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Originally posted by: Ocean_breeze

Raha nahi gya Ritu se... Likh hi daala😆

I have said this earlier too saying this again... I absolutely love the way you present the inner monologues... So deep, sooo meaningful and sooo very beautiful just like a rhytmic poetry. Absolutely loved shiva's introspection.. From their first forced marriage... How raavi's emotional state was then to now.. Them being in this life long commitment willingly. Shiva acknowledging raavi's sufferings ,her dedication towards their relation and his determination to be raavi's protective shield , to love and cherish her forever has my heart.❤️

Protective shiva is my favourite...Imagine him always being there for raavi against the whole world

Pighal jana hai maine🙈This is the shiva we all stan. I wish to see this side of shiva now likee forever in the show.. Always keeping raavi as his priority. It was soooo beautiful to visualize shivi like that... And yes.. That was your writing that enhances and uplifts the scenarios.

That cuddling is what we are living for... Right😆

Lyrics at background just enhanced the whole set up soooo much..❤️

I tend to ramble a LOT. Lmao glad you like it though. Works out.

I really wanted to include his feelings about the first marriage...It was kind of skipped altogether in the show. Wanted to explore that. This is him promising to himself that he'd protect her no matter what.

Thank you so much for reading 🤗❤️

Originally posted by: majoni03

So beautiful❤️.. I really loved it

Thank you SO MUCH ❤️🤗

Originally posted by: LizzieBennet

Ahh a song fic! You excel at these.

I have no idea what's happening in the show so I don't know how this fulfils canon but it's (as always) beautifully written.

I can tell you've chosen your words with care, so your prose almost ends up being poetic. I'm glad that this is from Shiva's PoV because I think it was needed.

One thing that stood out to me is Shiva feeling brave when Raavi is asleep, it's such a wonderful thought, and you really seem to have delved deep into this character.

Sorry, I really enjoyed it but I can't think of what else to say other than it's beautiful and poignant. Also, because I'm feeling extremely vulnerable and attacked and defensive right now so not the best frame of mind for an objective review.

Aaahhhhh you're kind. I get by through song fics...somehow. But also there are just SO MANY SONGS in my brain I can't seem to stop. 😆

@bold : THIS. This is why I love you. It was something I felt went naturally with his stance where Raavi was concerned and the fact that you picked it up is all the validation I need.❤️

Take care bubsoooooo. We stan u. We Love u. 🤗

Originally posted by: VNuts

Loved it! So much and so little of everything I wanted. I'll write a saner, longer comment when I'm awake. ❤️

🤡💔

Originally posted by: firsttimehere

Amazing 🤩

That's what my idea of Shiva would be feeling for Raavi too .you put them into words so well. let's just hope show Wala is half as good as this one .

This one is going to be one of my comfort stories for a re-read 😊

Thank you for the tag ☺️

Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked it! I didn't want to take any risk with the show's creativity...wrote the cuddling myself since 95% wanted it lol. ❤️😆

@bold : You making me blush 😳

Originally posted by: Paru95

THIS...THIS IS WHAT I HAVE BEEN CRAVING FOR

This PASSION☺️This ARDOUR🔥 This LOVE♥️

THIS SHIVAAAA😳

Totally in LOVE with this Ritu🤗

Paruuuuu 🤗❤️

Thank you so muchhhhh. I missed you on my last piece. 😒❤️

Originally posted by: Odette_delusion

It was damn elegant♥️♥️

Just loved it🤩🤩

Thank you so muchhhh ❤️

Originally posted by: EuphoricDamsel.

Aaahhhhh you're kind. I get by through song fics...somehow. But also there are just SO MANY SONGS in my brain I can't seem to stop. 😆

@bold : THIS. This is why I love you. It was something I felt went naturally with his stance where Raavi was concerned and the fact that you picked it up is all the validation I need.❤️

Take care bubsoooooo. We stan u. We Love u. 🤗

Aww love you too!

Come support me on the Bridgerton chat, our babe Kate got attacked and it feels personal

Originally posted by: mpks1

Ritu AMAZING! 😍

Didn’t expect to read Shiva’s POV and his thoughts on what happened and how it happened to him❤️

This is what happens when you are not very vocal with your thoughts unlike Raavi, who screams from the roof top that she is in love with Shiva.

You have started with their first marriage, their union at that time was not that of two hearts or souls but two human beings forced to be together due to circumstances.
After a year things have changed so much between them and the grit with which Raavi pursued him, never letting go or giving up is commendable.

Now coming back to his emotions, Girl you have a way with words👏 You have beautifully depicted his thoughts about what Raavi means to him, how they got here and what all Raavi had to do to get them here and the things she endured at the hands of Suman, Mami and Anita😕

Shiva Pandya is not the catch that he was projected to be, instead that he got the catch, Raavi Pandya, who is Somnath’s sabse sundar ladki inside out. Shiva Pandya is indeed lucky to have married Raavi Shiva Pandya ❤️

Is it too much to ask for Raavi’s POV now? 😆

I haven't written a drabble from Shiva's POV yet this time it just felt apt. Specially when Raavi has been so vocal about her feelings. I wanted to keep the first marriage thoughts in it, for two reasons, firstly I felt they could have been shown a little more in the show and secondly it gives a then-and-now feel to it. Progression.

@bold : Imma go cryyyyy y'all so kind I can't ❤️❤️😭

@bold : Ye tho maine socha hi nahi lol...😆...but anyway...dekhte hain...I do have SONGS in mind. Obviously. Uski koi kami nahi hai bilkul bhi...tho ho skta hai kabhi aaye aage jeevan mein. Hehe.

PS : I am missing you in the Part 2 of TS...😒💔

Originally posted by: Kfof

Very Beautifully Written ❤️

Thanks a lot!!! 🤗❤️