FROM ANOTHER WORLD (part I- pg 3) updated

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hey guys, yesterday i was reading a novel based on paranormic activities which attracted me a lot on it. So i thought why not to pen down something like that for Shivi actually Raavi. Because i think Raavi is the most parched soul in this story.

Here you go hope so you like it.

Here is the prologue.

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Raavi was feeling uncomfortable and restless she can't handle out more shit so she just wanted to spare sometime from all the hell and she moved to the somnath riverside.

She sat there deep in her thoughts when she saw a middle aged lady of almost 40 to 45 years was struggling with her shopping bag. She was about to fall when Raavi went near and hold her hand which was free and than said,


"Dhyan se........... Main apki madad kar deti hoon..... "


The lady look at Raavi and than at her hand which Raavi was holding she looks at Raavi seriously and says in a serioud tone.


"Bhut akeli lag rahi ho beta........ "


Raavi looks at her and says fumbling and smiles a little,


"Aisa kuch nahi hai.. . .. . .. . "


Lady says,


"Akele log hamesha apna akelapan ikk muskurahat ke peeche chupa lete hain.. . .. . .. . "


Raavi tries to removes her hand but she grabs it and says,


"Tumhare rom rom mein akelapan, ikk khalish c hain jo ki tum chupakar ghum rahi ho.........

Koii bhi nahi janta tumhara dard tumhara dukh..........

Abhi jinhe tum apna manti ho na vo log tumhe na toh samjhate hain aur na hi tumhare apne hain yeh toh jaan chuki ho abb apne apno ko pehchaan bhi lo...............

Kisi din tumhare apno se milaongi tumhe.......

Jaroor aana..........."


She leaves Raavi's hand and give her a paper and Raavi looks at it,


"ANIMA NIZBAT ALI"

Connection to souls


And at other side address of her was written.

Raavi looked at her side where she was standing but she was nowherr to be seen.


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This was tge prologue of the story hope so you like it.. . .. .

Will continue it soon.. . .. . .. .


Yours

ODETTE_DELUSION


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Posted: 3 years ago
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Intriguing

Waiting for next part

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Originally posted by: VaishnaviG

Intriguing

Waiting for next part

stay tuned..........

Will update soonish.......

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Interesting! Will look forward to reading this one.... ❤️

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Originally posted by: Pottermeow

Interesting! Will look forward to reading this one.... ❤️

thanks for reading.........

Hope so you will like it........

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Sounds interesting 😍

Excited to read more of this one.

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very fresh concept👏

love the line "Akele log hamesha apna akelapan ikk muskurahat ke peeche chupa lete hain.. . .. . .. .".......💖💖so relatable.......

looking forward 👍👍

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Originally posted by: Nicky-nish

Sounds interesting 😍

Excited to read more of this one.

thanks for reading 📖

Will update soonish........

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: virangna2005

very fresh concept👏

love the line "Akele log hamesha apna akelapan ikk muskurahat ke peeche chupa lete hain.. . .. . .. .".......💖💖so relatable.......

looking forward 👍👍

thanks virangana.............

Will update soon

Hope so you like it till end........

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Woww interesting i m all in for it 😍😍

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