazaa aayega na bhidu jab mai tujhe updates maangungi😈

Chalo I'm waiting for udhar ka sudh samet wapas lautana😆

Amazing one dear