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Originally posted by: RainbowChaser

This is so beautiful ❤️

They're finally together and he is undoubtedly one hell of a lucky guy.

Loved how meticulously you've expressed his various emotions with such fine details and nuance.

Thank you so much for reading and the kind words ❤️🤗

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

What happened??? Why attack?

What?

Can't respond there since it's one of the members in the chat 😆.

It's in her review and we had a little back and forth but the tl dr of it all is that she thinks Kanthony are stupid, immature, foolish, selfish and any number of other 'fascinating' adjectives and that they did not really try to stay away from each other and so much for their responsibility and that Kate played with her bangle on purpose 😕

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it! I didn't want to take any risk with the show's creativity...wrote the cuddling myself since 95% wanted it lol. ❤️😆

@bold : You making me blush 😳

You truly are a talented writer Ritu . One of the writers who can bring the emotions to the forefront and make the reader feel them and see the scene happening as is.

Just read the write up of yours on the phone call scene.i loved it . You have the knack of picking the most simple and beautiful things and the way you write , chaar chaand Laga deti ho aap us scene ko ..🤗

Another writer from this forums who I personally think does this so effortlessly in her stories is Pixie .. it's been long she wrote anything .I see you keep asking her to write sometimes in some of the posts , I am joining with you in this andolan .. hamari maange poori karo , ek pyara sa story do hame pixie 😊

And ofcourse you too Ritu .. please write when you can again .. looking forward 😊

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Can't respond there since it's one of the members in the chat 😆.

It's in her review and we had a little back and forth but the tl dr of it all is that she thinks Kanthony are stupid, immature, foolish, selfish and any number of other 'fascinating' adjectives and that they did not really try to stay away from each other and so much for their responsibility and that Kate played with her bangle on purpose 😕

Damn. I'll have to read the shizz tomorrow then. The new member?? I guess?

Originally posted by: firsttimehere

You truly are a talented writer Ritu . One of the writers who can bring the emotions to the forefront and make the reader feel them and see the scene happening as is.

Just read the write up of yours on the phone call scene.i loved it . You have the knack of picking the most simple and beautiful things and the way you write , chaar chaand Laga deti ho aap us scene ko ..🤗

Another writer from this forums who I personally think does this so effortlessly in her stories is Pixie .. it's been long she wrote anything .I see you keep asking her to write sometimes in some of the posts , I am joining with you in this andolan .. hamari maange poori karo , ek pyara sa story do hame pixie 😊

And ofcourse you too Ritu .. please write when you can again .. looking forward 😊

You really made my day with this. Truly!!! 😭❤️

Thank you so muchhhh for the love.

AND YES...IT HAS BEEN TOO LONG since Pixie gave us some content. I'm the the official 'Pestering agent' when it comes to writings. Sab pareshan hain mujhse but main maangti rehti hu content...😆

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Damn. I'll have to read the shizz tomorrow then. The new member?? I guess?

Not new really. I had an interesting back and forth with her on S1 too. She still prefers S1, and Saphne. So yeah 🤔

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Not new really. I had an interesting back and forth with her on S1 too. She still prefers S1, and Saphne. So yeah 🤔

I'll check it tomorrow 😕

Originally posted by: sillysatchel

Okay wow how beautiful is this I can't even function-😭❤️

Awww thanks Kaagaz ❤️

Originally posted by: qwerty.shivi123

*sighs* where do i begin the appreciation??

literally at a loss for words

so imma use emoticons

raavi shiva cuddling

shiva thanking is lucky stars(as he should) for sending raavi in his life❤️

lastly your rich vocabulary beautifully portraying the complexities of shiva's emotions*chef's kiss*

you are exceptionally talented ritu!!!!🤗

dont ever stop writing

p.s. thank you for tagging me😳

Thankyou so much for reading!

and for the appreciation ❤️

Originally posted by: nolee3097

Rituuuu this is sooo beautiful ❤️❤️❤️

This is truly the Shiva I always wanted for Raavi
The one who would be her human shield, who would uphold her and regard her highly in his life. And you have totally written it in the best ways! ❤️

Shiva's realization of the depth of Raavi's pain and her changing into a resilient person was so heartwarming to read. He's truly empathetic and understanding and contemplating all that she has done for him and to gain his love ❤️

And finally him deciding he would never question her and he would ensure she gets the whole world is just sooo

This is the Shiva that we know and want to see!

Thank you for writing this wonderful piece ❤️
Made me feel all warm and fuzzy! 🤗

Thank you sooooo muchhh!❤️

We all want this version of fanfic Shiva in the show...manifesting we get a part of it at least some day.