| ShiVi DRABBLE : Aye Meri Zindagi |

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Heyyyya Lovelies!!


I have no idea what I've done or what this is. Literally No clue. Nada, Zilch. 🥲🥲

Pixie wanted cuddling and I wanted cuddling and half the fandom wanted cuddling so I decided to give us cuddling. Simple. 🤣


'Saaya' is one of those underrated movies with a criminally underrated album that needs to be popularised ASAP. No kidding. Even though I LOVE the female version sung by 19 year old Shreya Ghoshal, this male version of the same song made the perfect fit to portray Shiva's side of the story about how he feels right now, in that particular moment having his wife in his arms. Visited this album completely by accident today.

So I whipped this up quickly within an hour and a half with no plan or vision or proofreading whatsoever. There are HIGH chances this was a snooze fest and I know it but still be kind y'all if you can. LMAO. 🥱🥱😴


Special thanks to @Spdp Dee for confirming my two min Wikipedia research I did for one line. 🐥🤭😆


Lots of love,

Ritu.❤️



PS : I like long comments... So awaiting bhar bhar ke bejjati in lambe akshars. 🤓🥲

Edited by EuphoricDamsel. - 3 years ago
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Unn Pulaao Shishtars Ka Spot Jinse main Bht Naraaz Hoon. ☢️





#YeActiveDikhteHainSirfHainNahi🤔

Edited by EuphoricDamsel. - 3 years ago
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The song used for the piece above...Personally Shreya Ghoshal's version is the DONE THING for me but both are terrific!!! ❤️


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Euv8CPsZcTU


https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=j0ZwVpUOY2E

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Awwwiee ❤️

Thoughtful protective shiva pandya lost in the innocence of his lovely wife while cuddled to her and regretting his actions ? Making a silent promise to trust and protect her? Yess please. The perfect first night

this was beautiful ritu ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Maine bola tha na OS hai, I'm very good at decoding surprises. Ab padhne ja rhi

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aaye ho meri zindagi me tum bahar banke

Laaye ho pyare posts, tum bhar bhar ke.


Shiva adoring his wife silently, recalling the first marriage memories, promising her a forever, realising his mistakes, cuddling. My heart wasn't ready for so much love. This is the kind of actual romance I wish to see in their lives. ❤️❤️❤️

The way you frame the sentences to describe the situation and emotions are way too good Ritu❤️

Or ye ewwsurprise nhi awwwsurprise tha smjhi

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Tagging for the piece! 🤗❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Oh Shiva’s inner feelings ❤️❤️

It’s beautiful how you showed his regret, guilt, happiness but all with a sense of peace because he had her cuddling beside him.

He knows she knows him the most, the way she endured everything. The cuddle, an innocent sleeping raavi, just pouting with his disturbing

You help me visualise the whole scene and my heart is so full ❤️

I’ve said this before, but you definitely should write more, it’s beautiful ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Raha nahi gya Ritu se... Likh hi daala😆

I have said this earlier too saying this again... I absolutely love the way you present the inner monologues... So deep, sooo meaningful and sooo very beautiful just like a rhytmic poetry. Absolutely loved shiva's introspection.. From their first forced marriage... How raavi's emotional state was then to now.. Them being in this life long commitment willingly. Shiva acknowledging raavi's sufferings ,her dedication towards their relation and his determination to be raavi's protective shield , to love and cherish her forever has my heart.❤️


Protective shiva is my favourite...Imagine him always being there for raavi against the whole world

Pighal jana hai maine🙈This is the shiva we all stan. I wish to see this side of shiva now likee forever in the show.. Always keeping raavi as his priority. It was soooo beautiful to visualize shivi like that... And yes.. That was your writing that enhances and uplifts the scenarios.

That cuddling is what we are living for... Right😆

Lyrics at background just enhanced the whole set up soooo much..❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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So beautiful❤️.. I really loved it

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