| ShiVi DRABBLE : Aye Meri Zindagi | - Page 7

Originally posted by: Yahvi

How beautiful was it Ritu❤

I loved it... Shiva's emotions came out beautifully ❤❤

Thank you soooo muchhhh 🤗

Originally posted by: mandira2

This story felt like chashni! Muh mein ghul ti jaati hai ☺️ The plot was so simple but the way you express yourself seriously takes the story to another height! I absolutely love how you pen your stories in general! Also, I love it when people use songs to express the character’s thoughts and feelings!

I adore the way you portrayed Shiva in this OS! This is the Shiva Pandya I need from the Choubey’s but they ain’t listening 😭😭😭 I’m so happy that the Shiva you’ve created acknowledges his past deeds and is ready to protect his Chipkali for life 🥺 Another aspect that I really enjoyed was that you didn’t focus too much on the physical part of Shiva and Raavi’s relationship!! Keeping it mostly limited to Shiva’s thoughts was a really a good idea since they are technically in the beginning phases of their marriage. The forehead kiss was cute tho ☺️☺️☺️

I will definitely check out this song 👍🏼

Thank you so so so much for reading babe. ❤️

I didn't have any physical aspect while writing this TBH...it was all about Shiva accepting, acknowledging and thinking about how they've come so far and how Raavi had been the one to support this relationship alone for the longest time. Which needs to change now.

The song is quite lovely and it fit so well. <3333

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Ritu🤗!!!! MAAAFIIII Chahiye Humein! 😭😭😭

But that aside, commenting properly on any fic after the longest time!!! And I'm not sure where to start right now....

Cuddling is such a personal thing, isn't it? Something to be very shy about, especially for those people who are already reserved.. I can count on one hand the number of times I've voluntarily cuddled with someone ever since I've understood what a personal thing it is.

And to cuddle up to someone who's asleep? To know that you not only have the right to touch them in their moments of vulnerability, but also the permission to do so? That's a weakness all on its own, the unsure nature of such a thing.....

You already know I haven't been keeping up with the episodes, both thanks to my busy schedule and my own disinterest in a few of the recent tracks of the show. But I cannot help but compare this Shiva to the Shiva right after their first wedding.

There, he was letting her take her pound of flesh out of him, letting her hurt him and hurt herself as well. And here all his thoughts are about healing them. THEM, as a single entity. There, he did not feel free enough to be true to his heart with his words, but here, he feels free enough to let his body, his very soul speak out the desires of his heart, no matter that it's to a sleeping Raavi.

Shiva has come a long long way! But he has a longer distance to cover yet.... Both in the paths of redemption, and that of love.

Love,

Sathya.... ❤️

PS Forgive me if my thoughts sound unorganised, because it's a bit difficult to put together a long comment after so long... 😆

Comment womment gaya bhaad mein...tell me this first....WHO DID YOU CUDDLE WITH AND WHEN??!!!

Mammaa needs the details. Not leaving you. Ye aise kaise humko nahi pata hai?

#PartialityHuiHai

Andolan nikaaloooo.

Anyway...I missed you yk? Still want you to read the TS you helped me through though but okayyy baby steps yeahhh. I am not even going to begin with the cuddling we've been very...er...VOCAL...about it. Supreme. With the fantasies and wants and that's IG stuff but the realest shizz ever.

Humko pata hai hum kis baare me baat kar rhe hain. 😆

He has a LONG wayyy to go but it is starting. Step by step. ❤️

Originally posted by: Nicky-nish

Ritu this is so pyara

You have penned down his thoughts so beautifully

This is the Shiva we all want to see...The one who put Raavi above all. Protect her from all the evils of the world. ❤️

Shiva thanking his stars (which he should)❤️

The cuddling part was 😳 this is what we all are looking forward to 😆

And the song just enhanced the beauty of this.❤️

Loved it.

Awww Thanks Nishtha ❤️

Manifesting a cuddle but milega tu hai nhi kuch...tho likh hi liya ab 😆

Glad you liked it.

Originally posted by: Gadbad_Ghotala

This was a treat ngl. Shiva Pandya in its truest sense. And everything about it screamed pure love thanks for this ✨ Also, I have the song in the background while i read this and it came off too creepy and horror movie vibes more than romantic. (Male version)

The words are really cute but the score is scary or its just me because I'm watching a lot of ghore.

Also, aise likhte reh 🥳

You're welcome Roch. I am glad this wasn't such a tedious affair LMAO. Shortest piece I've written ever. 😆❤️

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Comment womment gaya bhaad mein...tell me this first....WHO DID YOU CUDDLE WITH AND WHEN??!!!

Mammaa needs the details. Not leaving you. Ye aise kaise humko nahi pata hai?

#PartialityHuiHai

Andolan nikaaloooo.

Anyway...I missed you yk? Still want you to read the TS you helped me through though but okayyy baby steps yeahhh. I am not even going to begin with the cuddling we've been very...er...VOCAL...about it. Supreme. With the fantasies and wants and that's IG stuff but the realest shizz ever.

Humko pata hai hum kis baare me baat kar rhe hain. 😆

He has a LONG wayyy to go but it is starting. Step by step. ❤️

Ok, first up? I've missed you tooooooooo!!!!!!! 🤗

Next up? Abey! Cuddling with best friends!!! That kind of thing! Guys and girls, but all friends only. I've cuddled up in bed with girl best friends after horror films because that's the kind of scaredy cat I am. And guy best friends are just hugs and shit.

Juicy content does not exist in my life Ritu. Does not. 🤪🤣

Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Ok, first up? I've missed you tooooooooo!!!!!!! 🤗

Next up? Abey! Cuddling with best friends!!! That kind of thing! Guys and girls, but all friends only. I've cuddled up in bed with girl best friends after horror films because that's the kind of scaredy cat I am. And guy best friends are just hugs and shit.

Juicy content does not exist in my life Ritu. Does not. 🤪🤣

Classic move of 'garam kar ke thanda chhod diya' 😭🤣🤣🤣

Main tho khush ho gyi thi ki abhi Sathya aayegi, batayegi, Masala ayega meri zindagi mein thoda. Tune movie night se sab pr paani daal diya. 🤔

But at least you've had that lol. I haven't even had movie nights with anyone. Except for myself. YEAAHHH. We real sad in IRL. If that wasn't already established.

I still miss you. But I also want myself to get busy and have a purpose so that I can also be busy. Makes sense??

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Classic move of 'garam kar ke thanda chhod diya' 😭🤣🤣🤣

Main tho khush ho gyi thi ki abhi Sathya aayegi, batayegi, Masala ayega meri zindagi mein thoda. Tune movie night se sab pr paani daal diya. 🤔

But at least you've had that lol. I haven't even had movie nights with anyone. Except for myself. YEAAHHH. We real sad in IRL. If that wasn't already established.

I still miss you. But I also want myself to get busy and have a purpose so that I can also be busy. Makes sense??

Definitely makes sense! Being busy gives a sense of self satisfaction that nothing else gives.... 😆❤️

Originally posted by: VNuts

Loved it! So much & so little of everything I wanted. I'll write a saner, longer comment when I'm awake. ❤️

And I finally managed to write what I wanted to. 😆

Though repetitive, this bears saying that I loved the whole piece, Ritu. ❤️

Likhti reh. 😉

Finally read it 😆

Ritu the way u play with words to show the deepest inner emotions of shiva no one can the way u penned down their shadi milap one was voicing it loud through her face while other remained wordless both somehow got binded to same destiny and road to travel

shiva acknowleding how raavi was always by his side bachpan se never bowed down against his anger and that he acknowledged her efforts to keep this shadi and all her efforts to fight till end 💖💯

Shiva being true chipkali can't maintain inch gap btwn them hayyeee☺️ and the cuddles has all my heart ❤️

Finally promising himself to protect and most importantly to trust her yes yes yes yehi shiva to chahiye show me she needs to be protected her innocence needs to be protected from whole world she is something to be cherished forever

Loved the drabble 💜💜