FROM ANOTHER WORLD (part I- pg 3) updated - Page 2

Originally posted by: sahapallavi

Woww interesting i m all in for it 😍😍

Originally posted by: Luvs_SanIsh

🤩Very intrigued…..can’t wait to read more….especially your version of Raavi

Hope so you like this Raavi.........

Interesting story

Patiently waiting for the next update

Originally posted by: Manasa09

Interesting story

Patiently waiting for the next update

Hope so your wait is worth it......

PART-l

Once again Raavi was humilated. She was thrown out of her so called house by her so called in laws who have failed to trust her she was asked to prove her innocence.

She looked at man in front of him who was looking straight in her eyes after throwing her out. Yes she was on the street her.suitcase sprawled all over the street all the people were whispering about her probably about her fault only. And the man in front do not have even a least amount of pain for her.......

She looked at him pleadingly and the whole family stood behind him as she was garbage in the house and finally is removed. Everyone had different expression on their faces some were disgusted by her some were having hatred seeping through there eyes. She can't bear.

She looked at suman and she ordered,

"Nikal.jaa yahan se....... Mere saamne aane ki jaroorat nahi hain tujhe...... Jabse aayi hai khushiyoon ko grahan laga diya hai...........

Jiska khud ka parivaar na ho usse kya hi umeed kar sakte hain......

Chalo sab andar..........."

Everyone moved inside and Raavi looked at Shiva and Shiva closed tge door and said unexpected,

"Maa sahi kehti hain......

Mami ki parvarish hai na tu toh rang toh aayega hi naa.........

Tu yeh pariwaar ,pyaar aur khushiyaan dono deserve nahi karti.......... Aur abb mujhe apna muh mat dikhana..........."

Raavi was numb. She was not able to figure out anything. She doesn't deserve anything this is what she got...... This is what a reward is for loving someone...... First being left at the altar and got humilation and this time too left in the middle of the road again like a broken mess.

Shiva has gone inside the house. Now the crowd whispers became more audible. Everyone was talking about Raavi is not a fine girl as she has been thrown out twice now.

She can't handle her hands shivered while she collected her clothes in the suitcase and locked it. Her tears flowing continuously she was sobbing her full body shivering.

She was just feeling like a show which everyone was gossiping about. she had only one place her massi's house to the ladies who had nothing just to do with her one just wants to take revenge and other just swoons on a married man. She woke up and she dared to look at everyone all the whispers stopped seeing her in this disheveled state her clothes full of dirt, her hairs scattered, her swollen eyes anyone can predict that she was no less than a parched soul. Everyone went back to their works after having a fine entertainment of a innocent girl who was exploited yet again. Raavi stood there as everyone left. She dragged her suitcase while moving her eyes loooked at a lady 40 to 45 years of age who was Looking at her intently. Raavi looked at her but her suitcase imbalanced and she hold it and when she looked back she was not there.

Raavi headed towards the next stop........ Probably it was just a next stop as she has long ago realised that she has no home. Raavi entered the house. With a sight where prafulla and anita were giggling and were all happy. The whole somnaath had witnessed her great rejection but her own family members were here they didn't even came once and asked her about how she was after getting abducted and almost on the verge of being trafficked. What she can expect as her own husband who has seen the people forcing her has forgot to ask her well being and throwed her out.

She came inside and prafulla noticed her. Prafulla bombarded her with questions and anita didn't budge as if Raavi was at fault doing all this embryo kaand.

Raavi looked at prafulla and said,

"Massi maa rehne dijiye......... anita dii khush hai....... Mere hone na hone se kya farak padta hai....... "

Prafulla said,

"Ae raavi..... Kya bol rahi hai tu..... Mere liye teri khushi mAyne rakhti ......."

she leaves for her room without answering and prafulla stays there looking at her and anita says,

"Thoda der roo legi fir wapas pehle jaisi ho jayegi.. . .. . . Vese bhi apka kaam toh hogya hai na.. . .. . . "

Prafulla nods and sits with anita eating something.

Here Raavi was sitting on the floor head rested on the railing of the balcony crouching at the corner. Recollecting whole day and whole day flashed in front of her how shive throwed her out and a lone tear escaped her eyes.

Yadaan teriyaan aaundiyan

Hanju lai lai ke

Roney aa si kalle

Raati oss chand thalle

Beh beh ke

Raavi's heart was aching. Face of shiva having hatred for her was flashing in front of her.

Tere bina dil dhadakda nai eh

Tere baajo dil lagda nai

Roi jaave seene de vich beh ke

Sohn teri dil sukda nai eh

"Pyaar toh tha na..........fir kyon thukraya............kio aise beizzat kiya mujhe......... Pichli baar ki tarah iss baar bhi na socha na samjha bass kar diya............pucha bhi nahi ikk baar............"

Tujhe bhi pataa

Mujhe bhi pataa

Yeh jo bhi hain

Dil ki hain ghaltiya

Raavi remebers all the moments shiva has pushed her. Sawan puja, kawar yatra, gaumbi's room making and everything. She can't stop her tears she rolls down as a ball hugging ger knees closer tu her.

Hum hai beqasoor ho gaye door door

Mar na jaayein vichhode seh seh ke

Yadan teriyan aandiyan hanju le le ke

Yadan teriyan aandiyan hanju le le ke

"Yeh samay.. . .. . Yeh jagah yeh sab galat hai shiva.... . .. . . Hum yahan kabhi ikk nahi ho sakte.. . .. . . Jitna bhi chahe kareeb aane ki koshish kare kuch na kuch ho hi jata hai.. . .. . . Kuch galatiyaan maine kii toh kuch tune kii...........hum ikk dusre kii hathon ki lakeeron mein toh aa gaye par shayad ikk dusre ke dil mein nahi aa paye........."

Humein jo mile

Yeh jo faasle

Marzi nahi humaari Rab ke hain faisle

Haathon ki laqeer jo mod leti Heer

Ranjha aata nai khayalon mein reh reh ke

Yaadan teriyaan aandiyan hanju le le ke

Yadaan teriyaan aundiyan..

"Maine tujhe waise apna liya jaisa tu hai.. . .. . . Par shayad tu mujh mein hamesha dhara dii ki parchayi dhundhta raha.. . .. . . Aur jab jab main usss parchayi ko chod Raavi banti.. . .. Tab tab tu mujhe dur karta gya.. . .. . . Pyaar yeh hota hai kya.. . .. . .. . Pta nahi kio itna sab kuch hone ke baad bhi dil maan hi nahi raha ki tujhse nafrat karu.. . .. . Par shayad teri nafrat mere liye kam nahi hogi kabhi........"

Tere bina dil dhadakda nai eh

Tere baajo dil laggda nai

Roi jaave seene de vich beh ke

Sonh teri dil sukda nai aundi aa..

Hanju le le ke..

Raavi cries thinking of her fateful life which never have brought hapiness to her.

Broken........ Broken is what she felt. Whenever she was shattered she has Picked up the pieces and joined the jigsaw she always have come back but little did anyone know everytime when she came back a part of her was left behind probably which was essence of her..........yes she has left behind essence was her being but no one noticed. Who the hell even care about it how much a incomplete jigsaw is weak and can shatter anytime but still everyone keep on pricking it.......

And now again her pieces were scattered in front of her but this time she was not able to recollect them. They were scattered far enough in such a way as they are also tired of getting attached to an incomplete story of an incomplete being.

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Will try to update next part soonish.. . .. . .. .

Yours

ODETTE_DELUSION

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Wowww this is so so interesting😍😍😍eager to know what will happen nxt💖💖

Originally posted by: sahapallavi

Wowww this is so so interesting😍😍😍eager to know what will happen nxt💖💖

Will update soonish.......

Raavi🥺🥺

Though I know you have something interesting planned for this but damn this update was 💔💔

A pure soul like Raavi doesn't deserve this.

Very very well written emotion of her ❤️❤️❤️❤️